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Old 10th July 2017
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first off all congo for new thread.....rbb kre eh v rishteya di chaanv wng dila te raaz kree......

jis hisab nl tuc likh rhe o this is one of the most awsm story on xossip

dono updates bht sohne c..knchn da apne past bre sochna..pta ni kiniyn k musibatn jhl k apne maa peyo nl ldd k ohne sunil nl viah krwaya hou prr oh bhr ja oss pyar nu dina ch bhul jndaa..

te NIMI wachari school ch apni mom di wait kr rhi c.. ohde school ch ohda pehla function c jihde ch oh prfrm kr rhi c.. sbb de parents aaye hone mee sirf ohde mom ni aaye..bura ta lgeya hou ohnuu kehra hje mature c nikki jhi ta hai hje prr smjh gyii oh apni mom di mjboori nu smjh gyii....

NIMI de kirdaar nl cute ness jhi rhu story ch ohdiyn shraartan de zariye.....

anu da kirdaa v sohnaa.. jive oh ghr da kmm kr k apna ghr chla rhi aa..te ohda ghrwala shraabi aa...aukha hundaa eda kise v aurat lyii kmm krnaa prr ki kriye majboori ye greebi sb kuj krwa dindi aa....

knchn da kirdaar bht sohnaa kive oh apne hubby toh alag reh k apni dhee nl zindgi kat rhi aa..wachari kre v kii jihnu pyar kita c jd ohi dhokha de jwee ta bnda kise pase joga ni rehndaa...

sunil de kirdaar ch NRI prsns di reality jhlak rhi aa vyi kive koi v insaan apne benifitt lyi apneya nu bhul jndaa te othe kise hor di bhukl ch soo jndaa...

te bkii jo tuc oh police wich include kiti oh v bht vdiaa.. moslty raat nu eda e hundaa....ehthe tuc dsseya vyi ik kudi nl koi v chahe oh police wala howe ya koi horr oh kkive behave krdaa jdo oh ekali hundi..

te jdo knchn nl kuj glt hon lgdaa achanak ohthe koi munda aa jndaa te knchn de saah ch saah aaya.. ho na hoo ess munde da knchn nl koi purana rishta houu....

ik gl hor oh munda ohthe kive aaya ohnu kive pta lgeya vyi ohthe kise nl kuj glt ho rhaa.. te agle din knchn news ch dkhdi aa vyi ohi police waleya da katal ho gya jina ne ohde nl mis behve kita c..

bki jive tuc wich horror add kita oh v bht vdiaa.... oss bnde da mrnaa te jdo knchn da kise nu phn krna te oss bnde da ohnu kehnaa. te ohtho gayab ho jnaa..hun dkhde aa oss bnde de rishtedaar kon nee..

dkde aa ehh rooh ki rang le k aau knchn di life ch...

te achanak jdo knchn de kanna ch awwz pyi ta oh oss insaan nu dkh k shock ho gyii..eh ohi c jisne ohnu oss raat bachaya c. prr eh ethe kive....

bki rhi gl police waleya de katal dii ohh u ne ik suspence create kr rhee...

bki hun dkhde aa agge tuc ki ki nwee rng le k aaunde oo.. jo v le k aauge sch keh rhaa sbb de hosh udaogee....

keep writingg.........
Thanks for ur so valuable detail comment. Punjabi ch horror story likhan di ek kosis kar rahi haan full of emotions thrill romance horror n suspense. Thanjs tmfor giving time to read it

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Thanks for ur so valuable detail comment. Punjabi ch horror story likhan di ek kosis kar rahi haan full of emotions thrill romance horror n suspense. Thanjs tmfor giving time to read it
tuhadi eh koshish jrur kamyaab houu....

tuhadi kalam da kuj nwa read krn nu miluu...

fr risteya di chaanv v conti. rhuu k ohnu delay kro ge ....

u fi kalam da incest ta read kr lyaa jo v bht e vdiaa treeke nl beyaan kita gya c.. hun thrill n romance read krn nu miluu

rbb kree eh v rishteya di chaanv wng sucess howeee....

keep writinggg.....

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