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sahi keh rahi hai reet. readers de story tey comment vohat he jyada hausla dindey ne writer nu hor changa sohna tey detail ch likhan nu . story paran nu una time nai lagda jina likhan nu lagda hai readers da ek comment usnu vohat jyada motivate kar dinda hai detailed ch proper scene likhan layi. ek appreciation hundi hai write layi readers de comments. es layi kosis karo comment jarur karo, nahi tan writer nu lagda hai o changi story nai likh riha , tey aksar adhvichkar he story chad dinda hai. esi layi vohat sarean changean punjabi stories advichkar he rukea payean ne. so kosis karo j koi story or update changa lagda hai tan comment jarur karo ek akhar da. baki meri gal da mind na kareo, jini der likhan ch maja anda rahega jarur likhdi rahangi, baki tunhanu pata he hona duniya ch sab emotional writers he hundey ne , so comments karkey hausla dindey raho

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Sham de 7 k vajj rhe c te reet verma aunty de ghare bethi uncle da haal chal puch rhi c 'ki hal a uncle'
Uncle ne reet nu dekh muskurake jwab ditta 'thik a putt tu das'
Reet ohna kol bethdi hoi boli 'main ta thik a aunty dasde c tusi bimar ho'
Uncle ne tv di volume holi krde hoye keha 'nhi putt ohnu ta ewe laggi jnda a'
Reet boli 'lai kine dina ton tusi dikhe v ni'
Uncle bole 'koi gal ni putt tu milan aagi ajj bas ho jna thik'
Reet uncle di gal sun hass pai te fer oh uthke nishu kol chali gai. Nishu dekhn nu kafi sohni c te sareer pakho jiwe diya shehra diya laaliya hundiya ne owe di hi c. Fast food khake usne apne mamme te bund umar nalo kujh jada hi bhari kar lai c par usda pet bilkul nahi c is karke dekhn nu bhut sexy lagdi c. School ch kafi munde usde magar c par usne aje tak kise nu ghaa nahi payi c. Reet ne usde kamre ch jake usde aggo book chakde hoye keha 'oh madam kde khed v lye kr tu'
Reet nu samne dekh nishu ikdam khush ho gai te reet de gale mildi hoi boli 'wow reet di ki haal ne tuhade'
Reet usde nal bed te bethdi hoi boli 'main ta thik a tu das kiwe chaldi study'
Nishu boli 'ikdam perfect'
Reet ne usnu chhedan de andaz nal keha 'aashiqi kiwe chaldi a fer'
Nishu ne bnawti gussa dikhkonde hoye jwab ditta 'ki a didi eho je kam ni mnu change lagde'
Reet ne usdi gori gall nu pattde hoye keha 'bas kar mnu sara pata es umar ch nu hi langi main'
Nishu aggo muskurake boli 'ehda matlab tusi v kiti aashiqi fer'
Hun reet kol usdi gal da koi jwab nahi c te oh nishu nu ghoordi hoi boli 'padh lai behke aayi smjh'
Fer dowe muskuraun laggiya te reet ne thodi der hor ohna kol beth galbat kiti te fer vapis apne flat ch aa gai te dinner krke neend de aagosh ch gwach gai.
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"Hune-2 khabar mili a ki matka chonk te shaant mayi tareeke nal kisana vallon ditte jaa rhe dharne te police walo lathicharge kita gya. Police walo hoye is lathicharge vich kujh kisaan jakhmi ho gye te kujh nu gambheer satta v laggiya han te jiwe tusi apni tv screen te dekh skde ho ki is jhadap dauraan kiwe kujh kisana diya pagga v lath gaiya te ohna de sira ch v dande mare gye. Aayo gal krde han DSP randhawa ji nal te jaan de han ki a es mamle da asli sach"
Robin ne camera DSP val kita te reet ne swaal puchya 'Randhawa saab tusi ki kehna chahoge jo v ethe hoya us bare'
Dsp bolya 'dekho ji sanu khabar mili c ki kujh shararti ansar kisana nal mile hoye ne te oh matka chonk ton dhanra chuk ke CM di kothi agge dharna den lai kisana nu uksaa rhe c is lai sanu eh karwai karni payi'
Reet ne agge puchya 'par ik do shararti ansra lai tusi kine hi bekasoor kisana utte lathicharge kar ditta kitho tak jayaz a eh gal'
DSP bolya 'dekho nirdosh kisana da ilaaz free krwon lai sarkaar ne phla hi elaan kr ditta a so media nu meri gujarish a es mamle nu vadda na banao'
Ena kehnda hoya DSP otho chala geya te robin ne camera reet agge kita te oh bolan laggi "eh san DSP randhawa ehna da kehna a ki kujh shararti ansar jo mahol khrab kar rhe c ohna te kabu paun lai eh lathi charge krna peya te jakhmi hoye kisana da muft ilaaz krwon da aaswashn v ditta a eh ta oh gal hoi ....api phla jakham ditte der aapi hath malam fda ditti.... Camera man robin gupta de nal main reet deol DTC news chandigarh"
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Reet te robin puri team nal ajj opposition party "Janta Dal" de ik MLA de sarkari niwas te pujj chuke san kiunki ajj usdi interview c. Sara set lgaya geya te fer MLA di sarkari niwas vich bne garden ch do sofeya te reet te MLA natha singh beth gye te interview shuru kiti gai.
