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"khet" story review...

veer bahut sohna update c.. par thoda short laga.. khair tusi likhya.. ke eh story hi short hai...

es story vich ik behteren massage c...

massage eh c.. ke aurat jad vasna di agg vich jaldi hai.. tain koi rishta.. koi maryada usnu jakad ke nai rakh sakdi..

vasna di agg vich saddi aurat da koi pati , koi put , koi rishta nata nai hunda.. us layi hunda hai tain ik matar apni vasna nu shant karan da koi v jariya...

eho jehi aurat toh sanu bach ke rehna chahyida.. eho jehyian auratian .. ajj kal de jawan munde kudyian nu kharab kar rehyian... pyar apni jagah hunda te vasna apni jagah...

tuhadi har story vang es story vich v ik massage c... menu umeed hai.. ke tusi agge kade v punjabi stories da sath nai chadoge... u r a best writer...



mere khyal vich eh best story c...

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"khet" story review...

veer bahut sohna update c.. par thoda short laga.. khair tusi likhya.. ke eh story hi short hai...

es story vich ik behteren massage c...

massage eh c.. ke aurat jad vasna di agg vich jaldi hai.. tain koi rishta.. koi maryada usnu jakad ke nai rakh sakdi..

vasna di agg vich saddi aurat da koi pati , koi put , koi rishta nata nai hunda.. us layi hunda hai tain ik matar apni vasna nu shant karan da koi v jariya...

eho jehi aurat toh sanu bach ke rehna chahyida.. eho jehyian auratian .. ajj kal de jawan munde kudyian nu kharab kar rehyian... pyar apni jagah hunda te vasna apni jagah...

tuhadi har story vang es story vich v ik massage c... menu umeed hai.. ke tusi agge kade v punjabi stories da sath nai chadoge... u r a best writer...



mere khyal vich eh best story c...

First of all my heartily thanks to you Lover of darkness brother for deeply reading and writing a beautiful review of my story. Tuhade varge readers hon naal hosla wadh janda hai dost.

Hanji mai eh bahut short story sochi c islyi short likhi. Hanji veere story de vichle hidden message nu bahut sohna describe kita tusi. Jive tusi likhya bilkul mere dil di gall likhi.

Bilkul brother. Mai koshish karanga hamesha jurya raha punjabi stories naal. Maan bakshan layi bahut bahut shukriya.

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Doston DERA story mai likh reha. Usda climax part reh gya bs. Sochda full story post karan ya half hale post kardava te baaki next update ch post karan?. I am confused.

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Doston DERA story mai likh reha. Usda climax part reh gya bs. Sochda full story post karan ya half hale post kardava te baaki next update ch post karan?. I am confused.

je tuhanu lagda ke story da duja part kuch vada .. tain tusi usnu kal post kar diyo.. adha part ajj post kar devo.. no tension... keep writing..


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je tuhanu lagda ke story da duja part kuch vada .. tain tusi usnu kal post kar diyo.. adha part ajj post kar devo.. no tension... keep writing..

Posting PART-1 in few minutes. Final part will be posted tomorrow.

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DERA (Part-1)

"Kdo theek hovangi?" paani da glass chukki rajpreet boli.

"ahh farh..jaldi ho jaugi" karan ne usde hath di tali te do golian rakhdeya keha. " fatafat khaa le hun".

"bahut kori lagdi.." Paani pe ke bull saaf kardeya keha." 1 saal ho gya khandi nu ..koi hor hall nhi hai"

"ehi hal aa jaan..doctor de according hi chalna paina" kehke karan ne usu jaffi pa li. "sabar rakh..ho ju jaldi sbh theek".

Asal vich Karan te Rajpreet de viah nu panj saal ho gye c. Paisa te sex life unha di vadiya c par hale tak bacche di khushi naseeb nahi hoi c. Karan bank ch cashier c te Rajpreet hosuewife c.Apne ghardea te aale waale de loka nu bahana bana ke taal reha c ki hale baccha karna nahi chahunde. Par problem eh c ki rajpreet di umar 28 ho chukki c te gharde zor pa rahe c ki baccha 30 ton pehla ho jana chahida nahi tan complications bahut aandia. Utton karan di umar v 32 shu rahi c. Waqt bahut tezi naal lang reha c par is problem da solution koi nazar nahi aa reha c.

