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HELLO dosto navratna takat achhai ki meri story hai jo rah jivan ke nam se already main chala raha hu lekin mujhe nam pasand nahi aaya isliye maine bahut kosis ki take nam badal saku lekin admin se koi reply nahi aaya to.maine nayi thread hi open.kardi
Mere redaer jo abhi rah jivan ke padh rahe hai unko sorry aap story ko is naye thread pe continue kare meri yehi apsab se prathna hai thank you

Is story ke sabhi patra or ghatnaye kalpanik hai
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characters

Introduction


Family of hero
Pintu karmakar.. Hero of the story 18 year good looking
Amar karmakar .. Brother of pintu
Riya karmakar.. Sister in law of pintu
Mom.. Name not needed
Father ..name not needed ( died )
Friends of pintu ….
( rohan bhai...sonu...bumar..gajju..komal di )
Main lead girls…
Priya sharma..
Sona biswas..
Swarna ( mistry character)
Vishu ( mistry character )


Supportive girls..
Roshni ( mistry character)
Somlata aunty.. Mother of sona
Ruka aunty …. Mother of rohan bhai


Other characters.
Ashish brother of priya
Kushal sir..
Pitaji maharaj.
Mahaguru..
Mantri ji..
Senapati..
Sultan..


Vilan section ( mistry )


Aur bhi characters hai jo story me unke jarurat ke mutabik aate rahenge ...




story starting




Aaj se kai hajaro sal pehle samundra manthan ke wakt jab devta danav samudra manthan ke paschat amrit ke liye jhagda chal rahi thi bhagwan vishnu ne mohini roop dharan kiya ..


Tabhi dharti pe bahut hi atajakta faila hua tha in danavo ke karan




.. Jab nidhi or ratno ka batwara hua tab devtao ne nidhio ko chuna or danavo ko diya navratna..




nidhi or navratno ki sakti ek saman thi ..




Lekin jab amrit kalash samundar se nikla tab danav usko pane ke liye navratna ko fek uske piche chale gaye navratna apna ye apman nahi saha




or usne danavo ko sath chod diya or chal pada dharti pe kiu ke devta pehle hi nidhi ko chun navratna ko abhelna kar chuke the..




Navratna dharti pe pahuch ek sachhe hriday bakti ko dhundne laga tabhi use ek aisa bakti mil gaya jo dilse nek karm se bhi nek tha uska nam biswa tha .. . .






Rat ke kuch 1 baj rahe the biswa apni patni paridhi ke sath so raha tha tabhi usko kisi ki chikhne ki awaj aayi




biswa ki nind tut gayi..wo apni lathi.liye bahar ko lapka jidhar se usko awaj aarahi thi..




Jab wo waha pahucha to dekha ek bachha khai ke lagi ek paid pe latka hua hai ..




Jaha pahuchna lagbag na mumkin hai lekin biswa ne apni jaan ki fikar na karke us bachhe ko bachane ke liye paid ke taraf badhne laga..




Bachha.. Mujhe bacha lijiye.. Mujhe bacha lijiye..




Biswa.. Ghabrao nahi beta main hu na bas us dal ko mat chodna thik hai…




Bachha.. Mujhe bachha lijiye meri pakad dhili ho rahi hai..




Biswa.. Bas abhi aaya..biswa us jagah fas huya tha dal tak nahi pahuch pa raha tha..




Waha jana matlab mout pakki
Firvi biswa age badhta raha jab wo bachhe ke pass pahuch gaya dal tut gayi dono khai me girne lage




tabhi ek tezz roshni chamki or dono gayab ho gaye..


Bapas biswa usi jagah pahuch gaya jaha bachha ped pe phasa hua tha..




Biswa… ye main yaha kaise pahuch gaya main to khai me gir raha tha.. Or wo bachha kaha hai..




Tabhi ek awaj aayi..


Awaj.. Ghabrao nahi biswa wo bachha nahi tha main tha main tumhari pariksha le raha tha..




Biswa.. Aap kon hai aap hai kaha or kiu meri pariksha le rahe the..




