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Nagmen Naye Poorane

Nagme Naye Poorane

There are many threads on sher-o-shayri.

This is one more but with a difference,

ye Naye Porane ustadon ke kalamon ko phir se gungunaae ki kosish karegi. Sher, Gazal aur nazm ke saath saath isame hindi ke geeton ko bhi sthan milega aur halanki isame mashoor shayaron ke kaalm aayenge lekin is ke saath kuch aisi bhi nazmen aa sakti hain jo purkhalish ho…bhale hi vo kisi anjan shayar ki hi kyon no ho…

aur sabse badi meri darkhvaast hai apane readers se ki vo jarror apane manspasnd shayron ki shayri post Karen …aur agar unki khud ki likhi ho to kahna hi kya…..

Shuru main maine tin shyaron ka chunvaav kiya hai…
Mir Taki Meer, Faiz Ahamd Faiz aur Firak Gorakhpuri…..

mujhe urdu shayari ka koyi khas ilm nahin hai lekin ye meri ek choti si koshish hai share karane ki…

Galatiyan bahoot hongi..jaise meri kahani mian hoti hain ..lekin mujhe ummed hai ki aap unhe maaf kar denge to shuru karate hain Ustadon ke Usatd Mir Taki Mir ke kalam se…phir thodi baaten unki jindagi ke bare main…
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Nagme Naye Poorane...Mir

Mir Taki Mir



Reekhtay kay tumhi ustaad nahi ho Ghalib

Kehte hain agle zamane me koi Mir bhi tha


You are not the only master of Urdu, Ghalib
They say there used to be a Mir in the past

Ghalib ke ye lafz, apane aap Mir ke mukaam ke bare main bahoot kuch kah jaate hain….
Ghalib ka ek aur sher hai…


halib apna yeh aqeeda hai baqaul-e-Nasikh

Aap bey behrah hai jo muataqid-e-Mir nahi


Ghalib! Its my belief in the words of Nasikh*,
"He that vows not on Mir, is himself unlearned!"
Nasikh Mir ke shishya hi nahin Lucknow school ki gazal ke ek mashoor hastakshar the.

Meer ke kuch sher mulahija pharamayen….

1. मिरे सलीक़े से मेरी निभी मुहब्बत में
तमाम उम्र नाकामियों से काम लिया


I lived and loved my own way,
made my failures work for me.

2. हमारे आगे तेरा जब किसू ने नाम लिया
दिले-सितमज़दह को हमने थाम-थाम लिया

When someone takes your name in my presence
I have to restrain my love-oppressed heart

3 लगा ने दिल को कहीं, क्या सुना नहीं तूने?
जो कुछ कि मीर का इस आशिक़ी में हाल हुआ

Do not give your heart to anyone, have you not heard
What Mir had to go through, in the cause of love?

4. चाहें तो तुम को चाहें, देखें तो तुम को देखें
ख़्वाहिश दिलों की तुम हो, आँखों की आरज़ू तुम

No one but you to love, and only you to gaze at.
You are my heart's desire and my eyes' longing.

5 हम जानते तो इश्क़ न करते किसू के साथ
ले जाते दिल को ख़ाक में इस आरज़ू के साथ

Had I but known, I would not have fallen in love
I would have taken my yearning heart to the grave

Khudaye Sukhan Mir ke baare main aur baaten hongi lekin aap baatyen kaisi lagi ye koshish
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ज़ख्म झेले दाग़ भी खाए बोहत
दिल लगा कर हम तो पछताए बोहत

दैर से सू-ए-हरम आया न टुक
हम मिजाज अपना इधर लाये बोहत

फूल, गुल, शम्स-ओ-क़मर सारे ही थे
पर हमें उनमें तुम ही भाये बोहत

गर बका इस शोर से शब् को है तो
रोवेंगे सोने को हमसाये बोहत

मीर से पूछा जो मैं आशिक हो तुम
हो के कुछ चुपके से शरमाये बोहत
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हस्ती अपनी हुबाब की सी है
यह नुमाईश सराब की सी है

नाज़ुकी उस के लब की क्या कहिए
पंखुड़ी एक गुलाब की सी है

बार बार उसके दर पे जाता हूं
हालत अब इज़्तिराब की सी है

मैं जो बोला कहा कि यह आवाज़!
उसी ख़ाना-ख़राब की सी है

मीर उन नीम-बाज़ आंखों में
सारी मस्ती शराब की सी है

मीर तक़ी मीर

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दिल-ए-पुर-खूं की एक गुलाबी से
उम्र भर हम रहे शराबी से

जी डहा जाये है सहर से आह
रात गुजरेगी किस खराबी से

खिलना कम कम कली ने सीखा
उसकी आंखों की नीम-ख्वाबी से
बुर्का उठते ही चाँद सा निकला
दाग हूँ उसकी बे-हिजाबी से

काम थे इश्क़ में बोहत से मीर
हम ही फारिग हुए शताबी से
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