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DERA ( Part-2)

"kinni door hai eh DERA?" baal piche kardi hoi ne maa ton puchya.

"Bas adhe gante da raasta...kal chalde aa" maa ne jawaab ditta.

AGLE DIN

"kithe reh gyi kuriye?" rajpreet de room bahar khari ne aawaz lagayi. " late ho jana appa phir"

"aayi mom...2 min plz" Kamre de andro di rajpreet di aawaz aayi.

"chalo chaliye" kehndi hoi rajpreet ne room da door kholea. Usnu dekh maa da mattha thankea.

"hor koi kapre hai nahi rajpreet...?" rajpreet nu upron thalle tak dekhde hoye boli. "kuch jyaada fitting lag reha"

"kyun? ki kharabi aa mom?" apne laal top nu neeli jeans vich dindi hoi boli. "mai tan ehi payundi a"

"putt DERE jana hai...koi punjabi suit ya pajami suit hai nahi ?" Usdi moti shaatiyan te bahar nu nikle chitad dekh maa sochan ch pai gayi.

"offo mom...DERA hi hai..naale mai kehra ikalli hona jeans-top ch uthe" oh maa de dono hath farh darwaze wal chal payi. " aajo kuch nahi hunda... modern ho rahi duniya".

Dil tan maa da nahi karya par man ch socheya shayad usdi kuri sachh keh rahi a. Oh jyada hi narrow minded ban rahi hai. Papa nu bazaar ghumman da bahana bana ditta. Thori door bus stop pahunch ke bus layi te DERE wal nu chal paye. Bus ch sare mard rajpreet de motiya shaatian te tight bund nu ghoorde rahe.

Kareeb 35 mins baad bus ne ek chaurahe te utaar ditta. Uthe bande da naamo nishaan nahic. Unha chaar raaste vicho ik raaste di side te likhya milya " DERE LYI RAASTA IDHAR HAI" naal direction layi arrow v paayi c. Dono paidal udhar wal chal payian.


"mai bhull gayi kal puchna...pehla kdi gye dere"? turdi hoi rajpreet ne sawaal kita.

"haan..ik saheli de naal gayi c 6 ku mahine pehla. bechari nu cancer di bimari c." saaho saah hoi ne jawaab ditta.

"phir theek ho gyi c?" rajpreet ne phir sawaal kita.

"kehndi c sudhaar aaya kuch..jyada gall nhi hoi meri is baare" turdi hoi nu saah charh gya c.

Rajpreet ne saamne nazar dorai tan usnu laal-bhoore rang di building nazar aayi jo khandar wargi lag rahi c. Nale kuch log v nazar aayune shuru ho gaye. Par hairaani di gall c ki koi mard ithe nazar nahi aaya. Jithe v nazar dorao ladies hi ladies. Saaho saah hoye oh thori der ik pathar kol ruk gaye. Pahari charna sokha kam thori aa saarya layi.

"mom DERA sirf ladies layi aa?" usne raaste ch paye wadde pathar te modha tikayunde keha. "koi mard nahi diss reha".
"haan puttar janania hi aayundia mangat mannan ...par DERE de sant te sewak hi mard han.
" usne jawaab ditta.

"Strange..! kyun ladies hi kyun?" rajpreet ne phir pucchya. Pathar to uth dono phir ton chalna start ho gaye.

"beta kdo da banya hai dera...shuru to ehi chalda a reha. Na kise ne puchya ..na kise ne janan di koshish kiti. Haan jo mango poora hunda..eh gall sabh kehnde aa" Oh sawalan de jawaab de akk gyi c.

Galla karde karde dono akhir DERA pahunch hi gaye. DERE di building bahut vaddi c te jisde chaaro taraf bhaant bhaant de fullan naal mehke bagiche lagge diss rahe c. DERE de sirf do darwaze c. Ik enter karn layi saamne te dujja exit karan layi piche. Do bande entry te exit gate te khare c. Lagda oh sevadar c. Log bahut c jinha vch jyadatar aurtan hi c te naal kayi bacche lai k aaye c. Changi tarah dekhan te rajpreet nu ajeeb lagga, usto ilawa sab ne suit ya traditional kapre paaye a. Par apni ego karke boli nahi. 1 saal to baad usde andar aas jo jagi aa.