Reet ne bolna shuru kita "sat shri akal dosto main tuhadi host te dost Reet deol ajj tuhanu milaun jaa rhi han "Janta Dal" de MLA Natha singh ji nal aayo jaande han ohna de vichar....sat shri akal natha singh ji sabh ton phla ta tuhada swagat a DTC News ch te sabh ton phla swal ho mere jehan andar a oh eh a ki nirdosh kisana te jo lathicharge hoya ki oh jaruri c'
Natha singh bolya 'dekho ji eh "Lok bhalai Party" da kam a janta nal dhokha krna shuru ton eda hi karde aye a te hun v ohi kita a ehna ne kisan bdi shaanti nal sabh kujh kar rhe c par ehna ne police bhejke othe lathicharge karwa ditta sadi sarkar hundi ta jarur kisana diya dukh takleefa nu sundi'
Reet agge boli 'par sir jdo tuhadi sarkar c os wele v kisana te bhut lathicharge hoye odo tusi ki kita'
Natha singh boleya 'dekho main mannda sade time v eh sabh hoya par asi apne sare vaade v pure keete'
Reet thoda muskurai te boli 'kehde vaade sir kisaan ta ajj v khudkushi kar reha a tusi kehnde ho sare vaade pure kar ditte'
Natha singh ne jwab ditta 'dekho ji kisan jekar khuskushi kar reha a ta usda karan ajj di sarkar a sade wele kisaani khushaal c'
Reet apne kol pya paper pad di hoi boli 'par mere kol jo aankde ne ohta aakhde ne tuhadi sarkar wele jada khudkushiya hoiya ne'
Natha singh thoda sochda hoya bolya 'dekho ki kisana ne kharche e bhut vadha lye ne mehngiya gaddiya mehnge ghar viaha te anna kharach je eh sabh kroge ta fer karza ga sir chaduga hi'
Reet agge usnu gherdi hoi boli 'par tusi ki chaunde ho ki kisaan aish di jindagi na jee ske oh mitti nal mitti hoya rahe.. Kisana diya gaddiya te kothiys hi kiun sabh nu chubhdia ne sir ohna nu v hakk a ik changi te khhshaal jindagi jeen da'
Natha singh sambhlda hoya boleya 'bilkul hakk a mam par mehnat di kmai nal naki karze chuk ke'
Reet agge boli 'karza kon chukna chauda a MLA saab jdo fasla de pure mull ni milde ya koi nakli dwai puttan wang pali fasal tbaah kr dindi a te odhr dhee da viah sir te aa jnda a ta karza chukda a ajj da kisaan neta ji loka vich jayo je ohna da asli dard pchan na chaunde ho'
Natha singh nu kujh na sujhya te bolya 'ok madam baki interview fer krage hun main ik meeting ch jana a'
Usdi halat dekh reet muskurai te fer camera usde utte focus ho gya te oh boli 'eh san Janta Dal de MLA natha singh agli var kise hor shakhs nu lkee fir hazir howagi odo tak lai jude raho DTC News nal"
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MLA Ricky apne room ch pya c te samne tv utte natha singh di ajj di interview chal rahi c. Reet ne us ch ohi formal dress payi hoi c te sofe te latt te latt dharke bethi c te vaal di poni kiti hoi c. MLA da dhyan interview vichliya gallan nalo jada reet de mote-2 pattan utte c. Usdia akhan vich ta reet press confress wale din di hi chadhi hoi c. Reet de mote-2 patt pant ch fae dekh MLA da lun pajame ch khada ho gya c te oh apne hath nal hi usnu halka-2 ragad reha c. Usne apna phone chukeya te apne P.A nu milaya te boleya 'han p.a oh DTC waleya nu phone krke interwiew rkh lai kis din di'
P.A boleya 'par sir achanak interview di ki jarurat pegi'
MLA bolya 'tnu jina keha ona kar te han khas dhyan rhe interview len lai sirf Reet reporter hi auni chahidi a'
Usdi gal sun P.A de chehre te muskurahat aa gai te oh bolya 'hnji-2 samjh gya sir fikar na kro'
Ena aakh MLA ne phone katt ditta te fer tv dekhn lagga.
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bahut sohna reet jii....eh jo mahol tusi story vich pesh kar rehe o.....ik dam sachai a ....menu bahut khushi hoi ke tusi eh kadam chukya......ajj kal punjab vich na khanikar rehe ne novelkar...jo eh sachai loka samne le aunde ....par menu khushi a ke ...sade kol reet vargi punjabi writer a......thanks ...ajj di generation jad eh story padegi...tain ik alag soch unna vich peda hovegi.......

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Wah reet teri story ajj de halaat di kahani pesh kar rahi haii. Awesome .injh hi likhdi reh .
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