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CONGRATS for the new story.....

mera pahla comment hai tuhadi story te......bahut sohna likh rahe ho....INTERSTING story hai.....nice plot
keep going

mainu taah nhi lagda tusi koi kami chaddi hai story wich ......jidda tusi kah rahe ho ke tusi writer nhi ho....
mainu taah tusi PROFESSIONAL writer naalo kise v gallo ghatt nhi lag rahe.....
edda hi likhde raho....
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main ghar se bahar aaiya or harry v mare piche bahar aa gia. tur de hoi assi ground ch aa gai. othe koi ni c main ground de ik pase ja ke bath jaia. jithe san na ta koi sun aske te je koi aave ta dur to pata lag jave. main beth gia te harry nu v bethan lai kiha.

harry de bathan te assi ik dusre val dekhan lage. harry thoda dar reha c. akhir main os nu kih hi dita.
main kiha " harry veer ih sab ki chal reha aa" ih sun pihla ta harry mare val dekhan laga. bad ch nivi pake kihda " ki chal reha kuch v ta ni sab ta thik aa"main os di gal sun os val gor nal dekhan lag.
main kiha " bai main tare te rupi ch jo chal reha aa os bare gal kar reha aa"
harry " sade ch ta kuch ni chal reha tainu ave koi vaham hoiya aa"
main " vaham bai jidan di rupi aai aa tu ohde nal-2 hi rah reha aae." ina kiha main os val de dekhan laga jad mainu laga ida koi gal ni bannita main kiha " chal thik aa ih sab mera vaham hou par jo kal main uper store room ch apniyan akha nal dakiya c oh ki c."

mari gal sun harry de muh da rang hi utar gia. us diyan akhan adiyan hi rah gaiyan. os ne ta laga c ki osde te rupi bare kise nu ni pata jad os nu pata laga ki mainu sab pta hai ta os de muh cho ta awaaj hi nahi c nikal rahi. par kuch der bad hosla jiha kar oh boliya.
harry " ki dakiya c assi ta kuch ni c kar rahe"
main " hun kio darda aae jad kar reha c jad ta ni dariya" harry mari gal sun kuch sochda boliya
harry " assi ta kuch ne c kar de "
main " bai hun koi faiyda ne sab kuch main apniya akha nal dakiya aa. hun ta tu ih das ki tusi kar ki rahe c te ih sab kado to chal reha aa. mari gal sun harry ta but ban gia. os nu kato ta khun na hon vali gal ho gai c. par phir kuch der bad. roon haka hunde hoe mariyan minta karda.

haary " bai minta aali gal aa ghare kise nu na kahi. nahi ta dad ne mainu gharo kad dena aa"
main " bai ih ki kar reha aae tu mare par kio fad reha aa. je main kise nu dasna hunda ta kal na dasda ya phir jad tusi aaj uper gai c jad na das dinda. par nahi dasiya par tusi ida kita kio te kado de kar rahe oo ih ta daso. "

mari gal sun harry nu kuch hosla giha hoiya te kuch soch ke kihda " ih assi kal pihli bar kita c. " ina kiha oh mare val dekhan laga. main os de gal sun ke hasan laga phir kiha.

main " bai main tainu fudu lagda aa"
harry " nahi kio ki hoiya "
main " tusi kiha assi kal pihli bar kita aa. jad ki main kal tuhadiya sariya galan suniya te sab kuch apniyan akha nal dakiya aa. isto bad v tusi ida kih rahe oo. nata kal mainu laga ke tusi jida gal mar rahe c is to pihla kadi ida gal ni kiti. duja jida tusi rupi di chudai kiti aa os nu dekh ke ida kadi v ne laga reha c. ki tusi os nu pihli bar chod rahe oo" in kah main harry nal kuch khulan di kosis kiti ta ki os da dar dur hove te oh sab kuch das dave.