Tabhi waha tezz roahni chamki or navratna ek sath ek line pe gol gol ghumte huye dikhe.




.usme se awaj aayi..


Navratna.. Main navratna hu is duniya ki sabse badi takat devtao ke bad meri sakti.hi sabse jada hai..




Biswa.. Pranam navratna ..


Navratna.. Hamesha khus raho..


Main ne tumhari pariksha isliye li hai take main tum me shamil ho saku ..




Tum nek ho bahadur bhi ho tumko malum tha us bachhe ko bachhana na mumkin hai firbhi tumne apni jaan ki fikar nahi ki or apni puri kosis ki usko bachhane ki




jisme tumhari jaan bhi chali jati.


.tab bhi tum piche nahi hate..bahadur wo nahi jo har bar jite bahadur wo hote hai jinko apni har najar aati hai lekin firvi prayas karna nahi chodta..




Main tumko duniya ki wo sakti de raha hu jiske hote huye devta bhi tumse kabhi takra nahi sakenge..




Biswa.. Main ek aam kishan kya karunga in saktio ke sath..




Navratna.. Tum apni ek alag duniya basao jaha na koi amir ho na koi garib na dukh ho na taklif na kisi ko kisi chij ki kabhi kami ho bas pyar hi pyar ho..




Biswa.. Dhanyabad navratna main apni puri kosis karunga..




Navratna.. Mujhe malum hai..
Main tumhare ander samahit ho raha hu..




itna bolke navratna ek ek karke roshni me badal ke biswa me shamil ho gaya.




Biswa jhatke khate huye apni jagah pe hath jode khada raha uski takat badti gayi uski ankhe nili ho gayi ball sunahre dehpe sunehra kabach ..




Kisi ladaku ki tarah badan lekin chehre pe pehle ki tarah masumiyat….




Tabhi ek mukut aaya jo navratna se bani thi wo biswa ke sir pe lag gaya…




tabhi navratna ki awaj aayi..ye mere tarafse tumko ek towfa is mukut ko sirf tumhi pahan sakte ho koi aur nahi isme navratna ki adhi sakti hogi..




Tum jise chahe apni navratna ki sakti de sakte ho lekin mukut ki sakti ko wo kabhi nahi pa sakega ye sirf tumhare liye hai..




Jitne bhi janam tum loge ye sirf tumhare sirpe hi ayega kisi aur ke sir pe aana to dur koi is mukut ko chu bhi nahi payega..




Biswa.. Dhanyabad navratna ..




Navratna.. Aab tum apna kam karo main tum me hu ..




Biswa waha se apne ghar pe lout aaya jaha uski bibi uska intezar kar rahi thi..




Paridhi.. Ye mukut ye kavach ye sab kya hai..




Biswa.. Jaan ye sab navratna ki sakti hai jo mujhe mili hai..




Fir biswa paridhi ko sab bata deta hai …




Biswa.. Jaan mujhe tumhari madat chahiye..


Paridhi.. Kaisi madat jaan meri jaan hajir hai …


Biswa.. Jaan navranta ne jo karya mujh ko shopa hai usko pura karne ke liye mujhe ek stri sakti bhi chahiye kiu ki bina stri sakti ke kuch bhi stristy sambhab nahi..




Paridhi .. Main to apke sath har pal hu aap mere pati hai apkaa sath dena mere liye sobhagya ki bat hai.. .




Biawa.. Thik hai jaan pehle main tumko sakti deta hu..


itna bolke biswa ne paridhi ke sir pe hath rakha dekhte hi dekhte biswa ke hath se roshni nikli or paridhi me sama gayi..


paridhi ka jisam chamakne laga jaha purani dess thi wohi ek chamakdar white long frok me badal gayi paridhi ke bal bhi sunahre ho gaye..




Paridhi khud ko dekh khus ho gayi..




Biswa.. Jaan ab tum me bhi sakti hai.. Tum dikhne me bahut sundar sabse sabse alag kya kahu paridhi paridhi haa pari jaisi.lag rahi ho.




Paridhi.. Ye pari kya hoti hai..


