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Jagmagati huyi roshani mein nahaye huye hall mein janamdin ka shaandaar jashan chal raha tha. Nancy ke cake kaat-te hi har taraf taaliyaan goonj uthi. Har nazar us par hi thehri huyi thi lekin uski nazar ko jaise kisi ka intzaar tha aur woh dooor khada use hi nihaar raha tha. Dono ki nazarein milte hi honthon par muskaan phail gayi. Dono ke kadam ek-doosre ki taraf badne lage aur faasle nazdikiyon mein tabdeel hone lage.

"Happy birthday princess!" Us shakhs ne phoolon ka ek guldasta Nancy ki taraf badaate huye kaha to Nancy ki aankhon mein ek chamak bikhar gayi. Uska dil janamdin ki shubhkaamnaayon ke ilaava uske munh se kuchh aur bhi sun-na chaahta tha. Dono hasrat bhari nighaahon se ek-doosre ki aankhon mein doobne hi wale the ki tabhi halka sa sangeet us hall mein tair gaya. Sabhi log apne-apne partners ke sath sangeet ki shaant jheel mein utarne lage.

Woh shakhs abhi kuchh kehna hi chaahta tha lekin Nancy ka ek dost aage badha aur use apne sath dance karne ka nyota de betha. Nancy chaah kar bhi mana na kar payi aur uska dil rakhne ke liye chal padi. Halki dhun par ball dance karte waqt Nancy ka dhayaan dooor khade us shakhs par hi tha. Wahan woh bhi apne dil ki baat na kehne ka dil mein hi malaal rakhe khada tha. Achaanak se Nancy uski taraf aayi aur apna hath ek adaa se uski taraf karke use some sath naachne ka nyota diya. Us shakhs ne hairaani se uska hath thaama aur uske peechhe chal pada. Dance floor par dono ek-doosre ko baahon mein taal se taal mila rahe the aur ek gehri shaant jheel mein behadh saleeke se utarte jaa rahe the ki unhein khud bhi kaano-kaan iski Khabar na huyi.

Kuchh der mein sangeet khatam hua lekin abhi bhi dono ek anjaan bhaasha padne ki koshish kar rahe the jo aankhon ki zubaan ki tarzmaani karne ko aamaada thi. Dono bina sur, bina taal hi thirak rahe the. Ek beaawaaz sangeet unke kaano mein baj raha tha. Unhein dekh kar kuchh dil toote, kuchh mansoobe fanaah huye aur kuchh log to jalbhun kar koyla ho gaye lekin kuchh log yeh dekh kar khush bhi the. Unhein dekh kar jab hall taaliyon se goonj utha to dono apne khayaalon ki duniya se zameen par laute. Nancy yeh dekh kar buri tarah ghabra gayi thi jabki woh shakhs jhenp gaya tha. Jaise hi sharmaati huyi, khud mein simat-ti huyi Nancy dance floor se jaane lagi to us shakhs ne hath pakad liya.

"Nancy! Main rutbe mein bhale hi tumhare jitna ameer nahin. Chaahe mere paas tumhari tarah duniya bhar ki daulat nahin lekin mere paas woh dil hai jis mein tumhare liye pyar bhara hai. Main yeh to nahin kehta ki tumhein mujhse zyada pyar koi nahin kar sakta lekin Maine tumhare ilaava aaj tak kisi ke baare mein socha bhi nahin. Chaahe aaj yeh ek hazaar rupaye ki angoothi hi tumhare liye laya hoon lekin waada karta hoon ki ek din duniya ki saari khushiyaan tumhein dunga", usne apne ghutano par bethe huye hi Nancy ke saamne angoothi karke pyar ka izhaar kar diya.

"Joel! Idiot" Nancy ne gusse mein kaha to woh shakhs darr sa gaya. Uske chehre par hawaaiyaan udne lagi. Kuchh pal ke liye ek khaamoshi phail gayi jisne mahoul ko sanjeeda bana diya. "Kitni der laga di yeh kehne mein. Pata hai kab se taras rahi thi tumse yeh sun-ne ke liye. Pyar mein daulat ki koi keemat nahin. Agar saari umar pyar karoge to main kisi jhonpdi mein bhi reh lungi", Nancy ne khaamoshi ko todte huye kaha aur apna hath uski taraf badha diya. Dono ek doosre ki baahon mein kitni der tak samaye rahe, unhein khabar hi na huyi.