Rajpreet nu oh din changi tarah yaad hai jado doctor ton check up karwan ton 1 hafte baad karan ghar report lai ke aaya c.

"Women is infertile" latke mooh naal aaye karan ne report parde rajpreet da sir palosde dassya. Sunde hi rajpreet da mooh peela pai gya.

" I am sorry karan..." kehndi hoi karan de kandhe te sir rakh ucchi ucchi ron laggi. "haye rabba eh ki kita".

"kuj nhi hunda jaan..." Karan ohde mathe te hath rakh palosda hoya bolya. " sabh theek ho ju" . Par rajpreet nu pata c ki hun shayad sabh kuch theek nahi ho sakda.

Us raat usdi zindagi ujjar gayi c. Kise lady nu pata lagge ki oh kadi maa nahi ban sakde ta us uppar ki gujregi. Eh gall rajpreet de dil ch iven uttar gayi ki oh depression da shikaar ho gayi. Karan pichle 6 mahine ton usnu depression diya golia is umeed nal de reha c ki oh theek ho jaugi.

"chal hun soja" karan ne bullan te kiss karke bed de naal lagde lamp nu off kardea keha jisnal kamre ch poora nehra ho gaya. Dono chaddar layi bed te lete hoy c.

"shayad isnaal thora change mile rajpreet nu" Man ch kuch sochya te ankhan band kar lyia. Shayad koi idea usde dimaag ch aaya c.Dono pata nahi kdo neend de aghoosh ch chale gaye.

"naha ke tayaar ho jayo jaldi..bus da time 9 bje hai" sutti payi rajpreet nu karan ne coffee offer kardea keha. Saver de 7 baj rahe c.

"kithe jana hai?" bed to uthke ubaasi maardi hoi ne coffee farhi. " mai v jana naal?"

"tu maayike jaa rahi e" karan ne usde kol aa ke hath farh lye. "Kaaafi dina to mayike nahi gaye..naale thora change hojuga..10-15 din di gall aa" .

"shayad tusi theek keh rahe ho" coffee da ik gutt bhardi hoi boli. "vaise v kaafi din ho gye mom-dad nu mile" Jiven karan ne usdi dil di gall keh ditti hove.

"very good mai ramu nu keh ditta..oh bus stop tak shadd aayuga" Karan ne gallan te kiss karde keha. Ramu unha de ghar da naukar hai.

Rajpreet ne coffee khatam kiti te karan bank layi nikal geya. Tayaar hoke te do bag chukki oh bike te ramu de piche baith gayi. Dona baithe ik bike te c par dimaag ch alag alag vichaar chal rahe c. Rajpreet kadi na maa banan wale sach vich dubbi te Ramu apni patnu nu maalkin nal compare kar reha c.

"kaash maalkin jaisi biwi hoti to maaza a jata" bike chalayunde hoye di pith te rajpreet de mote mumme touch ho rahe c. "ahhh kitne naram hai".

"roz choot aur gaand maarta ..nangi rakhta har time.." jan buj ke khaddea to bike kadd reha sochda hai. " par jab kismat footi ho toh reshma milegi". reshma usdi vohti da naam hai jo usde mutabak rajpreet jinni sohni te sexy nahi hai.


Chade chalde oh poore 8.55 te bus stop pahunch gaye. 9.05 te bus aayi te sawaar ho apne ghar chal payi. Ramu see off karke vapis bike te ghar chala gaya.

Bus ch bheerh hon karke usnu seat nahi mili te naa hi kise ne seat uslyi shaddi. Office da time hon karke alag-alag tarah de log bus ch savaar c. Kayi tharki bande tan usde mote chitda te lun ragarn da mauka shadd nahi rhe c. Shaddan v kyu jdo gore rang wali jawaan mutiyaar kaala pajami suit paayi moti shaatiya te vaddi bund di maalkin saamne khari hove. Ik uncle jo shakal ton tharki jaapda c usne tan hadh hi laa ti. Apna khara hoya lun pent ton hi usdi pajami naal gassan lagga. Bus de dhakkeya naal lun aganh karda jiven bund di mori de vichkaar nishana maarna hove. Ik-do vaar tan chitda de vicho vich khara lun ragarn ch safal v hoya.