Biswa… aab tum sabse alag sundar dikh rahi ho tumko kuch to bulana tha na to to tumhare nam se hi sabd bana diya pari ..




Biswa.. aab chalo hame ek naya jahan basana hai..


Itna bolke biswa paridhi ka hath pakad roshni me badal ke gayab ho gaya..




Dharti se bahut dur antiriksh me ek bahut hi shant jahah pe dono aagaye..






Biswa.. Jaan aab yahi pe banegi hamara naya samrajya..


Jaha pyar hi pyar hoga koi bhi burai nahi hogi..


Biswa ne apni ankhe band ki or jab kholi biswa ki ankh sunahri ho gayi thi..


Biswa ne apne dono hath faila ke apne hath se bahut hi tezz roshni nikali wo roshni biswa ke hath se nikal ti rahi




or paridhi us roshni ko akar deti rahi apne hath age karke dekhte hi dekhte unke kayi bars lag gaye wo jahan banane me ..




Akhirkar unhone wo jahan bana hi liya.. Dono apne banaye mahal me pahuch gaye..




Paridhi.. Jaan ham ne ye jahan to bana liya lekin jab tak yaha koi rahega nahi tab tak to ye adhura hai..




Biswa.. Ha jaan aab yaha ke basinde kaha se layu…




Paridhi… ap na ekdam budhhu hai ab hame hamare bachhe nahi chahiye kya..




Biswa… ha chahiye na wo to tum dogi..


Paridhi.. Apko sakti to mil gayi lekin rahe bilkul budhu apke bina main kaise dungi bachhe ..




Itna bol paridhi sarmane lagi
Biswa bhi samajh gaya paridhi kya chahti hai..


Biswa ne paridhi ke hotho pe apne hoth rakh diye fir suru hua pyar ka milap inka milap chalta raha ..




Kuch barso me dono ke 5 bachhe ho gaye or biswa ne unko sakti se bada kardiya ..




Or unko vej diya dharti pe apne liye apna pyar dhundne ..




Jab sabne apna pyar dhund bapas agaye tab biswa ne sabko sakti.de diya …




Bachha 1..pitajo ham yaha rahte hai lekin hamne is jagah ka nam nahi rakha..




Biswa… ha sahi jaha jaha devta rahte hai use devlok kahte hai hame bhi apni is sundar rachna ko nam dena chahiye..




Ye sundar hai or maine pehle hi is shundarta ka nam tumhari ma ke naam pe rakha hai pari to ham isko parilok kahenge ..




Bachha 2.. Ha pitaji maharaj ye sahi hai parilok..




Samay bit ta gaya or prilok bhara pura ho gaya sab aur bhi bahut sare logo ko dharti se laya gaya jo nek dil the ..




Ek wakt aisa aaya jab pari ka jivan samay najdik tha biswa me navratna ki sakti thi lekin pari me nahi biswa jab tak chahe ji sakta tha lekin paridhi nahi…




Paridhi ne apna akhri sans tyaga jisse biswa bahut hi dukhi ho gaya wo paridhi se bahut pyar karta.tha..




uske bina jina uske liye muskil ho gaya biswa ne sabha bulai..




Biswa… mere bachho maine bahut jamane tak raj kar liya aab meri paridhi bhi nahi rahi.. Main uske bina jina nahi chahta issi liye main apna jivan tyag raha hu..




Or age ki pidhi ko apna ye navratna ki sakti ko de ke jana chahta hu lekin main firse janam leke loutunga ye mera mukut sirf mere sir pe hi lag sakta hai kisi aur ke nahi..




Aaj main is ko uter raha hu..




Jab main bapas ayunga tabhi ye mukut uske sir pe baithega ..




Beta surya kant age aao aaj se tum badsha ho main tumko apni navratna ki sakti de raha hu iska achhe se upyog karna galat istemal mat karna nahi to ye tumse alag ho jayegi ..




Tabhi biswa apna ankh band kiya or hawame uth gaya jab ankh kholi to sunahri ho gayi thi..




