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kivata g todi har story att hun di a baki phele update pata lag gya story bhot sirra te dekh de a ki hun da

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2nd update of story

condtion kafi critical c patient di.. ventilator la kafi der tak usdi heart beat tey bp nu monitor tey observe kardi rahi kanchan baki reports tey test b udon tak purey ho gaye...
"acha doctor mein chaldi haan j koi emergency hoyi tan dr. sehgal nu call kar lena ... close checkup rakheo ..kafi critical a " dr. mehra tey baki staff wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan apna hand baig chukdi boli
"ji madam ..." kafi aukhey c unha layi picley 3/4 ghantey patient nu ventialate kardey hoye usdi condtion nu stable karna .. par kambyab nai hoye tan ventilator la usdi condtion kuch normal hon di wait kran lagey rat b kafi ho gayi c savery baki doctors tey senior nal discuss karkey e agey ki karna sochea ja sakda c
ghar nu jandi hoyi kanchan di gaddi di speed apney aap tez ho gayi uston.... pta c usnu ghar usdi ladli dhee niti usda intzaaar kar rahi honi tey naraj tey gussey b vohat honi. masoom jehi bechari dey school ch aj usda pehla function c tey o attend na kar saki par ki kardi profession he usda ajeha c ...apney dimag ch sochdi hoyi kidan niti nu convince karegi gaddi nu shortcut dey rastey turn kar lya ..rat da vella c aksar o es rastey ton ghar nu jandi hundi c ..agey shayd naka lga hoyea c gaddi rokni payi.. sheeshey kol aa 2 sipahi khadey hoye
"madam gaddi side tey layo " ek sipahi bolea
"kyoun.." sheesha thalley kardi hoyi kanchan boli
"over speed tey car chala rahey c tusi tey belt b nai layi "duja sipahi kanchan di hik wal ghurda bolea
"ohhhhh "hun yad aya kanchan nu kahli kahli ch usney seat belt nai layi apni hik wal ghurdey hoye sipahi nu vekh apney mummeya tey chunni nu theek kardi boli "sorry kahli ch .."
"hmmmmmmm.."ek sipahi bolea "gaddi side tey layo tey saheb nal gal karo"
es ton pehlan k kanchan kuch boldi unha da saheb police inspector b gaddi kol aa khad gya
"ki gal madam ji accident karna " kanchan dey chehrey wal ghurda inspector bolea "eni tez gaddi chala rahey c "
"nai nai o bas "inspector wal vekhdi kanchan boli"sorry"
lagda party ton aa rahey o jarur drink kiti honi " bina kanchan di gal suney inspector bolea "thalley utron.."
"mein doctor haan tey hospital ton .." kanchan usnu samjan di kosis kardi boli
"fer ki hoyea doctor party tey nai jandey ja fer drink nahi kardey "apna roab dikhanda inspector bolea "tahlley utro.."
inspector di kadak awaz tey jidan ustey roab pa riha c utrna e pya usnu car ton haithan
"pa madam dey munh ch " kamini muskan muskuranda hoyea inspector apny kol khadey sipahi wal vekhda bolea
"ki matlab " ajeeb lga usnu inspector da behavior insult b feel hoyi ek inspector usnu drunk samaj k usda test.."
"kuch nai madam ..meter pa k check karna kini ku piti a " kamina hassa hasda hoyea inspector bolea "tusi ki samjea mein ki paan lga tuhadey munh ch .."
"behave ur self gal kran di tameej nai tuhanu "gussa chad gya kanchan nu edan inspector nu double meaning gal kardey vekh
"tameej hai esi layi munh ch pa riha "apney hath ch fadey alchoal meter nu kanchan dey bullan tey ferdda inspector usdi chunni haithan lukey hoye mummeya wal ghurda bolea
ek sunsan sadak uton badtameej inspector tey usdey sipahi saaf lag riha c sab ney nasha kita hoyea jyada munh nai lagna chahundi c chup chap alchohal test karwan layi sah len lagi
"drink tan nai kiti jnab esney "sipahi meter wal vekhda bolea
"lod b ki hai .. sharab di bottal wargi tan aap hai "upar ton lay haithan tak kanchan dey jism dey utarcharav nu napda hoyea inspector apney munchan tey taav dinda bolea "chalo talashi deo "
"talashi kyoun " ek kadam pichey nu hatdi hoyi kanchan boli "mein doctor haan naley tusi meri talashi nayi lay sakdey lady police kithey hai "
"jyada kanoon na sikha menu " kanchan wal agey nu wad da hoyea inspector bolea " chup chap talashi len dey nahi tan khunjey ch lija k nangi karkey talashi layounga .."
"mein tuahdi complaint krangi " thori ghabra b gayi jidan inspector apney hath usdey wal lay k aa riha c "tusi edan behave kardey o sehar dey lokan nal.."
"koi na kar dayi complaint mein tan apni duty kar riha " agey ho kanchan deye modeya tey hath rakh usdean akhan ch vekhda inspector bolea " jyada nakhra na kar talashi lay lein dey tera ki gass jana .. j thora vohat swad mere hathan nu mil jayo"
"shut up "gharbrayi hoyi kanchan pichey nu hatdi edar udar vekhdi boli
"chuppppppppp"apney bullan tey ungal rakhda inspector bolea "jyada nakhra kita tey asin tino teri talashi lawangey... fer tenu pta e hona jad police lendi a tan kidan lendi a .."apney nal khadey siphean wal vekh hasda hoyea inspector apni munchan nu taw dindey ghabrayi hoyi kanchan dey sahan nal upar thalley hundey mummeya nu ghurda apney bullan tey jeev feran lga
achank ek tez bike unha dey kol aa ruki .. ek munda apney sar ton helmet lahnda hoyea bolea "sir ji ki kar rahey o eni rat nu ek kudi nu rok k "
"kaun a tun .."rang ch bhang paindey vekh inspector us mundey nu ghurda hoyea bolea
"jo b haan tusi daso kyoun tang kar rahey o enha nu .."bike ton utar munda us wal anda bolea
"daso oye esnu asin kaun haan "mundey dey munh tey tourch di roshni marda inspector gussey ch apney bandeya wal vekhda bolea
thori rahat tey sah jeha aya kanchan nu nahi tan jidan badtameeji kar riha c inspector andar tak dar gayi c
"jayo madam tusi .." kanchan wal vekhda munda bolea "mein karda enha nal gal .."
mundey nu eney confidence tey himmat nal gal kardey vekh inspector chah k b kanchan nu rok na sakea bas gussey ch kanchan nu apni car wal jandi hoyi vekhda riha soch lya c usney aj es mundey nu nahi bakhshuga .. hor kuch nai tan nashey da case tan jaroor payounga es tey
unha kolan car ch langdi hoyi kanchan ney nafrat bhari najar nal inspector wal vekhea fer kol khadey mundey wal...dil e dil ch usda shukeraya kita hanera c par fer b chan di roshi tey jadon inspector ney usdey munh tey tourch di roshni mari c usnu lga kitey vekhea hoyea hai es mundey nu .....


