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Update 3 padha...bahat badia scenes.,,usake bad jo arpita ne gav ke bare me bataya wo sab bade achhese apane design kia update 4 padh ke review duga
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4th update nahi padha !! Jab waqt mile padhna fir aaram se review dena !!
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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
भेदभाव अपने दिल से, साफ़ कर सके| दोस्तों से भूल हो तो, माफ़ कर सकें|| हम को मन की शक्ति देना, मन विजय करें| दूसरों की जय से पहले, खुद को जय करें ||
खुसरो दरिया प्रेम का, उल्टी वा की धार। जो उतरा सो डूब गया, जो डूबा सो पार।। A drop of honey catches more flies than a gallon of gall. ~ Lincoln

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can u add pics in this story?
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knaya prem ka mast description....just Hot


aur ye baat sahi hai udhahatan nakli cheez se kyon ho ...asali ki kami to hai nahi


aur ye phhone ki ganti na....


Aap erotica ke master hai...such sizzling hot ....madham maddham aanch pe...uff




Yeh tarif bhare bol padh kar main to chane ke khad par chadh kar gaane wala tha

I am the author .. I am the author

phir aapki likhi yeh panktiya dhyan aa gayi

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गाडी तेजी से दौड़ती जा रही थी और अन्दर प्रेम की गाडी भी ...
जैसे इंजन का पिस्टन अन्दर बाहर अन्दर बाहर हो रहा था ..
aur phir se aasman se zameen par aa gaya !!


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Thanks for such nuggets of knowledge


aur itani modesty bhi theek nahi


Except you no one interested !!

Thanks for liking !





Seriously kanho to pahle wala hi silsila accha tha !! 2 read karne wale (Javed Bhai aur aap) the aur main mail se updates bhej deta tha . Review aur suggestion hantho hath mil jata tha.

Isliye kisi ke reply me maine likha tha

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Bhai reader to 2 hai; ek aap aur loveyou71
baaki dost the jo apne busy schedule se waqt nikal kar hausala afzaayi ko aaye the !!

Ab iske liye kya post karna !!

Update likhne ke baad sidhe aap dono ko pm kar dunga aur aaplog uss update ka review thread me de dena !! < image >
Aapka kya vichar hai ; hain naa ek krantikari soch



Phir update kuchh iss tarah ka hoga

Update 5

Sabhi thread ke visitors ko update pm aur mail se bhej diya gaya hai. Kirpya review den aur agla update list me apna naam darj karaye !!

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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
भेदभाव अपने दिल से, साफ़ कर सके| दोस्तों से भूल हो तो, माफ़ कर सकें|| हम को मन की शक्ति देना, मन विजय करें| दूसरों की जय से पहले, खुद को जय करें ||
खुसरो दरिया प्रेम का, उल्टी वा की धार। जो उतरा सो डूब गया, जो डूबा सो पार।। A drop of honey catches more flies than a gallon of gall. ~ Lincoln

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Nice update bro
Thanks bro !!

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very gud dev
can u add pics in this story?
Thanks ma'am !!

Frankly speaking I do not like adding images in story . I believe that images must be in sync with story . Since, I am not good in searching images so it would be very difficult task for me.

For example when I was planning to write a bathroom scene; I searched bathtub manufacture sites for different images which can be use in sketching the scene .
You saw that although the image I posted is in sync with story but as per characters; there should be 2 females present in bathtub not a couple. But, this image helped me in drafting the scene.

May be I will lend some images from NHB's nature images thread for some nature scene but not any others.
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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
भेदभाव अपने दिल से, साफ़ कर सके| दोस्तों से भूल हो तो, माफ़ कर सकें|| हम को मन की शक्ति देना, मन विजय करें| दूसरों की जय से पहले, खुद को जय करें ||
खुसरो दरिया प्रेम का, उल्टी वा की धार। जो उतरा सो डूब गया, जो डूबा सो पार।। A drop of honey catches more flies than a gallon of gall. ~ Lincoln

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update 4 kafi badia he. ..erotic writing ke sath sath kuchh info bhi de di ...maja a gaya
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Shandar updates dev sahab. story behatareen tarike se aage badhh rahi hai
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update 4 kafi badia he. ..erotic writing ke sath sath kuchh info bhi de di ...maja a gaya


kaun si info de di hai !!

Thanks any way , dear !!


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Shandar updates dev sahab. story behatareen tarike se aage badhh rahi hai < image >
Padharne ka sukriya !!

Aapka suggestion note kar liya hai.

3600 words ke ek din update dene ki jagah ab ek hafte me kuchh chhote 3-4 update dunga !!

Thanks again for visiting !!
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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
भेदभाव अपने दिल से, साफ़ कर सके| दोस्तों से भूल हो तो, माफ़ कर सकें|| हम को मन की शक्ति देना, मन विजय करें| दूसरों की जय से पहले, खुद को जय करें ||
खुसरो दरिया प्रेम का, उल्टी वा की धार। जो उतरा सो डूब गया, जो डूबा सो पार।। A drop of honey catches more flies than a gallon of gall. ~ Lincoln

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Update 5

Sabhi thread ke visitors ko update pm aur mail se bhej diya gaya hai. Kirpya review den aur agla update list me apna naam darj karaye !!

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Bhai reader to 2 hai; ek aap aur loveyou71
baaki dost the jo apne busy schedule se waqt nikal kar hausala afzaayi ko aaye the !!

Ab iske liye kya post karna !!

Update likhne ke baad sidhe aap dono ko pm kar dunga aur aaplog uss update ka review thread me de dena !!

Thora job ke nature ke karan job ke baad lautne ke karan kuchh seriously sochne layak nahi rah jata ; isliye updates ke bich 4-5 din ka gap ho jayega . Kosis karunga ki thora aur bara updates de saku.

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