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excellent DEV - I feel honoured As mailed to you I am down with fever .in two three days please feel free to mail me to consult for anything u feel
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" Main use phans kar uske kamre me bed tak le bhi aayi thi aur local agents ko hotel me pahunchne ko message bhi kar diya tha. Saale harami me mere aamo ka thang se ras nikal kar mujhe pura garam kar diya tha. Apne kapre utarne ke baad usne





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mast update ...kya HOT desciption hain ...bas laga sab kuch saamne ho raha hai ...

aap writer nahi painter hain...

shabd se rang bahrate hain aap

ham sab natmastak hai ...

Just grt



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Shandar update bhai.gajab ki writing skill hai aapki. Wah


Thanks bhai !!




Aapko pasand aaya jaan kar kushi hui.

Main to yeh story ko ke liye likh raha tha . komaalrani ne sujhaya tha ki isse publish karna chahiye .

Unki baat ka fayda bhi hua . Jab maine iss se as a reader padha to kuchh kamiya bhi nazar aayi . Aasha karta hoon ki un kamiyo ko main aage ke episodes me dur kar payunga .


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Thanks for you kind visit .

Will try to write which would bring you here again and again !!




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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
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excellent DEV - I feel honoured As mailed to you I am down with fever .in two three days please feel free to mail me to consult for anything u feel
good luck to you and it will be a nice story

I am honored by having you on my thread !!

Thanks !!


Get well soon, ma'am !!





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mast update ...kya HOT desciption hain ...bas laga sab kuch saamne ho raha hai ...

aap writer nahi painter hain...

shabd se rang bahrate hain aap

ham sab natmastak hai ...

Just grt







Aapne chane ke jhad par chdhane me koi kasar nahi chhori !!


Kosis karunga ki kuchh paint kar saku !!


Aapke sujhab ke karan hi yeh thread yaha hai . Aur In 2 updates ko khud padh kar aage aane wale upadtes me tabdili bhi kar raha hoon !!

Khud jab as a reader padha ko laga ki thori kasar hai. kamiya to abhi kaafi hai par wo samay ke saath dheere dheere jayega.





Aapne google karke villages ke baare me likhne ko kaha tha ; par main wo nahi kar saka.

Idhar jab Xossip se 2 hafte ke liye gayab tha tab maine kuch train journeys ki thi . Usi duran 4-5 rough sketch maine un villeages ke banaye the. Fir unko papers par likhna suru kiya tha. halaki jab use final likhne baitha to bahut kuchh hatana para ; kyuki laga ki readers ke liye jaroorat se jayada Geography ki padhai ho jayegi.
Aasa karta hoo ki jab story me uska jikar aayega to wo aapko pasand aayega.


Thanks again for all your supports and suggestions.

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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
भेदभाव अपने दिल से, साफ़ कर सके| दोस्तों से भूल हो तो, माफ़ कर सकें|| हम को मन की शक्ति देना, मन विजय करें| दूसरों की जय से पहले, खुद को जय करें ||
खुसरो दरिया प्रेम का, उल्टी वा की धार। जो उतरा सो डूब गया, जो डूबा सो पार।। A drop of honey catches more flies than a gallon of gall. ~ Lincoln

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Aapne google karke villages ke baare me likhne ko kaha tha ; par main wo nahi kar saka.

Idhar jab Xossip se 2 hafte ke liye gayab tha tab maine kuch train journeys ki thi . Usi duran 4-5 rough sketch maine un villeages ke banaye the. Fir unko papers par likhna suru kiya tha. halaki jab use final likhne baitha to bahut kuchh hatana para ; kyuki laga ki readers ke liye jaroorat se jayada Geography ki padhai ho jayegi.
Aasa karta hoo ki jab story me uska jikar aayega to wo aapko pasand aayega.


Thanks again for all your supports and suggestions.


aap se mujhe yahi umeed thi .


details thrillers ki jaan hote hain ...aur aap ne to train journey tak kar daali. isiliye mujhe poora vishvaas hai ye kahani is forum ke liye sang-e- mil sabit hogi.

aap ne jis khoobsoorti se . hasin scenes ko thriller ki bhumika se joda hai vo kaabile tarif hai

ab poora forum saans tahme baitha hai agali posts ke liye

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Bhai reader to 2 hai; ek aap aur loveyou71
baaki dost the jo apne busy schedule se waqt nikal kar hausala afzaayi ko aaye the !!

Ab iske liye kya post karna !!

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पोंछ कर अश्क़ अपनी आँखों से, मुस्कुराओ तो कोई बात बने ! सर झुकाने से कुछ नहीं होगा, सर उठाओ तो कोई बात बने !!
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Bhai reader to 2 hai; ek aap aur loveyou71
baaki dost the jo apne busy schedule se waqt nikal kar hausala afzaayi ko aaye the !!

Ab iske liye kya post karna !!

Update likhne ke baad sidhe aap dono ko pm kar dunga aur aaplog uss update ka review thread me de dena !!

Thora job ke nature ke karan job ke baad lautne ke karan kuchh seriously sochne layak nahi rah jata ; isliye updates ke bich 4-5 din ka gap ho jayega . Kosis karunga ki thora aur bara updates de saku.
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ha yar me bhi 2 stories likh raha hu so me samaj sakta hu,me bhi pure din mech engineering ki study ke bad jab hostel ata huto kabhi kabhi lagata he ki " mere dimag me kuchh nahi he,me nahi likh sakta " achhe mud me likhne ka maja hi kuchh aur he....muje koi jaldi nahi he...par kya hena sabr na hone ke karan me likhta rahta hu....so ap bus jab bhi do esa hi dumdar update dete rahie...(sory agar meri hindi buri lagi hoto )

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