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Maharaja aur maharani ko to Dhrumlochan araam s bacha lega aur komad ko Bi Tikane laga dega.
Chandrsen n itna jaldi aakrman karne ka faisla krlia br sumaila usko acha sabak sikhaegi..pyar apni jagah h aur apne maharaja jo uske pita saman h unke rajye ki suraksha ache s kregi.
Dekhte h aage kya Hota h.
Pyar se yudh karna kafi mushkil hota hai par wo jisse pyar karti hai kya wo usse karta hai ye toh aanne wale samai me hi pata chalega
Action toh hoga par kisse kitna pasand aata hai mai ye nai kah sakta kyuki action wala situation me mai jara khud ko weak samajh raha hun
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Aap sabi ko apni ek galti ki traf point out kar du
Maine update 7 do baarr post ki hai actually ek update 8 hai par usse sudharu kaisee mai ye nai kar parahaa

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update 11

Idhar rajya se kafi dur aa chuke te maharaj bhadrasen

Achanak mausam bara hi kaufnaak ho jata hai tejj hawai chalne lagti hai .aakash me bhyankar kale badal chaa jate hai aur tej bijliya karakne lagti hai

Tabhi bhyankar garjana k sath prakat hota hai komad

Komad vishal daitya aankhe lal aur samne te maharaj aur dhrumlochan aanya sabi unke piche te.

Maharani kafi vhyabhit ho gai ti.
Dhrumlochan : maharaj ab aap shakti dand ke prayog ka abhyas kare .sabse pahle ek suraksha ghere ka nirman kare aur uske andar hi sab rahe

Maharaj shakti ka awahan karte hai tabi komad dhrumlochan se

Komad: mahabalI dhrumlochan b upasthit hai. Bari lalsa ti tumse milne ki aaj puri hui

Waise mujhe tumse koi lena dena nai hat jao mere marg se

Tabi ek tej bijli chamakti hai aur maharaj k hato me aa chuka ta shakti dand wo usse suraksha ghere ka nirman karte hai jo nili roshni k gheere k roop me unlogo k charo orr ban chuki ti

Dhrumlochan : ye baat tu b janta hai na mai piche hatne wala hun aur na tu toh aaisi baat hi mat kar aur jo karna chahta hai wo kar


Idhar maharaj kalawati se : kalawati chahe kuch b ho jaiye tum ish ghere se bahar nai aaogi yaad rakhna .

Kalawati: parantu aap kaha ja rai hai

Maharaj: mat bhule ki mai ek raja hun aur mera b kuch kartavya hai aur aap sab ki raksha meri pahli prathmikta hai isliye mera jo kartavya hai wo mujhe karne de aapka pati mai baad me hun par pahle ek raja.

Komad idhar visal daitya sena ka nirman karta hai jo bheryo par swar te aur apni shikar par najre jamaiye aankho se mano aangare barash rahe ho

Ye dekh maharaj ek pal ko bhyabhit ho jate hai unhe kuch samajh hi nai aa raha ta wo kya kare

Dhrumlochan iss baat ko samajh jata hai

Dhrumlochan : maharaj bhyabhit na ho shakti dand se maha rudra sena ka awahan kare

Inka samna mai akele b kar sakta hun .parantu shakti dand ko samajhne ka isse acha awsar

Sayad hi fir kabi aapko mile.

Maharaj maha rudra sena ka aawahan karte hai tabi visal visfot k sath maharudra ssena prakat hoti hai

Jinke sharir p bagh ki khal ka langot mathe p tilak aankho me ek alag junoon gale me rudraksh ki mala dono hato me tej dhar daar farse .sabi k sabi sinh(lion) par swar te
Sinh bhayankar garjna kar dahr rai te ye manjar kisi k b hosh urane k liye kafi ta

Ab maharaj b kafi niyantrit ho chuke te

Ye dekh kar kamod thora achambhit hota hai aur krodh me tilmila jata hai

Uske aakraman ke nirdesh dete hi ek dusre k taraf teji se badte hai
Dono k sar par bas ek dusre ko marne ka junun swar ta .