kuch de bad harry mariyan akha ch dekh da hoiya " jad te sab kuch sun lia aa ta phir mare to kio puch da aa hai. "
main " oh ta sun lia c par ih ta ni c pata tusi ih kad to kar rahe ho te kida suru hoiya. plz daso na main kise nu ni dasda. "
mari gal sun harry thoda jiha muskuran laga. hun os da dar bil kul nikal chuka c. jo os nu pihla lag reha c. mainu dekh ke kihda " te jan ke ke karna aa oh sade dova de vich di gal aa. tu ta bas kise nu dasi na mera veer banke"
main " das de bai "
harry " das da ja kato kahla pia. hun ta pihla rupi nu ja ke dekhna paina aa. pata ni os da ki hal hona. "
main majak karde hoi kiha " hal ki hona bai hal ta os da odo ni bura hoiya jado hona chida c. hun ta ki hona aa " mari gal sun harry hasan laga te kiha " tainu aaj badiyan galan aa rahiya aa. koi na jad tu fasiya ta tainu odan puchu " hun harry v mare nal thoda jiha khulan laga c. os to bad main harry nu ohde te rupi bare dasan nu kiha. kafi der ta oh na hi karda reha par mare jiyda jor den te dassan nu tiyar ho gia.

os to bad harry ne rupi te apne bare sab kuch das ta. mainu v os de gal sun ke os nu chadan laga te rupi bare kafi kuch kiha. jad os to bardast na hoiya ta kihan laga " chal hun ta tainu sab kuch ta das ta hun ghar nu chal de aa. ghar ja ke main rupi nal v gal karni aa " harry nu kuch der ched da reha te os to bad sam hoie to assi dove ghar nu aa gae.

ghar aa ke main apne room ch chla gia fresh ho ke hale main bahar hi nikliya c ke samne inder didi khadi c. ohna nu dekh ke mainu yaad aaiya ki main ihna nu ik gal karn nu kiha c. didi de kuch bolan to pihle hi main kiha " didi main tuhade nal ik jaruri gal karni aa par hale ne rat nu kara ga. tusi adi ku rat nu uper store ch aa jaiyo sab de soun to bad. "

ina kiha ke bina ohna da jabab sune main niche aa gia. oh mainu piche to bula rahi c. par main hale koi v gal ni c kar na chunda is lai main niche aa gia. niche roti tiyar c assi roti khan lage. roti khande hoe v inder mare val dekh rahi c te jad main us val dekh da ta ing lagda jive oh mainu kuch kahna chundi hove. par main koi thiyan na dita te roti kha ke apne room val tur pia. jad baki sab v mare piche aa rahe cta main kiha " didi mainu aaj bhut neend aa rahi aa. main souna aa aaj tusi apne room ch galan karo aapa kal nu gal kara ge"
didi kihdi " thik aa tu soun ja assi mare room ch beth jande aa"ina kih ke jad sab didi de room val ja rahe c ta inder mare val hi dekh rahi c te mainu kuch kihna chundi c. par main os nu isare nal raat nu milan da kih ke apne room ch aa gia te andro kundi la ke bad te beth gia.

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BHT WDIA BAI ....GAL RAHI TERI WRITING SKILLS ...MAI KDDE QUESTION NI KITA US CHEEJ NU YAAR
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Thanks natorious jatt ji te baki jine v mare hor dost aa jo comment kar de aa. Ja jo nahi v kar de te story pad de aa oh na sab da dilo thanks.

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apne room ch aap bed te beth ke mainu aaj jo harry nal gal hoi oh yaad oun lagi. jida mainu harry ne dasiya oh sari gal mare dimag ch ghum rahi c. main os gal nu chate karan laga.

harry " dekh bai taniu sab kuch das da ga par kise hor nu pata na lage"
main " nahi das da bai tu gal das puri "
harry " tainu yaad hona ke rupi pihla v aunde huni c. main os nal majak v kar landa c kio ki assi dove iko umar de aa. oh v mare majak da kadi gussa ni kar di c. te aage gal odo vadi jad to hostal chla gia c. tare hostal jan to bad jad rupi ithe aai ta oh aage nalo jawan ho gai c. os de mume v bahar nu nikal aaie c. jo ki os de roop ch 4 cand la rahe c te os de bund v aag landi c. ih sab main pihla ni note kita.

par ik din os nal majak karde hoi main os de gud gudi karan laga ta mare to bach di ne mare to chutan da yatan kita ta os de hilan nal ohde mume mare hath ch aa gai. pihla ta sanu dova nu masti ch pata hi na laga. par bad ch jad mare to os da muma ghut ho gia ta sanu dova nu ahsas hoiya ki mare hath kithe ne. oh ta ik dam sidi ho ke khad gai pihla ta mare hath os de mumeiyan te hi rahe par bad ch dar de hoi main chuk lai.