Tabhi biswa ke sarir se navratna ki sakti nikli or gol gol ghumne lagi..



Biswa.. Ye mere navratna ki sakti jao or surayakant me shama jao




Tabhi navratna ki sakti suryakant me shama gayi ..




Biswa ka sarir budha ho gaya wo jamin pe uter aaya ..




or wohi sighasn pe baith gaya apna mukut pakad ke samne rakhi ek bade se thal pe rakh diya


or apni ankhe band kar li biswa ne apna deh tag diya….






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NAVRATNA (takat achhai ki )



PRESENT TIME


Mera nam pintu karmakar hai bahut hi amm sa ladka hu ,main kolkata se kuchi dur mai jis maholle me rehta hu waha sabhi barg ke log rahte hai ,marwadi punjabi bangali sabhi tarah ke log rahte hai, us mohalle ka naam lalganj hai..
Mere pariwar ke nam pe mai meri ma mera bada bhai amar beri bhabi riya hi hai ..
Bhai or bhabi abb hamare sath nahi rahte..
Pitaji ka dehant kuch salo pehlehi ho gaya tha
Mai abhi 12 bi me padh raha hu dikhne me sundar hu lekin duniya se begana apni hi dhun me rahta hu..
Mujhe kahaniya likhna pasand hai mai or apne jivan me ek lekhak banna chahta hu ,

