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Old 24th September 2017
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anokhe rishte

ssa sarea nu
dosto minu pta hai kayi loka nu mere ute gussa howega coz main pishle stories complete nahi kitiya.
lekin main aj kush kehna chahnda a.
story likhna sokha kam nahi hunda. kayi waar response ni milda te kayi waari write khud ni flow bna panda. mere naal eh dowe ho chuke ne.
ethe xossip te meri 2 stories 100 pages cross kitia ne te ohna vicho iko punjabi vich c. agr 100 pages hoye ne ta main manda kise had tak main vadia likhda ha.

lekin jiwe tuhanu sarea nu pta hai, ethe stories likhn naal tid nahi pal da. roti li kam krna sab to jada vadi priority hai. isli shaidm main regular updates nahi de pa reha c apni last story de te end vich main khud hi ulag geya.

but ode vich meria hor v kafi galtia sigia. minu xossip vich bahut time hoegay hai te is time vich main story changi tarah likhni sikh layi hai. main hun eh last story likhn ja reha a. eh story vich sab hoyega jo main aje tak sikheya.

eh story long howegi te characters limited honge. lekin updates roj na aye ta eh na samjna story khatam. main puri try kranga jald to jald updates den di.

and last vich ina emotional hon di ki lod a, afterall hai te eh sab fun li hi

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Carry on brother u r good writer bss kahani ch charater jda na rakho...main character ik ya do ho skde ne baki sare as a supportive role adaa krde ne...tusi story ch har character nal insaf ni kr skde....apa main character nu sahmne rkh usde aale dwale story nu bun na hai...baki tusi jada samjhdar ho brother....Good Luck
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Confusion kado hundi aa mostly jado ik do to vadh affair chalde ne story vich simultaneously. Writer confuse hunda te reader odo jayda confuse ho janda.

So chracters ghat rakhan da idea sohna hai.

Story leke aao asi support karange.
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Carry on brother u r good writer bss kahani ch charater jda na rakho...main character ik ya do ho skde ne baki sare as a supportive role adaa krde ne...tusi story ch har character nal insaf ni kr skde....apa main character nu sahmne rkh usde aale dwale story nu bun na hai...baki tusi jada samjhdar ho brother....Good Luck
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Confusion kado hundi aa mostly jado ik do to vadh affair chalde ne story vich simultaneously. Writer confuse hunda te reader odo jayda confuse ho janda.

So chracters ghat rakhan da idea sohna hai.

Story leke aao asi support karange.
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khich di kaam

umeed aa eh story jaroor puri hou

wait aa phle update da ???

thanks guys support krn li D
iswar apna best daunga main
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