os ne mare nal koi gal na kiti te chup chap room cho apne room ch chali gai. main v dar gia kite ih mummy ohna nu na das dave. main os de piche os de room ch chla gia. is time ghar ch main rupi te mummy te chachi ji hi c. baki school gai hoi c te sanu chutiyan c.

main jad room ch gia ta oh apne bed te bethi c .main os kol ja ke beth gia te holi jihe os nu kiha " sorry" os ne mare val na dakhiya te nivi pai bathi rahi. main ik bar phir " sorry " kiha. oh phir na kuch boli.
harry " plz sorry yaar rupi mainu pata hi na Lag ki mare hath kado othe puj gai. main maf kar de. dakhi rupi kise nu na dasi nahi ta mari kutapa bhut hona aa dady to"
rupi " harry tainu mare ithe hath ni c laona chida " ina kiha ke rupi mare val dekhan lage. jad sade dova diyan akha miliyan ta assi ik dosre val hi dekhan lage. pata ni ki kich c akha ch main ta kite kho hi gia c. par phir hosla giha kar ke maindubara osnu kiha.
harry " sorry yaar maf kar de main aage to ni kar da ida is bar maf karde " mari gal sun ke oh thoda jiha muskura ke mare val dekhan lagi.
rupi " harry gal gusse di ni aa ya kise nu dasn di v ni aa. gal aa ki aapa dove bhean bhra aa aapa ik dusre nu ida nahi chu sake. " ine gal kih ke oh mare val dekh ke thoda jiha muskura pai. main jad os nu muskurade dakhi ta mare sah ch sah aai.

harry " tu has kio rahi aae"
rupi " aave hi tainu ki hun main has v ni sakdi "
harry " oh gal ni tainu ta gussa hona chida aa mare nal te tu has rahi aae"
rupi " harry tainu pata main tare nal gusse nahi ho sakdi. ta kale haiya tera hathothe chla gia aapa dove hi ta ik dosre nal khel rahe c. khel de hoi ta hath ider oder chla hi janda aa" ina kih ke oh hasan lagi main os nu has de hoi dekh ke heran c te sochan laga is ne ta bhora v bura ni maniya mare is de mume te hath rakhan da. par phir v im bar is nu puch hi landa han.

harry " tainu gussa ni aaiya jad mera hath tare othe chla gia c "
rupi " tainu kiha ta hai mainu tari kise gal da bura nai lagda. " os de gal sun ke main sochan laga ki ih rupi ki kah rahi aa ki "is nu mari kise gal da bhut ra ni lag da. " ih hi sochda hoiya main rupi val dekh reha c oh mainu dekh ke has tahi c.

harry " tainu mare kise gal da v bura ni lagada "
rupi " aaho tainu kih ta dita aa. par kio bura ni lag da ih mainu ni pata "
harry " ok " bas mare muh to ina hi nikliya oh mare val dekh ke kahan lagi " tu ta ave dar janda aae. main ta bas ih kah rahi c ke aapa dove bhean bhra aa is laiaapa ida ni kar sakde te aage to dhiyan rakhi. "

is to bad assi dove galan karde rahe . main koi harkat na kiti te bad ch baki sab v aa gai assi sab ne time pass kita te roti kha ke soun nu chlae gai.

dusre sawar rupi mainu jagan aai te mare gud gudi karan lagi. mare to jad bardast na hoiya ta main uth ke beth gia. samne rupi khadi has rahi c te kiha " kio kida laga phir kal mare kar reha c hun jad mainkitiyan ta akha kad reha aae "
harry " oh gal ni main ta ih soch reha je main dubara tare gud gudi kite ta kite tu gusse hi na ho jave. is kar ke main tare dubara ni kiti. " mari gal sun ke rupi mainu ched di hoi niche jan lagi te darwaje kol jake kihdi " main kio gussa kar na aa. main kihda tainu rokiya bas ih hi kiha ki apne hath ider oder na mari " ine gal kih ke rupi mare val has ke niche chali gai.