maholle me hi rajiv sir ka yoga class hai maine bhi yoga class join kiya tha lekin mai ne chod di
Rajiv sar dikhne me to hatte katte hai lekin homo hai ekdin mai ne unko onkehi ek yoga students ke sath dekh liya galat harkate karte huye
Ladke ka nam laltu tha rajiv sir ne uske gadme apna lund dala hua maze se kamar hila rahe the usdin se mai me yoga class chod diya ..
Har sham hamare mohalle ke chohraheme jo hari bhai ke chai ki dokan thi wohi ham kuch dosto ki sham gujarti thi ..
Ham doato me sabse bade the rohan bhai.. bahut hi shant rahne wale bande the wonki mere se bahut pat ti thi ..
Wo kehte hai mai bahut bhola hu mujhe bebukuf banana bahut asan hai koi bhi mujhe koi kam deta to mai kabhi na nahi keh pata ye sayad meri ek kamjori thi ...
School se araha tha tabhi piche se kisine pukara main ne mudke dwkha to wo komal di thi ( komal di hamare mohalle ki ladki thi iska pariwar ham se amir tha )
Komal di: kya tum ko sunai nahi deta kab se pukar rahi hu ..
Main : ha bolo komal di kaisi ho ..
Komal di : mai to thik hu lekin tum kaha khoye huye rahte ho ki kisiki awaj bhi sunai nahi deti..
Main : ohh sorry mujhe sach me sunai nahi diya ..
Komal : rehne de pata nahi kya kya karta rahta hai, to picnic me chal rahe ho ya nahi ..
Main : abhi kuch nahi keh sakta sayad chalu sayad nahi ( mai to jana nahi chahta tha kiu ki mere pass paise nahi the mai or ma hi rahte hai ghar me papa ki pensation se hi ghar chalta hai ) ..
Komol : thik hai mai chalti hu
Wo chali gayi mai ghar pahuch gaya jaha ma mera hi intezar kar rahi thi ..
Meri ma bahut si simple house wife thi unhone apna jivan apne pariwar ki sewa me bhi gujar diya
Ab unka jivan sirf mai hu bhai to kab ke ghar chod chuke hai apni bibi ke sath kabhi ate bhi nahi bina jarurat bahut hi selfish hai ...
Mai ghar agaya to ma ne pucha ..
Ma : beta kaisa raha din padhai kaisi chal rahi.. hai beta dhayan se padhai karo ek tumhare sahare ji rahi hu ..
Main: ma mai pura man laga ke padh raha hu apni puri kosis kar raha hu..
Ma : chal kuch khale fir bahar jana
Main : thik hai ma ..
Fir ma ne mujhe do roti di sath me dal main ne bhi santi se kha liye ..
Ab ham garib hai to nakhre kar ke koi faida nahi hai jo milta hai usime dil ki tasali hoti hai meri ma bahut achha khana banati thi jo bhi khata achha hi lagta ..
Khana kha ke mai nikal gaya apne dosto se sath gappe marne ..
Jab mai hari bhai ke dukan me pahucha to waha sabhi maujud the ..
Mere dost sonu ,bumar ,rohan bhai ,gajju ..
Mai jab pahucha to mujhko dekh gajju bola ..
Gajju .. Dekh agaya kiu be itna der kiu lagaya..mere bolne se se pehle hi sonu bol pada ..
Sonu.. Lagta hai firse apne khayalo me kho gaya hoga ..
Rohan bhai.. Aaja baith to dosto picnic ki puri taiyari ho gayi hai sab chalne ki taiyari karo ..
Mai kuch bolne wala tha ke rohan bhai ne mujhe rok diya ...
Kal shubah 6 baje yahi se bass chalegi time pe ajana mai kisike liye intezar nahi karunga ..
Bumar.. Rohan bhai kon kon chal raha hai picnic pe ..
Rohan bahi… yar maholle ke bahut sare bhabiya our bhi log chal rahe hai rubi anty bhi chal rahi hai ..
Main.. Rohan bhai wo mai nahi ja payunga lagta hai...
Rohan bhai … chal bahar chal
wo mujhko leke bahar agaye ..
Bhai mujhe pata hai tujhko paise ka problem hai uski chinta mat kar itne log chal rahe hai tu bhi adjust ho jayega ..
Main… bhai mujhe kuch achha nahi lag raha hai ..
Rohan bhai .. Main ne keh diya na tu chal raha hai bas kal ajana time pe nahi to mai ajayunga tujhe lene ..