Vatavaran me dhul ka ghana kohra sa cha jata hai vahi sinh dahar k sath bheryo par tut pare

Bheriya b kaha piche hatne wala ta wo b apne nukile panjo se war kar rai te par sinh k samne uski kaha chalne wali ti sinh apne ek panje se uske war ko bich me hi rok kar dusre panje ka shaktisali war uske gardan par karta hai .
Jisse wo jis raftar se unki aur badha ta ussi raftar se jamin p gishatne lagta hai aur jamin me gadhe ka nirman hote chala jata hai

Par isse pahle kI wo sambhal kar agla war kare sinh uske samip wapas pahuch chuka ta aur uspe aarud rudra ke tej farse ka war datya sahit bheriyo ko chirta chala jata hai har or

Aaisa hi manjar dekhne ko mil raha ta dharti rakt se laal hoti chali ja rai ti

Unki senao kinaaisi dasa dekh maharaj apne ghore ki nall tej khichte hai aur bhayankar teji k sath suraksha ghere se bahr nikal parte hai
Kisi ko kuch samajhne tak ka awsar tak nai mila aur na hi unhe rook pane ka

Wai komad yah dekh prashan ho gaya apni sikaar ko apni orr aata dekh bhala kaun prasann nai hoga

Parantu maharaj p toh junun swar ta .wo shakti dand ko farse k roop me teji se bhanjte huwe aage badhte ja raite . Unka ye roop ek yodha ki hi nishani ti .dono hato me shakti dand farse ka roop le chuka ta.

Komad unpar apni shaktiyo ka war karne lagta hai lekin wo shaktiya maharaj ko chu b nai pati.

Farse se takrane k baad wo vishfot kar rahjati par komad b lagatar prayatn karta raha .

Apne var ko vifal hota dekh komad ek bhayankar shastra ka war un par kar deta hai

Lekin wo prahar farse se takrane k baad chitak kar duur ja kar bhyankar visfot karti hai aur van me aag lag jati hai
Sabi tarf bra hi bhayanak manjar ta .sirf lahu hi lahu dekne ko mill raha ta .

Daitya sena ka b bura hal ho chuka ta fir b jitne bache te lage pare te parantu rudrasena k samne unki na chal rai ti

Dhrumlochan ko b ab aabhas ho chuka ta uske yudh me samil hone ka samai aa chuka hai wah b vikaral roop dharan kar surakhsha ghere se bahar aaa jata hai

Parantu jis prakar maharaj aur komad ki yudh chal rai ti wo abi maharaj ko jada samai dene ka soch ta hai

Ab tak maharaj komad k kafi najdik pahuch chuke te aur wo apne daurte huwe ghore par hi khare ho jate hai. hato me shakti dand ko bhanjte huwe unka santulan dekte ban raha ta

Achanak se wo hawa me chalang marte huwe komad k kandhe p chad kar shakti dand ka tej prahar

Uske baye kandhe par karte hai uske kandhe ki hadi tut jati hai aur lahu rishne lagta hai

Komad ki dardnak chikh watavaran me gunj uthti hai

Komad dusre hath maharaj ko pakarne k liye aage badhata hai lekin maharaj hawa me
Kala baji khate huwe wapas apne ghore p swar ho jate hai

Ghayal dushman aur v adhik khatarnak ho jata hai. Komad b samajh chuka ta maharaj ka vadh koi saral karya nai hai

Ab wo b maharaj ko mauka dena nai chahta ta aur dekhte hi dekhte panch roopo me bat gaya
Ab ek komad k bajaiye 5komaddtee Sab ne milkar maharaj ko gher liya ta
Ab waqt aa chuka ta dhrumlochan k
YUDH ME SAMIL hone ka


To be continued.................

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Aapke comments ka intjaar karunga kamse kam mere prayas ka bas comments k through kuch moll hi de de isse pata chalta hai
Ki mera prayash kaha tak sartak hua
Baki toh aapki marji mera toh aap sabi pathko se narm narm nivedan hai


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Awesome update. .
Ladai mast hui h... ek taraf komad ki sena dusri taraf shakti dand s bani Rudra sena ji bht hi shaktishali h ..
Shakti dand ki shakti dikhne lagi h. Bht hi powerful h ye. .
Ab Dhrumlochan vs komad bi hoga ...maharaja bi piche Na hat k yudh m sarik hogae... waqai acha update tha...

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