main utiya te nahan laga te sochan laga ki rupi ne sachi gussa ni kita mari harkat da. te mainu bar bar uksa kio rahi aa kite os nu changa ta ni laga mare is tara os nal karna. main yoyar ho ke. iche aa gia te sab nal roti khadi os to bad sab chale gai. thudi der bad mummy ne mainu awaaj mari. te jad main ohna kol gia ta mummy ne kiha " main te tari chachi bajar ja rahe aa tu te rupi hi ghar ho. os nu ikali chad ke kite bahar na javi. assi duphar tak aava ge. mani bas haan ch sir hil ta te sofe te bath ke tv dekhan laga. mummy ohne chale gai. te rupi naha ke mare kol aa ke bath gai. kuch der bad kihdi cha pine aa main bana n lagi aa te rassoi ch chali gai. main bas " han " kiha. main os nu rassoi ch kadi nu hi dekh reha c. os nu dekhde hoi mainu os di sawar vali gal yaad aai te main uth ke rassoi ch aa gia te os nu piche to ja ke fad lia te os de thid te gud gudi karan laga os ne mare to chudan di bhut kosis kite te kiha "chad de harry cha bana lain de dekhi cha ubal jani aal par mainu koi fark na pia te main apna kam kar da reha. holi holi mare hath os de mumiyan te puj gai te main ohna sahlon laga. mare ina kardehi rupi de bund piche nu ho gai jo ke mare khade lan te lagi. mera lun ta os nal lagde hi khada ho gia c jo ki os nal ida kar de pihlai bar hoiya c. jad os nu mare khade lun da ihsas hoiya ta oh ik dam sidi khadi ho gai te piche mud ke mare val dekhan lagi. kuchder bad mainu akha kad ke chadan nu kahan lagi. os nu gussa hunde dekh ke main bahar aa gia. kuch der bad oh cah lae ke aai te assi dova ne bina ik dusre val dakhe cah piti. cah pinde hoi main sochan laga saiyd main kuch galt kar ta mainu nahi c kar na chida. main os nu sorry kiha te chup kar ke cah pin laga. bad ch oh rassoi ch cup rakh ke aai te mare sofe de piche to aake mainu fad lia te mare gud gudi karan lagu te bhut der kar de rahi main os to bachan di kosis kar da reha jad os nu laga ke hun os to bach ke main os nu fad lava ga ta oh bhag ke uper chad gai. jad nu main kuch hosh sabaliya ta oh last podi te c. othe khad ke kihde " kio bachu kida laga hun rassio ch badi masti chadi c. hun utar gai na sari" os de gal sun mainu pata lag gia ki oh gusse ni aa hun jae main os nu kuch kar da v aa ta oh gussa nai karu gaite os val dekh ke kiha
harry " hun ni tu bachdi hun dekh main tera ki hal kar da aa" mari gal sun hasan lagi te main jiv kad ke kahdi
rupi " pihla fad ke ta dekha pher dekha gae kon ki kar da aa" ina kiha ke oh apne room val chali gai. main v os de gal sun ke tazi nal podiyan chad ke os de room val chal pia.

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uper aa ke jad main rupi de room da darwaja kholan laga ta oh band c. main rupi nu darwaja kholan nu kiha par oh kuch na boli te andro hasan di awaaj aa rahi c. main os nu fir kiha " rupi dekh darwaja kol de main tainu kuch ni kihda "
rupi " na gi main ni kolde mainu pata aa tu mare phir to gud gudi kare ga " main os de gal sun ke sochan laga ke apne s ne sirf gud gudikadan bare kiha jo main rassoi ch is nal kita is nu os de chinta ni.
harry " nahi kar da tu darwaja ta kol. "
kuch der na ta door khuliya te na hi rupi ne koi jabab dita.
harry " changa phir main niche chla aa te hun taonu kuch ne kahda te tu v mare kol na aavi" main jan buj ke ida kiha c kio ki mainu pata c ki rupi mari ih gal sun ke jarur darwaja khol dave gi. ida hi hoiya os ne door open kita te main bah to fad ke apne bed kol lga ke bed te sut dita. mare dhid te gud gudi kar di hoi kahan lagi.
rupi " acha apni bari aai ta gussa dekhan lag piya te jihda ine der da main tang kar reha oh da kuch ni. tu niche jana c na ja ke dekha. " ina kih ke oh mare kutkatariyan kadan lai. oh hun mare uper dove pase lata kar ke bathi c. main us to chudan lai os nu fad ke ider uder kar reha c. ise chpat ch rupi di bund mare lun de uper aa gai par os nu kuch v pata nahi c. jad mare to bardast na hoiya ta main rupi nufad ke apme niche kar lia te aap os de uper aa gia. rupi diya dove lata mare ider oder c is karke hun main rupi diyan dove lata de vich os de uper c. os de uper aa ke main kiha