Ab mai kya bolta ek rohan bhai hi the jo mujhe samajhte the ..
Fir ham ander dokan me agaye ..
Rohan bhai… hari bhai 3 ke 5 dedo ..
Tabhi bahar gurpreet khadi najar ayi raste ke uspar usko dekh bumar bol pada ..
Bumar..Lo agaya sonu tera bulawa ..
Gurpreet joginder singh ki beti hai jiska taka hamare sonu se lada hua hai ..
Sonu bhi muskurata hua dukan se nikal gaya sonu ko ate dekh gurpreet bhi age badh gayi ghar ke raste ..
Sonu chalte huye uske pass pahuch gaya dono age ja kar gali me gayab ho gaye ...
Bumar … kya kismat hai sonu ki or ek ham hai khade sirf ladkiya tarte rehte hai kabhi koi line hi nahi deti ..
Main.. Ladkiya tadne se nahi dil milne se pyar hota hai ..
Bumar.. Gyani baba ki jai ho kripa karo baba ...
Main.. Jite raho bachha jaldhi tumko jannat ki hoor milegi ...
Gajju : kya be tum log bakbas bate le ke baith gaye samne hi exam hai uski kisiko fikar hai ki nahi main ne to kuch padha hi nahi ...
Main… to padh liya hota pura sal to soniya ke piche ghumta raha aaj padhai ki yaad kaise agayi …
Gajju.. Yar mat naam le us soniya ka sali ne bhaw hi nahi diya pura sal barbad ho gaya..
Aiseji bate hoti rahi time beet gaya mai ghar loutne laga...
Raste mai mujhe priya di mil gayi ( priyadi maholle ki sabse sundar or samajhdar ladki thi )..
Priyadi .. Are pintu abhi tak ghoom rahe ho kya padhai chod di .
Main.. Kya priya di app bhi bas ghar ja raha tha kekin app abhi kaha ja rahi ho ..
Priyadi .. Kahi nahi bas samne ke shop me ja rahi rhi kuch saman lane ..
Main.. Kya saman lana hai mujhe boliye main la deta hu ..
Meri bat sun ke priya di ka chehra lal ho gaya ..
Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya
Priya di .. Nahi nahi main le ayungi tum jao
Main .. Kya priya di mujhe do me le ata hu (itna bolke mai ne bag priya di ke hatho se chin li ) kya lana hai
Priya di .. Are nahi main hi layungi rehne de ( unka chehra abb tamatar jitna lal ho gaya tha )
Main .. Main le ata hu na kya problem hai meri bat sunkar priya di finally saram se ek parcha mujh ko de diya ..
Main ne parcha bina dekhe hi paise leke chal pada dukan me jab main ne parcha dukan dar ko diya to ...
Wo dukan dar mujhko ek bar ghur ke fir saman diya jab main ne saman dekha tab mujhko samajh me aya mai kitna bebakuf hu ..
Dokandar ne ek whishper pad ka pakat mujh ko diya abb mujhko bhi saram ane lagi ...
Main ne dukandar ko paise diya or saman bag me bharge chal pada ..
Aab main ye sochne laga ke mai ye saman priyadi ko dunga kaise ..
Jaisw taise main di ke pass gaya unka chehra saram se lal ho gaya tha mujhko bhi saram arahi thi ..
Msine bag unko diya or sirf itna hi bola ..
Main.. Sorry di .. Itna bolke me waha nahi ruka or waha se chal pada mai priya di se najre nahi mila pa raha tha same priya di bhi ..
Main ghar laut aya ghar me ma se kuch bate ki fir rat ka khana khake so gaya ..
Shubah jab mai utha to shubah ke 5 baj rahe the jab main utha to dekha mera lund khada tha
or sayad rat ke sapne ke karan kuch ras bhi nikal gaya tha or lower pe spot pad gaya tha ..
Mai utha or apni halat ko dekh jaldi se bathroom me pahuch gaya or apna lower nikal pehle nahaya fir apna lower khud dhoya ..
Mere kapde meri ma hi dho diya karti thi magar is hal me main unko de nahi sakta tha issiye khud hi dho diya ..
Ma .. Beta kya kar raha hai..
Main.. Ma mai naha raha hu picnic jana hai na aaj ..
Ma .. Thik hai beta
Fir main naha ke apna short shukhne ko dal diya or ready hoke nikal pada
Jab mai chohrahe pe pahucha to pura bus ready tha sabhi baith gaye the ..
