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chadh di jawani

hi dosto mai pooja likh rahi haa apni pehli story jis da naam hai chadh di jawani... is vich kuch hadd tak reality and us par nu jyada agge tak lai jana meri fantasy hove gi, umeed krdi ha tuc story pasand karoge.........

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agar regular rahoge phir hi start krna ..... waiting for update
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Hello dosto mera aam Pooja hai te mai Punjab de ek pind ch rehndi ha ate pind de he sarkari school ch 10th class ch padh di ha, mere ghar ch mere mummy dady te mere do bhraa sani te mani rehnde han, mera bhra sani mere to ek saal shota hai te mani mere te do saal shota hai, dove 8th or 9th ch padh de han mere he school,
Mera rang gora, tikhe nain naksh hai, jo k meri bilkul tight te fit shreer nu hor v sexy banande hai, pind de bohat sare munde menu propose kr chukke c pr mai kise nu haa nahi kiti c, pr saade school ch 12th class ch ek munda padh da c jis da naam c Vicky, Vicky bohat he sohna munda c, saadi class di har kudi ohde te mar di c, o v menu 2-3 bar propose kr chukka , par mai ohnu haa nahi c kiti pr o menu bohat pasand c,
Mai school ch apni sab to pyari saheli raman nal baithi c, raman mere ghar de kol he rehndi c te o v badi sohni c te ohde chitad ta mere to v thode wadde te gol gol c, mai raman nu keh rahi c k yr Vicky ne mud k menu pucheya ni hun ki kra,ohne keha aaja paani peen chaldia , o raste ch khada aa, tu ohnu smile devi ki pata bula lave, adhi shutti chal rahi c, asi paani peen gaye, mai ohde wall dekh k smile kitti te fr munh thalle nu kar leya, jado asi wapis aan lagge ta ohne menu awaz de k rok ley ate mere kol aa k ohne menu fr keha k plz yr haa krde mai tenu bohat pasand krda, mai kuch ni boli bas thalle nu dekh muskura rahi c, ohne ek parchi jehi menu fadha ditti, mai o fadh k wapis aa gayi, jad mai dekheya ta ohde ch ohne apna no. likheya c, mai raman nu v dikheya, Vicky ne non medical rakheya c jis karke ohna di class adhi shutti nu he chali jandi c, mai apni class ch raman nal galla kar rahi c k saadi class da munda saade kol aa k baith geya, us da naam raju c, raju bada badmash jeha munda c, pehla ta o mere aur raman de bade gande comment kr k shed da hunda c, pr raju Vicky de ghar kol rehnda c te menu kayi bar oohnde bare chukka c, ajj v ohne ehi keha k tu krde ohnu haa,
Mai keha k ajj ohne menu no. ditta hai mai dekhu gi ghar jaa k
Raju- dkhna ki aa haa krde bada changa munda aa,
Mai- hmmmmm dekhu gi ajj,
Thodi der o galla karda reha te fr chala geya, eda he din beet geya shutti hoi te asi ghar aa gaye, ghar aa k roti khadi te fr araam kita sham hoyi te mere dono bhra khelan chale gaye te mummi ghar de kamm ch laggi hoyi c, mai chori chori Vicky nu phn kita
Vicky- hllo
Mai-hi
Vicky-hanji kon?
Mai- jis nu ajj no. ditta c
Vicky- Pooja?
Mai – hanji mai Pooja.
Vicky- ki haal aa tuhada menu lgga c tuc nahi karna phn.
Mai- krlo yakeen fr mai he keeta hai.
Fr asi thodi der galla karde rahe te mai ohnu galla galla ch dass dita k mai v friendship karni aa,
Kayi din tak mai Vicky nu chori chori phn krdi c pr ohnu mili nahi c, ohne menu kayi bar milan li keha c k jaldi school aaji, par mai har bar sakhti nal manaa kardi rahi c, mai Vicky nu pasand ta bohat jyada kardi c pr hale sacha pyar nahi c hoya, par Vicky diya galla to lagda c k o menu sacha pyar karda hai, eda he mai thode thode nakhre krdi c phn ten a milan de, sadia pyar bharia galla shuru ho gayia c, asi school ch v chori chori aand jaande ya adhi shutti de time ek duje wal dekh k smile krde c, sadi friendship bohat wadia jar ahi c pr asi hale tk mile nahi c, bohat sare loka nu sadi friendship da pata v lag chukka , Vicky menu bohat bar milan li keh chukka c mai v thoda mann bna leya c k ek din school jaldi ja k mil age….

Dosto umeed krdi aa tuhanu ehe update pasand aaya hove ga, bas eda he ek plot bna k asi asli maje wall java ge….

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agar regular rahoge phir hi start krna ..... waiting for update
Week ch 3-4 update ta jroor kra gi

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Good Start scene bnon ch jaladbaazi na kro...aaram nal har ik gal nu chngi tra explain krde hoye agge vdhde challo
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