rupi de dove hath fad ke os val dekda hoiya boliya " hun das tu ki kare gi kado di tang kar rahe aae. main ta tainu ta ni kare ch kah reha c ki kite gussa na kar je par tu ta hat hi ni rahi. hun dekh main tera ki hal kar da aa. " ina kiha ke main os de muh val dekde hoi os de dove hath apne ik hath ch fad ke dusre hath nal os de dhid te gud gudi karan laga. te oh mare to chudan de kosis karde hoi khan lagi
rupi " sorry harry dakhi chad de main aage to kadi v ida ni kardi "
harry " hale kithe hale ta tainu maja chkana aa mare nal pange landi aa" ina kih ke main phir to gud gudi karan laga. hun main kadi os de dhid te kadi os diyan baha te kadi os de gale te kadi os diyan kacha ( ander arms) ch gud gudi kar reha c. oh laga tar mare kolo chudan da yatan kar rahi c te mare niche pai machal rahi c. ise yatan sad ka os diya lata khuliya hon kar ke jad oh hil rahi c te apne bund ider uder kar kahi c ta mera lun os de hilan kar ke salwar de upro hi os de fudi te ja laga. " ooooooooooh " ik dam rupi de muh cho nikliya te os diyan akha band hogiya. main hale v oda hi laga hoiya c te main pata hi na laga main kad os de gud gudi kar da hoiya os de mume apne hath ch fad lai te ohna nu sahlan laga. rupi nu chatka jiha laga te os ne apniya akha khol liyan.
rupi " harry yaar na kar main chad de te plz mare uper to uth khad " main hale v os de gal sun ke os de hath fad ke os de mume sahla reha c te os de utepia c. kuch der bad jad os nu laga ki main os de mume nahi chad reha.
" harry yaar chad de nale ah apne hath chuk tu galat jaga hath rakh ta aa. rupi mare kolo chudan di kosis ta kar rahi c par nal nal hun apne bud v uper nu chuk rahi c jo ki mare lun te vaj rahi c.
" rupi tare mume kine pole ne java hi roo vang " harry ne ih kih ta dita c josh ch par bad ch os nu yaad aaiya ki oh ih ke kah gia te rupi de muh val dekhan laga. rupi v gal sun ke harry val akha fad ke dekh rehi c.
" harry ah tu ki kah reha aae tainu saram ne aundi tainu id kihde te karde hoi mare nal " rupi sochan lagi ki harry oh ki kah reha.
" sorry rupi mainu pata hi na laga main ki kah gia. " harry os de hath chad ke os to piche ho ke beth gia. rupi uthi te apne kapde set kar ke harry val dekhan lagi.

