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zora guse vich bahar chala geya .zora apne dosta di tahani vich chala geya .us de kai behlad yaar satth ch baithe c.

Ruldu:oh tu kiwen afriya firda aa.

Kirpala:oh ruldu eh lagda bachni budi kol gala khaa ke aiyabaa.

Ruldu:namiya eh sala kuwara hi maru lagda.

Zora:saliyo bakwas na mari jayo.awen behle sale amli ...

Nama:22 guse kahnu hunda .asi ta yaar aa tere .

Zora:oh nahi cahidi yaari tuhadi.makhol banunde aa mera.

Ruldu:zoriya kuch v kar le parsini tere hatth nahi auni....ohh eni sohni ..te tu kithe kala naag.

Ruldu da ena kehna hi c ki...zora jehra pehla hi bahut guse ch c.ua ne ruldu nu gardan toh fadd liya.

Sab us nu chudaan lag paye.par zora ta pehla hi parshen c.bachni diya gala ne ta us da para pehla hi vdaiya hoiya c.

Naama:oh chad yr.

Zora:ehdi himatt kida hoi sale di parsini vare kehan di.

Ruldu:teri saliya behan lagdi aa.main ta kahunga.

Jinha nu hune alag kita c.fer ik duje na gutham gutthi ho gaye.

Fer naame te kirpale ne alag kita.te zore nu utth jaan lai keha.

Zora:dekh lu tenu saliya .

Ruldu:ja chaliya ja.parsini sambh ni hundi.bada aiya mainu dekhan wala.

Kirpale ne ik pase zore nu fadiya hoiya c tr.naame ne ruldu nu..

Zora:kapdr jhad da hoiya(oh chad mainu) dekh lu eni kise hor din

zora uttho fufu karda guse na bhariya uttho chaliya geya.

Udahar bachni mohne nu gala kad rahi c ki is kanjar zore nu jada ghar na auan diya kar.kise din eh kuch nawa chand chaad jauga.

Bachni:daff honiya sawere sawere daru dafan lag janada aa.eh zora chandra ik din sara kuch lutt ke le ju.


Mohnaa:chup kar ja .khae painiye.bahuta na boli ja.

Bachni:apni maa diya khasma ...tu daffi ja....

Ene nu parsino v utth ke bahar aa gayi.us ne vekhiya ki maa te piyo apas vich lad rahe ne .us nu pata c ki bapu daru pinda huna te bebe lad rahi huni aa..

Parsino:maa kahto ladd rahi aa..tu utahiya nahi mainu.school v jaana v main.

Mohnaa:rehan de school schaal.kam te jaiya kar apni maa nal.

Bachni chule duwale baithi.roti bnaun lagi hoi c.bahr vehre vich ik kachi mitti di rasoi jahi c.

Bachni:aaho .tenu daru mil jawe dafan nu hor.

Parsino : rehan de maa kyu boldi aa..

Mohnaa:aah meri dhiii bahut siyani aah.

Parsino : bapu tu v bahuti daru na piya kar.

Mohnaa : le dhiye main kithe pinda eh ta zora de janda .

Bachni:aaho oh marzana muh chuk aa janda.

Ene nu bahra darwaza khadk piya .parsino darwaza kholan gayi.ta sahmne sucha kahad c..mohne de yr.

Sucha:main keha mohniya ghar hi aa.


Mohna :aaho aaho lang aa.andar hi aa.darwaze toh haka mari jayenga.

Parsino:mattha tek di aa chacha ...

Sucha:jiundi reh dhiye.sat shri akal bhabi..

Bachni:thik aa thik aa.aa geya tu v.

Sucha:kahto gusee hundi rehndi aa bhabi .

Bachni:jaan de ve.bohta na matta de mainu apna kam kar

Mohnaa :oh tu rehan de ede muh na lag.parsino putt ja chache layi galasi le aa.

Bachni:khabardar je meri dhi nu kuch liyan layi keha.

Sucha:oh bhabi garam kahto hundi aa das .main le aunda aa.

Parsino.maa main v ja ke naah awaan.fer school layi v lait ho jaana.

Bachni:changa putt ja aa..

Sucha parsino di piyo de umar da hi c.par us akh parsino te bahut maili c..parsino guslkhane vich kapde le ke chali gayi..sucha v galsi lain de bahane .us ne aule duwale vekhiya te .oh v guslkhane wal chal piya.eh us da pehli vaar nahi c.us ne pehla v kai vaar ajeha kita c.oh parsino nu nangi nahundi nu vekh chuka c.kyu ki jidar bachni te mohna baitha c.us de pichle pase rasoi c.te udhar hi guslkhana c.

Parsino ne guslkhane de darwaze da parda sutt dita.darwaz hai nahi c.te ik kapda hi latak reha c darwaze te.

Sucha holi holi pair rakhda gyslkhane kol pahunchiya.us ne darwaze to halka jeha parda chukiya ta parsino di pitth c us wal.parsino ne sutt di kani fadi te zempar nu upar chuk laah dita.

Suche sahmne hun parsino di nangi pitth c.te kale rang di braa di patti .hun parsino ne salwar da nada khoan lagi.te us ne nada khol dita.te us di salwar thale paira vich.

Suche da lun thaa upar wal farate mar reha c.parsino di motte motte chitad 36 .koi v dekh ke pagal ho jawe.sucha apne lun nu fadd reha c .ik dam mohne di awaz ayi.

Mohna:oh bhen deni diya.kithe mar geya saliya.galsi nahi labhi.

Sucha:kakh na rahe saliya tera .haje sab kuch vekhna c.

Sucha uttho unha pairi muf galsi le ke mohne wal chal piya.


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Congrts noor ji 4 New story..


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Thanks ji likhde ta tusi v bahut sohna hai.is vaar kuvh hatt ke te alag jeha likhan di kosis kiti hai.

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Wow noor sis great update nd great story.....phli var kujh diffrent pdhn nu mileya ethe
Thannks reet is vaar kuch alag likhan nu dil kita .bt tu writer mere toh v jada vadiya aa.

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Vohat sohni imagination in ur story. Proper pendu touch love it to read. Waiting nxt update
Thanks kavita.sis meri kosis hundi aa jad v story likhdi aa ik alag jahi kahani likhdi hundi aa.

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noor mam wiating nxt update......jaldi karo....
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