Rohan bhai ne mujhko dekh ke kaha ..
Rohan bhai.. Chal pintu jaldi kar bas Kuchi der me bus chal padegi ..
Main bi bus me chahad gaya buss pure mohalle walo se bhara hua tha..
Main ne charo taraf dekha to mujhe komol di apni mammy ke sath dikhi baithi hui or priya di bas ek end me kone me ek sit pe baithi thi uske sath wala sit khali tha
Bass me sare sit fill ho gayi thi bas 2 hi bachi thi ek samne gate ke pass
Main gate ke pass baithne gaya to rohan bhai ne kaha ..
Rohan bhai .. Bhai waha baith ja yaha se main sabko picnic me jane tak samhalunga ..
Main kya karta age badh gaya piche jaha priya di baithi hui thi lekin main baitha nahi
wohi ek sit bad khada raha mujhko saram si arahi thi priya di ka samna karte huye
Buss chal padi firbhi main wohi khada raha to priyadi ne mujhko dekha fir kaha ..
Priya di .. Kya aisehi khade rahoge baithna nahi hai kya ..
Main .. Di wo main thik hu bas aisehi achha hai ..
Priya di .. Chal aaja baith pair dukhne lagenge..
Tabhi bumar ki awaj ayi ..
Bumar .. Bhai log or unki behen log kya picnic aisehi jana hai bore nahi ho jayenge ..
Komol .. Ek kam karte hai antaksari khelte hai isse time bhi kat jayegi or maza bhi ayega ..
Sabhi .. Ha sahi hai suru karo ..
Magar kisine suru nahi kiya finaly sonu ne gana suru kiya ...
Sonu.. Gurpreet ko dekh ke jo apne ma ke sath ayi thi gana suru kiya
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Gana khatam hua to gurpreet ne gana suru kiya
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Priya di.. Abb baithe ga bhi ya main bhi khadi ho jayu ..
Main kya karta baith gaya unke bagal me bus ki akhri sit pe kirke karib priya di thi or fir main mere bad maholle ki ek bhabi thi dekhne bahut hi madak thi lekin mera dhyan priya di pe tha..
Mujhko jhijak ho rahi thi unse bat karne me lekin himmat jutake kaha..
Main .. Di woo kal ke liye sorry main samajh nahi paya sorry...
Priya di .. Pata hai tune janbujhke nahi kiya tu hai bhi bahut sidha...
Main .. Di ghar me sab kaise hai..
Priya di.. Sab thik hai tu bata padhai kaisi chal rahi ..
Mai bolta ki bas ne ek jhatka khaya sayad kisi gudde me chakka agaya hoga ...
Mai apna balance samhal nahi paya or mera hath sahara lene ke liye react kiya or gulti se mera hath priya di ke jungh pe pad gayi or mera sar unke sine se takra gaya..
Unki halki se siski nikal gayi jab mai samhla to mera hath unke jungh pe tha or sir sine se laga hua ...
Mai hadbada ke alag hua lekin apna hath hatana bhul gaya..
Maine priya di ko dekha to wo mujhko hi dekh rahi thi unka chehra lal ho gaya tha … gusse me ya saram se pata nahi..
Main ne unko juldi se sorry kaha lekin unhone koi jawab nahi diya or niche dekhne lagi...
Main ne jab niche dekha to mera hath unke jungh pe tha wo main ne jhat se hata liya ...
Main ne unko dekha to unhone apna chehra khidki ke bahar kar liya..
Mujhko laga wo naraj ho gayi hai fir main ne bhi koi bat nahi ki lekin pure raste unko chore najro se dekhta raha
unhone bhi mujhko chor najro se dekha jab ham dono ke najre takrayi to hamne najre hata li..
Sarm dono ko arahi thi lekin bat to karni thi to main ne hi himmat jutake bat karna chaha...
Main.. Di wo galti se ho gaya sorry please ..
Priya di ne meri ankhome dekha fir sarmakar kaha...
Priya di.. Koi bat nahi or fir sarmane lagi..
Aab mujhe bat samajh nahi ayi ke wo itni kiu sarma rahi hai jo hona tha ho gaya wo bhi galti se hua..
Kuch hi der me ham picnic spot pe pahuch gaye ye ek chota jungle jaisa park tha ...