"niti so gayi "ghar aa kahli kahli ch hall ch beithi tv vekhdi apni maid anju wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan ney puchea
"nai didi kehndi jad tak mummy nahi andey sona nai " anju usdey hath ton hang baig fad ek passey rakhdi hoyi boli " tusi mil lavo usnu mein tuhadey layi pani lay k andi haan .."
chahey apni ladli dhee nu milan kamrey ch ja rahi c par dil dharak riha c kadam bhari hundey ja rahey c pta c usnu andar beithi udas masoom niti usnu udeek rahi a ...
"mummy tusi aa gaye " kanchan nu vekh bed ton utar bhajdi hoyi niti usdean lattan nal chimbd di hoyi boli
sah aya kanchan nu edan khush ho k bhajdi hoyi niti nu apney wal andi vekh pairan bhar beith usdey chehrey wal vekh usnu ghut k apni hik nal la skoon milya usdey dil nu
"pta mummy kina mja aya fucction ch tey mere act ch tan sarea ney kini der clapping kiti "apni masoom totli awaz ch niti kanchan wal vekhdi boli
"sorry baby mein aa nai saki " khush ho chehkdi niti nu vekh usnu chuk bed wal lijandi kanchan boli... dhee dey chehrey di khushi nu vekh usda apna dil kushi nal bhar uthea
"i know mom ... tusi kisi critical patient da ilaaz kar rahey c " bed tey beith kanchan di godi ch apna sar rakhdi hoyi niti boli
"haan putt vohat e critical case aa gya c nai tan mein jaror ana c " niti dey sar tey hath ferdi kanchan boli
"pta menu mummy"gardan ghuma kanchan wal vekhdi niti boli"function ch ek uncle aye c unha ney dasea k tusi hospital ch busy o unha da ilaaz kran ch .."
"baby mom aa gaye nu hun so jayo pls kafi rat ho gayi a " pani di tray lay andar andi anju niti wal vekhdi boli
pani da ghut bhardi hoyi kanchan nu yakeen nahi ho riha c usdi dhee kini syani tey samajdar ho gayi a nahi tan o ehi sochdi dar rahi c k niti ney ro ro k apna bura hall kar lita hona .....
"haan putt kafi rat ho gayi a" niti dey sar tey hath ferdi kanchan usdey math nu chumdi anju wal vekhdi boli"tun b mere karkey kafi late ho gayi anju "
"koi na didi naldey ghar e tan jana hai ..." muskurandi hoyi anju boli "tusi change kar lavo mein dinner lga dindi haan .."
"nai tun ja hun ..tera husband udeekda hona .. mein kha lawangi kafi late ho gayi a tun " anju wal vekhdi kanchan boli kai salan ton anju uskol e kam kardi c vohat e changi c usnalo wadh o niti da khiyal rakhdi c kanchan b usnu maid ghat tey apni bhain wang e samjdi c ..
"suta pya hona pee key mera husband " kanchan wal vekh hasdi hoyi anju boli "tusi change karo mein dinner lagandi haan .."
"rokdi kyoun nai tun usnu sharab peen ton.." anju wal vekhdi kanchan boli
"rokna ki a didi peenda tan peenda rahey .. changa sago pee k so janda nai tan rat rat bhar son nai dinda putey sidey .."boldi boldi apney dandan tey jeev dba chup kar gayi anju . kol e kanchan di godi tey sar rakh niti unha dean e gallan sun rahi c
samaj nai ayi kannchan nu hassey k kuch boley anju di gal sun fer niti nu bed tey pa uthdi hoyi boli "changa fer mein change kar lwan tun dinner gram kar..."