"token lai lao...token lai lao g" Entry de gate de khabbe paaseoo aawaz sunayi ditti. Maa udhar nu tur payi. Rajpreet DERE da round maaran laggi.

"1 token veer g" rajpreet di maa ne bolya. Us bande ne register aage kita jis ch form type pages nazar aaye . Rajpreet di maa ne us utte kuch likhya te vapis usnu pakra ditta. Phir us aadmi ne lohe da vadda sikka usdi tali te rakhya. Eh gol aakar da sikka c jiste number likhya c 13.

"mareez kon a beebi g"? Laal kapre paayi us bande ne sawaal kita. Maa ne hath nal ishara rajpreet taraf kita. " tusi andar jaoo..tusi bahar baitho beebi g" Rajpreet nu andar jaan da ishara kardea keha.

"mom mainu nahi pata ki karna...tusi aajo naal?" kehndi hoi rajpreet apni mom wal murh gayi.

"aape pata lag jana..mareez hi andar ja sakda" maa ne usnu token farha andar jan layi halka dhakka marya.

Rajpreet chupchap khabbe-sajje bund matkandi entry de darwaze kol pahunchi. Dona cho ik sevadar ne token dekhya. 13 number parde saar hi oh dono aapas vich smile karan lagge . Phir usne token vapis karde hoye darwaza khol ditta. Oh andar daakhil ho gayi. Dakhil hundi de jeans ch dhasse football chitdan nu dekhna na bhulle. Dujje ne fir kundi lava darwaza band kar ditta.

Andar bahut halki jehi laal roshni c te hawawan vich hawan te dhoof di smell felli hoi c. Bahut dhyaan nal dekhan te usnu kuch nazar aa reha c . Thore kadam challi tan saamne sone di vaddi moorti te nazar payi jo kareeb 15-20 feet di hovegi. Sona nehre vich chamak reha c. Moorti de kol aake dekhya tan oh kise tarah de ajeeb janwar di laggi. Jisda dharr laal rang da sher varga c te thalle poori body insaan di tarah. Rajpreet dekh ke darr gayi c.

"13 number?" bhaari aawaz sunayi ditti. Par rajpreet nu koi nazar naa aaya.

"hanji" rajpreet ne jawaab ditta. Usnu laggya sant di aawaz hai.

"baccha nahi ho reha..." aawaz phir aayi.

"ji." rajpreet sunke chaunk gayi. "par tuhanu kida pata baba g?

"1 saal ho gya par santaan di parapti nahi hoi." aawaz ne jawaab ditta. "depression ne v kabza kita hoya shareer te puttar"

"hmmm" rajpreet eh sunke chaunk gayi. "eh sabh baba g nu kiven pata" man ch sochdi hoi idhar udhar phir dekhn laggi.

"doctor kehnde isda koi ilaaz nahi baba g." rajpreet nu sant te vishwaas ho reha c. " theek kar do is bimaari nu baba g..."

"phir tusi bilkul sahi jagah te aaye ho" aawaz ne aas jagayi. "saamne moorti dekh rhe ho?"

"ji dekh rhi haan" rajpreet ne saamne dekhya.

"1 ganta pooja karni pavegi..Haftean andar sare gam door ho jange" Aawaz ne nimarta nal keha.

"mai tayaar han.." rajpreet nu bharosa ho chukka c." pooja karni kis tarah baba g?"

" dass dinne aa..par uston pehla ik vachan dena pavega" aawaz ne zordaar tarike nal keha.

"kis tarah da vachan baba g?"

"Is pooja baare kise hor nu naa dassya jaave.." Aawaz sunke rajpreet da mattha phir thankea.

"par kayun baba g?"

"eh sadi sidhian da asool hai puttar...je dssuge fal nahi milega" Aawaz ne uttar ditta.

" nahi dassugi baba g...apne mom di kasam lagge" rajpreet ne jhatt haan kar ditti.

"pooja layi tayaar ho ?" aawaz ne puchya.

"hanji tayar haan " jawaab ditta.

TO BE CONTINUED

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