Originally Posted by toylandjed
There is lot of scope in this story which you missed. You could have written 10 to 15 pages more of this. A person like Rajesh never miss a chance to fuck a beauty like Neha. Even after knowing his mother in law expired he came to fuck. In such a situation definitely he can continue his fuck festival even staying in Bangalore and attending his family duties. As he is the boss he can grant Neha a 1 week holiday and ask her to stay in 706 and enjoy her.
One more thing is to humiliate Neha he can also force her to have sex with 2 more collegues of his of whom he need approval for Neha's transfer and promotion. after enjoying for 2 days with her the 3rd he can bring another guy for 3 some. Neha can refuse but later by lot of pressure accept for a 3 some. 4 th day 3 some with another senior manager. Last and final day if possible a 3 some with those 2 guys and in the end a sex with Rajesh and finally close the things which you did in your 2nd day. Think about it and try re modify the same story.
Bro, there are lot of stories with same pretext as you wanted where in within first few meetings the main character is degraded to a slut. I would say the plot Author is writing much better since just for a promotion she wouldn't do all those things. she have a job and if she doesn't want it she can always choose a new job , if its a compromise with just Rajesh for promotion , she agreed to do it which is more realistic than the threesomes.