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"sorry didi late ho gayi " savery andey e anju ney sab ton pehlan kanchan ton maffi mangi fer bed tey suti payi niti wal vekhdi boli " aj niti nu chutti c es layi mein .."
"koi na fer ki hoyea rat gayi b tan late c .."apney gilley wallan nu towel nal punjdi kanchan anju wal vekhdi boli " mein kitchen ch cha bna k rakhi a aap b lay lay tey mere layi b lay aa "
"ji didi .."kamrey ton bahar nu jandi hoyi ruk gayi anju fer kanchan wal vekhdi boli "didi pta kal rat una road waley chowk ch katal ho gya .."
"kis da .." apney gilley wall punjdi punjdi kanchan anju wal vekhdi boli
"police walea da .. kisi ney tin police walea da galla wad katal kar dita " kanchan wal vekhdi boli "pta nai ki ho riha sadey sehar ch police waley b hun .."
"ohhhhhhhhhh.."ek dum dil dharak uthea kanchan da .. thori ghabrayi hoyi anju wal vekdhi kanchan boli " kithey hoyea "
"una road waley chowk ch ...rat naka layea hoyea c badmasha ney mar ditey " anju boli"chado tusi eh didi kyoun saverey savery apna mood khrab karna mein cha lay k andi haan .."
keh k chali tan gayi anju par kanchan dean lattan kamaban lagea mathey tey passina aa gya usi chowk ch tan police walea ney usnu rokea c tey badtameeji kran di kosis kiti c tey ek mundey ney .. kitey us mundey ney e tan nai ..."oh no "apney munh tey hath rakh anju di chah lay k aan di udeek kran lagi ...oh tan bhul e gayi c rat nakey tey police walea ney usnal ... usney tan bas ehi sochea c aj unha di complaint karugi ....par unha da tey katal
"nai nai .. mein koi complaint ja fer us barey kisi nal gal nai karni "apney aap nal boldi hoyi kanchan ney soch lya o es barey kuch nai bolugi kisi nal .........


