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I think u should not compromise with ur plot...incest da ta mela lgya hoya ethe je diffrent sochya c diffrent hi likho incest v add kr skde o but compromise na kro ik do readers krke sara taste khrab ho reha story da
I m shocked that how people write about the sex with mother or father i know its just a story but fer v its too diffucut to read anyway its ur story so u can write as ur ideas
yeah m not going to write ant sex scene with mother n story hun age hor vdia howegi


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22 keep on. Write what you want to write. Whatever that is.
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y please please please write with ur style. ...which u want....we support u.....ignore that bloody peoples. ...
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agle din sare palace vich pahunch gaye te gate te khade baraat di wait krn lage. raman to leke suprina tak har koi chamk rahi c. lekin main bas nav didi nu dekhn de intezaar vich c jo k aje kamre vicho bahar nahi c ayi. akhir baaraat ayi te milni da time hoeya. meri milni harry de shote pra garry nal c. jithe harry sida sada disda c othe garry di shakl to hi gandpuna jhalak da c. garry di umar 20 k saal honi hai te oh tino bhen prawa vich sab to shota hai. garry nu harry jada ni bulanda te jagpreet nu te main kdi ohnu bulande hi ni dekheya. jado harpreet di di milni jagpreet nal hoyi te har kise da dhyan dowe patoleya ute hi c. lekin jagpreet gulabi laal patiala shahi suit vich harpreet di to kayi jada sohni lag rhi c. odi sohna mukhda te shareer har kise nu deewana kr reha c. lekin aj ik gal kamaal lag rhi c. harry di maa ya ni ki nav didi di hon wali sas kush jada hi bomb lag rhi c. main kdi ode wal jada dhyan nai c dita lekin tang suit vich oh bahut kaint lag rhi c. hala ki tid thoda bahar niklyea hoeya c lekin mumme te bond ne kair machaeya hoeya c.

akhir baraat andr gayi te kush time baad asi nav didi nu len gaye. nav didi nu dekhde hi main bas ohna vich hi ho geya. minu eve feel hon laga jiwe mere nal hi didi da vyah ho reha hai. nav didi da gora rang te ute masumiat minu apna deewana bna rhi c. minu hun feel hoeya main nav didi naal kina pyaar krn lag peya ha.

vyah da din age vad da geya. mera te daddy da bura haal hoeya peya c. main nal nal peg v lai ja reha c. vyah wali jodi stage te beth chuki c te loki shagun pai ja rahe c. ine vich minu mummy da phone ayea "prince putt kithe hai stage te aja family photo li". main jaldi nal stage te geya ta othe sara pariwaar ikatha c. daddy chacha taya te pua te ehna sarea di family. sare apne aap nu set kr rhe c te main suprina de kol jake khada hogeya. suprina minu dkeh boli "mera suit kiwe lag reha".

"kaint" main boleya.

"tuhade hi dite paisea da eh veere" suprina akh mardi hoi boli.

"oh chal sahi a" main v muskrake keha.

ine vich cameraman boleya "paaji tusi ehna de pishe hoju height lambi a tuhadi". cameraman ne minu suprina di pishe khade hon li keha. main suprina de pishe khada hogeya. waise sadi height vich jada difference nahi hai isli mera lun suprina de bahar nu nikle chittuda naal lagn laga. suprina de chittud lun ute mehsus hunde mere lun khade hon vich 10 second laye. suprina nu mere lun da ehsaas hogeya isli oh age nu hoi te main v thoda pishe hogeya. cameraman kol photo vdia ni khichi ja rhi c isli baar baar khich reha c.

ine vich suprina boli "veere ik hor dress sigi othe oh v bdi pasand c minu".

"le lendi fr oh v" main boleya.

"paise haini c" suprina ne drame jahe krde hoye keha.

pehla ta main ode wal dekheya te boleya "kine di c".

"6000 di" suprina boli.

ine vich cameraman minu boleya "paaji thoda age nu hoju tusi". odi gal mande hoye main age nu hoeya te mera khada loda fr to suprina de chittuda ute lagn laga. lekin iswaar suprina age nu na hoi.

"koi na le lawi mere to" main boleya.

suprina khush hogayi eh gal sun te boli "sachi veere".

"hanji bhen g" main muskrake boleya. main janda c suprina paise miln te kini khush hundi hai isli mere dimaag vich ik idea ayea. main janke hor age hoyea te apne khade lun nu suprina di moti gaand di line vich halka halka fern laga. suprina nu jhat isda ehsaas hogeya te ohne pishe mere wala mud dekheya. odi look bahut khatarnaak jahi c jisde karn meri bond fat gayi. "bhenchod kut na pawade eh" main man vich socheya.

lekin mera dar door krdi hoi oh boli "veere waise ik watch v c 2000 di minu bahut pasand ayi".

eh sun main khush ho peya te samj geya suprina da haw bahw ki hai.vyah de chalde mere kolo paise di koi kami nahi c isli main purse vich hath paeya te 8000 ruppee kad suprina nu fda dita te boleya "ja lela ki yaad rakhungi".

paise fad suprina eve khush hoi jiwe katrina kaif oh munde nu fudi den li tyaar hoi howe jehne asal vich fudi dekhi v na ho. "veere thankyou so much" suprina boli te fr asi photo li tyaar hoge. main halka halka lun nu suprina de chittuda ute ragdn laga. suprina ne koi v reaction na diti. oh chup chaap minu maje dendi gayi. ine vich photo ho gayi te main fr kaam kaar te lag geya. suprina jado v minu mildi te muskrake jandi. oh eve kr rhi c jiwe ohnu pta hi nai laga main ki kr reha c ya ta ohnu bas paise naal matlb c bas.

akhir doli torn da time ayea. sarea di akhan bhriya hoiya c. meri akhan vicho v athru nikln nu ferde c lekin main apne aap ute control kita hoeya c. nav didi v ro rahi c jo k minu bilkul v vadia nahi c lag reha. lekin main kush nahi c kr skda. sarea de minu to baad main didi kol geya. didi ne meri chaati ute sir rakheya te ron lagi. main didi nu cup karaun lga te halka jeha kan vich boleya "love you didi". is de jawaab vich didi ne v halka jeha "love you too" keha te fr doli wali car vich beth gayi. asi sarea ne gaddi nu thaka laeya te jandi hoyi gaddi nu dekh main akhan punjeya te man vich socheya "bahut yaad aunia raata".
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c-raa update veer....

ik hor tyrr ho rhi aaa...

nyi reesan teriynn 22...

chki chl ftte...

hun dkhde aa suhaagraat.. waise ta mnayi gyi ohdii hun duji dkhde aa kida di hundi aa...

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Nice one. Looking forward for next update.
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