Rajpreet nu mehsoos hoya tan apne chitad tight karke khadi ho gyi. Isto ilawa koi harkat na dikhayi. Andro ainna tutt chukki c ki aale-dwaale dhyaan hi nahi de rhi c. 3 gante de raaste ch bathere loka ne usde shareer de kise na kise ang da maaza leya c. 1 gante baad chahe usnu khaali seat mil gayi par naal baitha buddha usde moti gol shaatiyan naal koohni lauda reha. Sabh igore kardi Rajpreet apne ghar doaphar de kareeb 12.30 te puj gayi.

Ghar ch dopahar usnu mom mile jo adhe gante to usda intezaar karde pye c. Apni beti nu kaafi der baad milke bahut khush hoye.

"aa gyi tun..wahh meri sohni puttar" usdi maa ghar da darwaza khol jaffi payundi boli. Usdi maa housewife c te papa retired goverment employee c."mainu aj svere karan ne phone kar dassya c tu aayuna"

"oh papa i miss u so much" andar varde saamne sofe te baithe ape papa nu pajj ke mili. Dono kuch der haal chaal puchde rahe.

Mel-milaap vadiya reha. Par maa nu apni beti ch change nazar aaya. Ankhan thalle kaale gehre te bullan te mayoos muskaan nazar aayi. Raat nu dudh den de bahane oh usde kamre ch gayi te gall shuru kiti.

"mom aidda di koi gall nahi e" maa de hathan cho dudh da class fardi rajpreet boli. " tuhanu aive hi lagda"


"Beta ik gall dassan...maa baap nu sabh pata lag janda apne bacchean da.." rajpreet da mooh hathan naal palosdi boli. " sach dass.. saure tang karde ya karan naal larhai hoi e?" Sawaal sunke rajpreet hassan da nata karan laggi te dudh da glass side te paye table te rakh ditta.


"oh come on mom...ki sochi ja rahe ho..aida di koi gall nahi"

" phir kehri gall hai dass mainu"? Maa ne phir same question repeat kita.

10-15 minutes tak naa kardi ne akhirkar apni maa nu sabh sach dass ditta. Dassdi hoi futt futt ke maa di shaati nal lag ron laggi. Gal sunke maa da chehra uttar gaya te ankhan ch ghabhrahat dissan laggi.

"papa nu na dasseo mom?" rajpreet ankhan punjdi boli. " pata nahi ki beetugi unha te"

"nahi dassdi puttar" usdi maa usnu sabhaldi hoi boli. " fikar na kar sabh theek ho jauga"

"kuch nahi theek ho sakda mom...1 saal ho gya..kuch theek nahi hoya" rajpreet saaho saah hoi bol rahi
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" ik tarika hai ..jisnal sab theek ho jauga" usne kuch sochke rajpreet diya ankhan ch dekhde keha. " gal sunke rajpreet ek aas naal maa da mooh dekhan laggi.

"kehra tarika mom"? dhemi aawaz ch usne pucchya.

" DERA" kehndya usdiya ankhan ch chamak aa gayi.

"DERA? Whats that?" rajpreet ne chaunke hoye puchya. "koi jagah hai?"

"Bahut manni parmanni jagah hai...sheher to paar pahariyan ch " dasde hoye maa ne usda hath farya.

"koi dharmik jagah hai kya?" rajpreet ne puchya. "

" kise dharam nal sambhandit nahi hai..sacche man naal uthe jo koi mangda..oh sbh milda " maa ne jawaab ditta. "Sade sheher de bahut lokan da kamm sahi hoyea. Kise nu naukri, kise nu daulat te kise nu bacche di daat v mili hai."

"mainu nahi lagda kuch hovega" oh santusht nahi lagg rahi. "mai bathere dhamrik jagah ja k dekhya koi fayda nahi hoya"

"Ithe v ik vaar jaake dekh ley..koi nuksaan tan nahi hai" kehke maa ne usda mooh phir ik baar dono hathan ch farya. "

"gal tan theek hai..nuksaan v ki hai jan da..." rajpreet ne man ch sochya."jithe ainna kuch kita..eh v sahi"

"kinni door hai eh DERA?" baal piche kardi hoi ne maa ton puchya.

"Bas adhe gante da raasta...kal chalde aa" maa ne jawaab ditta.


TO BE CONTINUED

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