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hospital puj k b usney es barey apney senior doctors nal koi gal nai kiti.. sidi emergency ch aa us patient di condition da pta kran layi dr.mehra kol puji .."
"ki sttatus hai" nurse ton file fad rat dean reports tey status check kardi hoyi ney dr. mehra wal vekhdey hoye puchea
"kafi critical a .. hope nai lagdi" mayous hoyea dr. mehra kanchan wal vekhda bolea
"uff doctor saheb kini bar keha tuhanu jad tak akhiri sah chalda a hope nai chad di ..j asin e hope chad devangey tan patient..." dr. mehra wal vekhdi hoyi kanchan boli " kidni ch koi effect nahi ajay tak.."
"ji ajay tak tan kidni normal respond kar rahi a par j jyada der ventilator tey rakhea tan kidni ..."kuch sohcdea hoyea dr. merha bolea " pulse rate. heart beat tey bp b down ho riha ..."
"hmmmm.." tusi dhiyan rakho tey dr. sehgal tey dr. joshi nu kaho har velley koi na koi es patient nu attend karey ..es da har 30 minute bad status observe kran "
"ji .."kanchan dey hath ton file fad usnu emergency ton bahar jandey hoye vekhda dr. merha bolea ... c tan uston choti par usdey kam kran da tareeka tey patient di care vekh hamesha usdey dil ch dr. kanchan dey layi ek ijjat c...
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"kuch improvement " sham nu chutti kar ton jan ton pehlan mud us patient nu vekhan emergency ch aa kanchan ney nurse nu puchea
"no doctor .."nurse kanchan wal vekhdi boli "par heartbeat tey bp stable hai .."
"hmmmmm..dr. mehra kithey ney aye nai duty ch ajay ..."edar udar vekhdi hoyi kanchan ney puchea
"aa gaye ney mein bulandi haan unha nu .."dr. mehra wal jandi hoyi nurse boli
badi gaur nal monitor tey display ho rahey patient dey status nu read kardi kanchan di najar jad usdey chehrey tey payi usnu lga kithey vekhea hai esnu .. par kithey much ch oxigen mask lga c es layi shyad pehchan na saki ..
"yes doctor"ajay o usnu pehchanan di kosis kar e rahi c k dr. mehra us kol aa khada hoyea
"haan doctor ah credit card a ..es di admission tey baki payments account department ch .." dr. mehra wal card kardi hoyi kanchan boli
"par eh tan tuhada card a "thora hairan hoyea dr. mehra card wal vekhda bolea
"haan mera a .." badey normal tarkeekey nal behave kardi kanchan boli "tusi payment jma karwayo .. naley es da baig mere gaddi ch rakhwa deo .. mein vekhdi haan usch esdey kisi relative da koi pta ja address .."
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jaldi aa gayi c aj ghar ek tan kal late hon karkey jo usnu police walea ney tang kran di kosis kiti uton sehar ch hoye katal karkey usda dil nai c hospital ch rukan da kam b koi jyada nai c