Aasmaan mein bijli zor se kadaki aur Nancy ki aankh just se khul gayi. Uske honthon par phaili muskaan ki shabnam ko udaasi ki dhoop ne sukha kar rakh diya. Uski aankhon ka namkeen samandar umadana chaahta tha lekin usne koshish ke baandh se rok liya. Phir bhi do boondein aankhon ke kor bhigo hi gayi. Nancy ne dil par sakhti ki aur uth kar khadi ho gayi.

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"Yeh Aditya tedi kheer dikhta hai, humein kuchh nahin batayega. Is par nazar rakho. Tum iska mobile track karte raho aur dekho ki yeh kahan jaata hai aur kya karta hai. Ab isi tarah humein kidnapper ka suraag milega", Nandini Imran ko hidaayat dete huye Divya ke ghar ki chhaanbeen kar rahi thi. Imran uske sath Nancy ke cottage ki taraf jaa raha tha.

Imran ne gaur kiya ki raat bhar huyi baarish ke baavjood khoon ka rang halka nahin hua tha aur na hi itna waqt beetne ke baawjood kala pada tha. Imran ne tehqeeqat ki to pata chala ki woh khoon tha hi nahin. Khoon banaane ke liye laal rang ka istemaal karke police ko gumraah karne ki koshish ki gayi thi. Nandini ki aankhein bhi khuli reh gayi. Use nahin pata tha ki Nancy itni shaatir bhi ho sakti thi. Ab tak uska dhayaan Divya ke kareeb rehne wale har shakhs par gaya tha lekin na jaane kaise woh Nancy ko us ghere mein nahin laa payi thi. Nandini ko ab ehsaas ho raha tha ki agar usne Nancy par nazar rakhi hoti to shayad yahan tak noubat na aati.

"Ma'am! Dustbin se yeh jali huyi diary mili hai." Isse pehle ki Nandini kuchh aur soch paati, ek hawaldaar ne use woh diary thama di. Halanki diary ke kuchh panne jale huye the lekin baaki ke panno ko agar dhayaan se pada jaata to kaafi kuchh pata chal sakta tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise diary ko jaldbaazi mein jalaya gaya tha aur Nancy use adhjala chhod kar hi bhaag gayi thi. Nandini use lekar padne lagi. Kaafi der koshish karne ke baad use jo pata laga woh aankhein khol dene wala tha.

"Oh! To yeh baat hai", Nandini ne mann hi mann dohraya. Imran use sawaaliya nazaron se dekhne laga. Nandini ne use diary ka ek sahi salaamat hissa padne ko kaha to Imran ka munh bhi khula reh gaya. Shayad unhein bahut eham suraag mil gaya tha.

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Mobile ki ghanti bajte hi Aditya ne chaunkte huye screen ki taraf dekha. Yeh wahi number tha jisse pehle usi shakhs ne call ki thi. Aditya pehle to kashmakash mein tha ki call le ya nahin lekin Divya ka khayaal aate hi usne lapak kar mobile uthaya.

"Bahut waqt laga diya? Paise gin rahe the Kya?" Aditya ke phone kaan se lagaate hi doosri taraf se ek karaari si aawaaz mein usne kaha. "Dus crore hote bhi to bahut hain", usne phir se khisiyaani si hansi hanste huye kaha.

"Itni jaldi itne paison ka intzaam kaise ho sakta hai?" Aditya ne bhi apni laachaari bataate huye kaha magar woh khud jaanta tha ki yeh ek bahaana tha. Hamesha daulat se chipke rehne wala insaan itni jaldi bhala kaise maan jaata?

"Zyada chaalaak mat bano. Mujhe pata hai ki tum jhooth bol rahe ho. Jaldi se Seth Chemical Factory mein pahuncho", usne gusse mein kheejhte huye kaha. Shayad usse paison ke liye aur intzaar nahin ho raha tha.