" harry tainu ida ni c karna chida. aapa dove bhean bhra aa. ih sab kuch apne dova ch ni ho sakda. " rupi ina kiha ke mare val dekhan lagi. par main ta nivi pai betha c. mainu kuch v ni c suj riha ki rupi di gal da ki jawab deva.
" sorry rupi" par pata ni jad v main tare nal ida karda aa mainu ki ho janda. main opne aa nu rok de punda te mare hath apne aap othe chale jande aa." harry iha kih rupi val dek da sochan laga ki mainu apne dil di gal rupi nu das dani chidi aa.
" rupi main tainu like karda aa te tainu payar karn laga ha. " main kih ta deta c par mera dil bhut dar reha c ki rupi pata ni kida react karu gi.
"ki kiha tu " rupi ne ina hi kiha te sochan lage harry ne aah ki kiha.harry mainu like kar da aa. harry like ta main v tainu kar de aa par tu mera bhra aae is kar ke ni kadi kah pai. ih sab kuch apne dil ch soch rahi c.
" mainu ni pata main kado to tainu like kar da aa par hun mare to hor sabar ni hunda main tainu piyar karna chunda aa" main pure confidence nal kah ke os diyan akha ch dekhan laga. oh ve mare val dekh rahi c.
" harry ih tu ki kah reha aae tainu kuch pata v aa. main tari bhean lagdi aa te mare bare ida soch reha aae. main kadi soch v ni c sakdi. " rupi os nu apna gussa ta dekha rahi c par andro ta oh v khus c ki harry v os nu like kar da aai h sochde hoi boli " tainu pata v aa je kise nu pata lag gia ta apna ki banu ga"
" mainu kise di fikar ne tu das tu mainu like kar di aa ki nahi " ina kiha ke main rupi da hath apne hatha ch lake ghut reha c.
" harry tu samaj da ni main tari bhean aa aapa ida ik dusre nu like nahi kar sakde mari gal samjan di kosis kar"rupi ne apna hath mare hath cho chuda ke pare kar lia
" mainu ni pata tu das mainu like karde aa ke nahi je nahi karde ta das de aaj to bad main tainu tang nahi kara ga " ih sab kuch jan buj ke kiha c kio ke mainu pata c ki like ta oh v kar di aa par bhean bhra te relation kar ke sangdi aa.
" yaar jid kio karda aae tainu pata ki main ing nai kar sakdi" rupi dil ch kahan lagi lagi je tainu like na kardi hundi ta tainu ine agge vadan dindi.
" tu sirf ina das like kardi aae ke nahi"te main bed tu uth ke khda ho gia.
" han kardi aa like " ik dam harry nu bed to uth da dekh ke bol pai te phi boli " tu ing na kar dakie je kise nu pata lag gai ta main kise nu muh dakhan jogi nahi rehna "
" sachi" rupi di gal sun mera dil ik dam khus hogia te kiha " tu loka de fikar na kar. na ta te kise nu dasna aa te na main kise nu das na. upro aapa ghre v kalle ha kise nu ki pata lag na aa.
mari gal sun ke rupi ne apne godiyan ch muh de liya. main os de bah fad ke os nu apne val khich de hoi os nu apni hik nal la ke jafi pa lai
" harry chad de mainu sang lagdi aa" kih ta ih rahi c par apniyan baha harry de gale ch pa ke us nal chimbad gai.
" hun ni chad da hun ta tainu pura pyar karu" in kih ke main os nu gal na la ke bed to kadi kar lia.
niche uter kemain os nu apne to piche kar ke os da muh fadke apne bul os de bulan nal jod ke kiss karan laga. rupi nu v pata ni ki hoiya oh v mera sath den lagi. kiss kar de hoi mare hat os de pith to di hunde hoi os de chittdan te poj gai. os de gol gol chittad hath ch one hi main oh na nu ghutan laga te rupi ta apniyan addiya chuk ke mare bul chusan da swad la rahi c.