niti nu anju park ch lay gayi .. fresh ho apney room ch sofey tey beithi dey dimag ch bar bar us patient da chehrey ghum riha c pehchan an di kosis kar rahi c kithey vekhea usney usnu.. par kuch yaad nai aa riha c ... achanak usnu us patient dey baig di yaad ayi .. chuk mez tey rakh es umeed nal kholan lagi shayd us ch usnu us barey koi information mil javey tey usdey rishteydaran nu inform kar sakey.. par kuch nai c bas kapdey c ..tey ek vellet...
vellet kholea kuch cash c kuch cards.. tey ek pic vohat e sohni kudi di .. bhurean bhurean akhan gora chitta masoom chehra bull muskurandey hoye .. enj lag riha c pic vekh jiven hun e bol payegi o pic ...kuch der pic wal vekhdi rahi fer yad aya us patient ney usnu keha c j usnu kuch ho gya tan vellet ch ek number hai us number ch inform kar devey ..esi umeed ch usney pura vellet vekh lya par number na milia ..akhir usnu pic dey pichey likhiya number milia..sah tey sakoon aya usnu shukar a kuch tan pta lga usnu .. apna phone chuk number milan lagi .. hun tan usnu b kahli c eh pta kran di kaun hai eh patient tey eh usnu bas es number ton e pta lag sakda c ... jiven e number dial kita usdey kanna ch awaz ayi "tuhanu keha c na .. es number nu udon e dial kareo j menu kuch ho javey ..." ek dum usdey kanna ch awaz gunj uthi.. ghabrayi hoyi ney phone wal vekhea agley e pal usdey munh ton cheekh nikal gayi phone hath ton chut k dig pya .. munh tey hawayean udan lagean..sah tez tez challan lagey ..jhatkey nal uth khadi ho gayi lattan kamban lagea
"tusi tusi tusi.......ethey ki ki kidan......"larkhandi hoyi awaz ch kanchan samney sofey tey beithey bandey wal vekh haklandi hoyi boli ..jan nikal k galley ch atak gayi c..pura shareer paisney nal bhij gya ...
"tuhanu keha c na phone udon kareo jado menu kuch ho javey "muskuranda hoyea sofey tey beitha banda bolea
par tusi tan ventilator tey fer ethey.."haklandi kamb di awaz ch kanchan boli lattan enia kamb rehean c k dharam karkey sofey tey dig payi ...
"mein tan hun kitey b ..."muskuranda hoyea banda bolea tey agley e pal sofey ton gayb ho gya
apney goddea tey hath mardi cheekh payi kanchan sah tan ukhad k usdi jan e kadan lagey ..eh ki... ghabryi paseeno pasini hoyi apney mathey tey aye passiney nu punjdi edar udar vekhan lagi
"hellow .." achanak usnu apney kanna ch mud usdi awaz sunayi diti jad gardan ghuma k vekhea ek dum kamb k khadi ho gayi usdey nal e sofey tey aa beitha c oh...
"kaun o tusi .."jan pran suk gaye kanchan dey ...usnu apney kol aa beithey vekh
"pehchanea nai .. kal b milia c tuhanu police nakey tey ..."muskuranda hoyea o banda bolea
"ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... "hauka bharea sah lay apni hik tey hath rakh dari hoyi kanchan us wal vekhan lagi ...haan haan ohi c oh jehra rat nakey tey .............

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Thanks ji. Its start hope u wl enjoy whole story

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what eee thrill update...... what eee thrill...

koi shabad nai mere kol... pora dimag sun ho gya....

suruat bahut vadia c... kanchan ne us patient nu check kita... kuj bhi normal nai c..

phir kanchan apne ghar wal nikal gai..

raste vich usnu chonk te police wale mil gye... menu laga ke police wale shyad us nal kuj galat karan ge... par ohh god.. ik munda othe a gya bike te..

usne kanchan nu bacha liya....

kanchan ghar a gai...

niti .. bahut hi cute te sweet character laga..

anju.. new character... eh v bahut vadia laga...

agla din.. kanchan nu sware sware pata laga ke una police walyian da khone ho gya hai...

par oh mar kive gye... te oh munda kon c...

bahut hi vadia te duperb update c.. ik hi update vich dil diyan dhadkana vada dityian..mam u r amazing writer... ..

kanchan ne jadu ghar ake phone kita.. us kudi nu...

oh my god... i m shocked... ik horror jeha pal mehsus hoya...

lekin oh admi ik gyab ho gya.. te phir kanchan kol ohi rat wala munda ake beth gya... par kive

how possible.... mam u r to gud...

es update vich thrill ... horror..sab kuch c...




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first off all congo for new thread.....rbb kre eh v rishteya di chaanv wng dila te raaz kree......

jis hisab nl tuc likh rhe o this is one of the most awsm story on xossip

dono updates bht sohne c..knchn da apne past bre sochna..pta ni kiniyn k musibatn jhl k apne maa peyo nl ldd k ohne sunil nl viah krwaya hou prr oh bhr ja oss pyar nu dina ch bhul jndaa..

te NIMI wachari school ch apni mom di wait kr rhi c.. ohde school ch ohda pehla function c jihde ch oh prfrm kr rhi c.. sbb de parents aaye hone mee sirf ohde mom ni aaye..bura ta lgeya hou ohnuu kehra hje mature c nikki jhi ta hai hje prr smjh gyii oh apni mom di mjboori nu smjh gyii....