"Seth Chemical Factory? Lekin woh to kab se bandh padi hai." Aditya hairaan tha ki use itni veeraan jagah par kyun bulaaya jaa raha tha.

"To tumhein kya laga ki tumhein kisi mall mein aana hoga? Chupchap car mein betho aur wahan pahuncho. Aur haan... Agar koi tumhaare sath hua ya koi chaalaaki karni chaahi to Divya itne tukdon mein milegi ki tum gin bhi nahin paoge." Aditya use abhi kuchh kehna chaahta tha lekin tab tak call kat chuki thi. Aditya abhi bhi isi soch mein tha ki woh us kidnapper ka kehna maane ya police ki madad le.

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Great update bhai...


To nancy bhi kisi se pyaar karti hai..
US diary me aisa kia padh lia...Nandini ne...
Mere khayal me to Aditya ko police ki help karni chahiye..
Ab dekho aagey kia hota hai
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Socha is update me kuchh khulase to honge lekin is update ne to phir se dimag ko ghuma kar rakh diya.......

Nancy itni amir hai phir bhi wo divya ke ghar med ka kaam kar rahi thi iska matlab wo divya ki life me isi maksad se aayi thi to phir usne itna intezjaar kyun kiya aur ek baat hai wo divya se chahati kya hai????????

Nancy ko paison ki kami to hai nahi to phir usne aditya ko 10 crore ke saath us sunsaan factory me kyun bulaya????!!

Joe ka in sab mamlon se kya rista hai?????

Aur bhi bahut sawal hain jaise ye supari wala angle samjh nahi aa raha aur nandini ko kya problem hai divya se aur in sab sawalon je jabab to hume next updates me hi milane wale isiliye abhi se
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Great update bhai...


To nancy bhi kisi se pyaar karti hai..
US diary me aisa kia padh lia...Nandini ne...
Mere khayal me to Aditya ko police ki help karni chahiye..
Ab dekho aagey kia hota hai
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Aage action, suspense & thriller hoga. Har raaz parat dar parat khulenge. Junoon kuchh alag kism ki kahaani hai isliye anth chaunkaane wala ho sakta hai.

Sath yoon hi bane rahiye.

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Joe Ek Naye Aur Bohath Hi Ahem Kirdar Ki Entry Hui Hai Shayad Itna Bavaal Usi Ke Liye Machaya Hai Shayad Nancy Ne....Aditya Ko Bandh Padhi Chemical Factory Mein Kyun Bulaya Hai Kahin Aditya Ka Kaam Tamaam Karne To Nahi Bulaya
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Joel ka kirdaar Junoon mein eham hai ya sirf ek yaad bhar hi hai. Shayad Joel ka koi wajood hi na ho aur woh sirf Nancy ke dimaag ki hi upaj ho. Psycho case bhi to ho sakta hai. Diary mein shayad wohi likha ho.

Factory mein Aditya ko bulaane ka Nancy ka iraada firouti ki raqam wasoolna hai ya kuchh aur yeh to agla update hi batayega.

Yahi Junooniyat baqraar rakhe kar read karte rahiye.

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Socha is update me kuchh khulase to honge lekin is update ne to phir se dimag ko ghuma kar rakh diya.......

Nancy itni amir hai phir bhi wo divya ke ghar med ka kaam kar rahi thi iska matlab wo divya ki life me isi maksad se aayi thi to phir usne itna intezjaar kyun kiya aur ek baat hai wo divya se chahati kya hai????????

Nancy ko paison ki kami to hai nahi to phir usne aditya ko 10 crore ke saath us sunsaan factory me kyun bulaya????!!

Joe ka in sab mamlon se kya rista hai?????

Aur bhi bahut sawal hain jaise ye supari wala angle samjh nahi aa raha aur nandini ko kya problem hai divya se aur in sab sawalon je jabab to hume next updates me hi milane wale isiliye abhi se

Shayad Junoon aisi pehli story jisne aapko itna tang kiya hai. Ab zyada suspense nahin hoga, warna dost irritate ho jayenge. Jald hi sab khulaase honge.

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Shayad Junoon aisi pehli story jisne aapko itna tang kiya hai. Ab zyada suspense nahin hoga, warna dost irritate ho jayenge. Jald hi sab khulaase honge.

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