bulan ch bul pa chus de hoi hath fer de hoi main os da pala chuk ke os de salwar ch hath pan laga par pia ni kio ki os ne nala maniya hoiya c. os de chittad put ke main apne hat os de mumeiyan te rakh ke oh na nu apne hathan nal guntan laga." oooohhhh holi " mare to muh piche kar sah landi hoi rupi ne kiha " ki kar da aae holi ghut dard hunda "
main phir to os de bul chus de hoi os de mume ghutan laga mera lun khda ho ke osde patan ch os di fudi te thokra mar reha c. oh v bul chus de hoi mare lun nu patan ch ghut rahi c. main apne hath niche kar ne nala fadiya te kich ke khol dita te rupi de salwar os de parra ch ja ke digi. rupi ida k dam mare to piche hundi hoi " ih ki kita. mara nala kato kholiya "
main os nu fad ke bed te lami punda hoiya os de uper pai ke kamij de uper to hi osde mume apne muh ch pa ke chungan laga. te os de kamij ch hath pa ke os nu uper chukan laga. jad kamij os de mumeiyan tak aa gai ta main os nu bathi kar ke os di kamij os deiya baha ch kad ke ik pase rakh diti. hunoh mare niche bra te kachi ch pai c.
" aah ki kita tu ta mari mari kamij v lah diti " kamij utran to bad bapne harha nal apne mume lukandi hoi harry val dekhan lagi
harry rupi de ute panda hoia bra nu uper chuk ke rupi de mume chungan laga. apne mumeiyan te muh lagde hi machal gai rupi. harry de sir nu apne mumeiyan te ghutan lagite.
" hai harry aah ki kar reha aae na kar ve " harry nu ghut de hoi swad lain lagi te boli " chung hor chung haae v swad hi liyta tu ta othe is lai ta main kado di tars rahi c. "
" koi na hun kar le chaa pure " ina kih hor v swad nal mume chungan laga te apna ik hath rupi de kachi ch pa ke os de fudi te feran laga. fudi te thode jihe ball c. fudi te hath rakh de hi rupi ne mainu apne nal hor ghut lia.
" othe na hath la mainu kuch-2 ho reha aa" fudi te hath lagde hi satve aasman de najare landi boli " mare ta sare kapde khol lai te aap sare kapde pai betha aa " harry de sir te hath fer di hoi pata ne ik dam kida bol pai hun os nu koi sang ni c hun ta bas oh khul ke swad laina chundi c. rupi di gal sun ke khda hunde hoi main apne sare kapde ik ik kar ke lah ke pase rakh te. rupi val dakiya ta oh mare lun val dekh rahi c. os nu apne khade lun val dekh da pa ke main hath ch fad lun nu hilan laga te sochan h dekh ke rupi ne akh chuk mare val dakiya te sang gai. main oge ho ke rupide parrach pai salwar para rakh te. nal hi os de kachi os diyan lata cho kad ke ik pase rakh ti.
rupi diyan lata hol ke vich onde hoi fudi te jad hath rakhiya ta rupi ne apne pat ghut lai. par main os de pat khol ke apne sde fudi te hath feran laga te os de uper lama pai gia. rupi de bul chusan laga ik hath nal os de mume ghut reha c te ik hath os di fudi te fer reha c. Holi-2 main main apne ik ungal rupi di fudi ch pa te pihla ta os nu dard hoiya par bad ch swad lain lagi ise tara main apniyan 2 ungalan rupi di fudi ch pa teiya. rupi pure swad nal mare bul chus rahi c te apni fudi ch chal rahiyan ungalan da swad lai rahi c. jad mainu laga ke rupi di fudi puri garam aa pani chad rahi aa . main apna hath os di fudi cho kadiya te apne muh kol kar ke os thuk ke thuk nu apne lun te la ke lun nu rupi di fudi de muh te apna topa rakh dita.

apni fudi te lun de tope nu mahsus karde hi rupi holi jahi bali" harry holi pavi tara bhut vada te mari choti jahi aa. nale ih mera pihli bar aa"
"tu chinta na kar main holi hi kara ga tainu bhora v dukh ni lagan dinda. par pihli bar aa is lai kuch dard ta hove ga thoda jiha bardast kar lai" inkah ke fudi te topa rah os de bulan ch bul pa ke ik halka jiha theka mariya ta mera topa rupi di fudi da muh kholda hoia fudi ch fit hogia rupi thodi jahi kathi ho gai par mainu para na kita te mare gale ch baha pa laiyan.
main rupi de bul chus de hoi ik jor de rheka mariya te mera ada lun rupi di fudi ch vad gia. rupi mare to chutan di kosis kar di hoi mainu apne hatha nal apne to para karn lagi par main os nu ghut ke fadiya hoiya c. ing hi main ik hor theka mariya te sara hi lun fudi ch vad ta.

rupi di cheek nikal gai par os de bul mare bulan ch hon karke mare muh ch hi dab gai. rupi apna muh chdandi hoi sah lan lai as diya akha bahar nu niklia hoiya c.
" haaaaaaai veeeeeee maaaaarrrr ttteeeee haaaaaeee mmmaaaaa mari faddddddd ti " mainu apne to para karan di kosis kar de hoi maunu kahan lagi" harry kad lai yaar bhut dard ho reha te ta mari fad ke rah te"
main " kuch ni hunda jo hona c oh ta ho gia hun ta tainu thodi der no swad on lag paina aa" ina kih ke main rupi de bul chusan laga te os de mume hatha ch oh tan laga kuch der bad jad mainu laga ki rupi hun normal ho gai aa.