NIMI de kirdaar nl cute ness jhi rhu story ch ohdiyn shraartan de zariye.....

anu da kirdaa v sohnaa.. jive oh ghr da kmm kr k apna ghr chla rhi aa..te ohda ghrwala shraabi aa...aukha hundaa eda kise v aurat lyii kmm krnaa prr ki kriye majboori ye greebi sb kuj krwa dindi aa....

knchn da kirdaar bht sohnaa kive oh apne hubby toh alag reh k apni dhee nl zindgi kat rhi aa..wachari kre v kii jihnu pyar kita c jd ohi dhokha de jwee ta bnda kise pase joga ni rehndaa...

sunil de kirdaar ch NRI prsns di reality jhlak rhi aa vyi kive koi v insaan apne benifitt lyi apneya nu bhul jndaa te othe kise hor di bhukl ch soo jndaa...

te bkii jo tuc oh police wich include kiti oh v bht vdiaa.. moslty raat nu eda e hundaa....ehthe tuc dsseya vyi ik kudi nl koi v chahe oh police wala howe ya koi horr oh kkive behave krdaa jdo oh ekali hundi..

te jdo knchn nl kuj glt hon lgdaa achanak ohthe koi munda aa jndaa te knchn de saah ch saah aaya.. ho na hoo ess munde da knchn nl koi purana rishta houu....

ik gl hor oh munda ohthe kive aaya ohnu kive pta lgeya vyi ohthe kise nl kuj glt ho rhaa.. te agle din knchn news ch dkhdi aa vyi ohi police waleya da katal ho gya jina ne ohde nl mis behve kita c..

bki jive tuc wich horror add kita oh v bht vdiaa.... oss bnde da mrnaa te jdo knchn da kise nu phn krna te oss bnde da ohnu kehnaa. te ohtho gayab ho jnaa..hun dkhde aa oss bnde de rishtedaar kon nee..

dkde aa ehh rooh ki rang le k aau knchn di life ch...

te achanak jdo knchn de kanna ch awwz pyi ta oh oss insaan nu dkh k shock ho gyii..eh ohi c jisne ohnu oss raat bachaya c. prr eh ethe kive....

bki rhi gl police waleya de katal dii ohh u ne ik suspence create kr rhee...

bki hun dkhde aa agge tuc ki ki nwee rng le k aaunde oo.. jo v le k aauge sch keh rhaa sbb de hosh udaogee....

keep writingg.........

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what eee thrill update...... what eee thrill...

koi shabad nai mere kol... pora dimag sun ho gya....

suruat bahut vadia c... kanchan ne us patient nu check kita... kuj bhi normal nai c..

phir kanchan apne ghar wal nikal gai..

raste vich usnu chonk te police wale mil gye... menu laga ke police wale shyad us nal kuj galat karan ge... par ohh god.. ik munda othe a gya bike te..

usne kanchan nu bacha liya....

kanchan ghar a gai...

niti .. bahut hi cute te sweet character laga..

anju.. new character... eh v bahut vadia laga...

agla din.. kanchan nu sware sware pata laga ke una police walyian da khone ho gya hai...

par oh mar kive gye... te oh munda kon c...

bahut hi vadia te duperb update c.. ik hi update vich dil diyan dhadkana vada dityian..mam u r amazing writer... ..

kanchan ne jadu ghar ake phone kita.. us kudi nu...

oh my god... i m shocked... ik horror jeha pal mehsus hoya...

lekin oh admi ik gyab ho gya.. te phir kanchan kol ohi rat wala munda ake beth gya... par kive

how possible.... mam u r to gud...

es update vich thrill ... horror..sab kuch c...



Thanks. Yeh its thrling romantic horror story . Katal b hongey kuch insaana dey kuch dil tey pyar dey . Just incest ton hat k likhan di ek kosis suspense horror n thrilling thanks for ur comment

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