main apne lun nu bahar kad ke topa ander hi rahan dita te Holi-2 lun nu fudi ch ander bahar karan laga. thodi der bad rupi nu v swad on laga te oh v niche to apne bund chk ke mera sath den lagil
rupi " han hun swad aa reha pihla ta ing laga ki mari ta jan hi nikal jani aa. te tainu mare te koi tars na aaiya aaada vada lun kini badardi nal thakiya tu "

main " koi na je dard dita ta hun swad v mahi dava ja " ina kih ke lun nu tope tak bahar kad ke fudi di jadd tak lame-2 thake maran laga.
rupi " han g n ida hi kar bada swad aa reha aa. pura kad ke pa te tez-2 kar.rypi di gal sun ke main tez-2 chodan laga kadi os de bul chus da kadi os de mume chung da. hun mainu pura swad aa reha c rupi v apni bund chuk ke mera pura sath de rahi c.
rupi " tez-2 kar harry mainu pata ni ki ho reha aa mera pani niklan vala aa tu ruki na taz-2 theke mar"
" lai hor lai " rupi ne chod da hoiya bolan laga te tez-2 rupi ne chodan laga.
rupu " harry main gai mera pai naakal raha hai ve swad hi aa gia " ina kih ke rupi ne mainu apniyan baha te la a ch ghut lia te os di fudi ne pani chadna suru kar ta jo ke mare lun nu swad de rahiya c.
main rupi nu apniyan baha ch ghut ke holi-2 chod reha c. jad rupi bed te nithal ho ke pai gai ta main os nu tez-2 chodan laga kuch der bad rupi phir to garam ho gai te mera pura sath den lagi. hun main pure swad nal rupi nu chod reha c. jad mainu laga ke mera chutan vala ta main rupi kiha
main " rupi mera niklan vala aa kite kada " rupi mainu gjut ke jafi pundi hoi boli " mera v niklan val hi aa. apna pani mari fudi ch hi pa de main tare pani nu apne andar mahsus kar na aa"

ih sun ke main hor tez chodan laga rupi nu te 1-2 mint bad main apna lun rupi de fudi ch pura thak ta. lun jad pura vad gia ta mare lun ne pachkariyan marniya suru kar tiyan te main rupi nu ghut ke gal na la ke kiha " mera nikl gia rupi " rupi v mare nal hi kah di " mera v nikal gia "

assi dove ik dusre nu jafi pake pai rahe. mera sara pani main rupi di fudi ch hi khali kar ta. kuch dwr assi dove ida hi pai rahe. bad xh main rupi de bul chus ke uthia te mera lun rupi di fusi cho bahar aa gia. jad lun val dakita ta os te kuch bunda khunn diyan c jo ki rupi di seel tutan da sabot c id hi bed di chader te v khun de nal mera te rupi dova da pani mix ho ke dag pai gia c. main rupi nu nal lai ke bathroom gia os di fudi te apne lun nu thoke rupi nu chk ke lia ke bed de pa ta te os nal pai gia. te assi gala karn lage. galan karde hoi assi phir garam ho gai te main phir to rupi ni chodiya.

os to bad jine din rupi ithe rahi main os nu full chodiya jad v moka miliya.

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Dosto kia ine buri story aa. ke tusi is nu read kar na te read kar ke apni rai ya comment karna pasand ne karde.

Chlo koi na phir aapa is story nu ithe hi band kar denda de aa.

Lagda mainu likh na hi nahi ounda. Tahi ta apne doata da dil nahi jit saki mari story.


Ok bye dosto main is nu ithe hi band kar dinda hai. Maf kario tuhada kimti time khrab hoiya mari stoey padan lage os lai ik bar phir to sorry

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Personally y manu story kaim laggi aa y 15000 view story de Hor kive passand aouge viewers nu Rahi gal comments so y to story chaldi Rakh haaje 10 tan page hoye ohna vicho y story ta injh lgda jive last 5 Ku updates pehla start hoye Hove Baki agge Tere ichha story band Karni as ja nahi

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Dosto kia ine buri story aa. ke tusi is nu read kar na te read kar ke apni rai ya comment karna pasand ne karde.

Chlo koi na phir aapa is story nu ithe hi band kar denda de aa.

Lagda mainu likh na hi nahi ounda. Tahi ta apne doata da dil nahi jit saki mari story.


Ok bye dosto main is nu ithe hi band kar dinda hai. Maf kario tuhada kimti time khrab hoiya mari stoey padan lage os lai ik bar phir to sorry
don't be angry dear.....don't feel rejected....
we love ur story.....sohna likh rahe ho....
we can understand.....
sanu pta story likhna ...enna saukha nhi...bahut tym lagda likhan wich je koi response ghatt mile taah kafi feel hunda.....
we r with u buddy
keep going
reader v wdhan ge te comment v......give some tym....aje tuhadi story sure hoyi hai...flow eich aa rahi hai....

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