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Yaha ek chota sa ghar bana hua tha ek side me yaha logo ko booking karke picnic karni padti hai
Hamara bhi yaha booking tha
Sabhi buss se uter gaye main bhi uter gaya mujhko jodo ki toylet lagi thi to waha ghar ge baju me bane toilet me chala gaya..
Ye ek public toilet tha do hi kebin thi ek ladkio ke liye ek ladko ke liye..
Main jaldi se ladko wale me ghus gaya or toilet karne laga jab mera hua.. or mai apni jip band karne laga tabhi pass ke kebin me koi ghusa ..
Or tabhi mera nam sunai diya ..
Awaj .. Ye tune kya kiya pintu kya jadu tha tere chune me mai to issime hi gili ho gayi ...
Aab main samajh nahi pa raha tha ye kon hai fir bus me hui ghatna yaad agayi ...
Priya di.. Haye pintu tumme kya hai jo bas chune se hi mai pagal ho gai ye pehli bar kisine mujhe chuya hai abb kya karu mai dusri panty bhi nahi layi ufff ab pura din aisehi rahna padega ..
Pintu tumne kya kardiya..
Aab mujhko saram ane lagi di ke batose to main bahar agaya or chal pada jaha sabko ready made nasta serve ho raha tha main bi unme samil ho gaya ...
Kuch der me waha priya di agayi wo mujhko badi pyar bhari najro se dekhbe lagi ….
Mujhe bhi unka aisa dekhna achha lag raha tha ye mere jivan ka pehla mouka tha jiske kiye mera dil bhi nayi tarang ke sath dhadak raha tha...
Nasta khatam kar kuch bhabiya khane ki taiyati me lag gayi or main or rohan bhai bhi lag gaye unki help karne me jaise pani lana.aag jalana lakdiya lana ..
Wo sabhi sabjiya or meat banane jugad me lag gayi ek taraf chawal ki bhi taiyati ho rahi thi..
sara intezam karke mai chal pada park ghumne ..
Mai chalte chalte ghane jungle ke taraf pahuch gaya mai najaro ka anand le raha tha ki mujhe kisi ki awaj ayi..
Mai udhar chala gaya jab main waha pahucha to main chock gaya ye mere liye kisi shok se kam nahi tha..
Rohan bhai or bumar the .
Bumar ped ko paked ke jhuka hua tha uski pent niche padi thi wo niche se nanga tha ..
Ruhan bhai apna lund bumar ke picheade me dalne ki kosis kar rahe the ...
Ye dekh mera dimag hi chakra gaya ye sab kya ho raha hai ..
Main waha jada der nahi ruka or bapas chal pada or park ke khule elaqe me ghas ke uper let gaya... sayad meri ankh lag gsyi thi ..
Kisike hilane se meri nind khuli..
samne priya di thi
Main.. Are priya di app yaha
Priya di .. Kya bat hai tum yaha kiu so gaye the ..
Main.. Wo bas achha lag raha tha khili dhup me thandi hawake bich thandi ghas pe letna fir kab nind agayi pata nahi chala ..
Priya di.. Aur kuch achha nahi lagta ...
Main .. Achha to bahut kuch lqgta hai ( ye bat maine priya di ke ankhome dekh ke kahi thi )
Main..Di app thik to ho na apko chot to nahi ayi bus me ..
Priya di meri batpe sarmane lagi unka gora dudh sa chehra gulabi ho gaya ..
Main ne himmat karke unke hath pe hath rakh diya ..
Meri iss harkat pe pehle to priya di chock gayi fir meri ankhome dekh ke kaha ..
Priya di.. Ye kya kar rahe ho pintu chodo log dekh lenge..
Main ne unka hath chod diya or apna chehra jhuka liya fir kaha ...
Main.. Sorry di main kuch bahak gaya tha app bahut khubdurat ho mujhko bahut achhi lagti ho ..
Mai bas itna hi bol paya or apni najre jhuka li ..
Priya di .. Thode saram ke sath mujhko bhi tum bahut pasand ho tum sab se alag ho ..
Main .. App sach keh rahi hai ya sirf ye app mera man rakhne ke liye bol rahi hai ...
Priya di .. Sach me tum sab se alsg ho anokhe bhi i really like you ..
Main.. Ohh like hai
ha sahi to hai sirf like chaliye khana ban gaya hoga chaliye ...
Fir mai waha ruka nahi or chal pada sabke pass jaha khana ready ho chuka tha..
Mera dil ro raha tha lekin mai sabke pass normal behave kar raha tha ..
Wohi priya di bhi normal behave kar rahi thi lekin unki ankhe bahut kuch bata rahi thi usme bahut udasi thi...
Sayad ye pyar tha sayad ham dono ka ye rista nahi ho sakta iski tadap thi..
Meri or unke umer ke bich 3 sal ka anter tha or yahi nahi wo hamse jada amir the sayad hi unki family kabhi is riste ko mane ...
Khana lag chuka tha sab baith gaye main bhi baith gaya lekin priyadi baki do bhabio ke sath serve kar rahi thi ...
Jab bhi wo mujhko serve karti ham dono ki najre takrati or ham dono ki bebasi saf jhalak jati ...
Khana khake sabhi chale gaye firse ghumne firne mai wohi ruka raha mujhko lag raha tha ke yahi rukna sahi rahega ...
Sabhi chale gaye lekin priyadi wohi ruk gayi….
Sabke jane ke bad wo mere pass ayi unki ankhe baras ne lagi jo dard itni der se chupa rahi thi wo ashun Banke nikal ne lagi...
Mera bhi wohi hal tha priya di mere gale lag gayi or bolne lagi...
Priya di.. Pintu i love you very much lekin mere gharwale tum ko nahi apnayenge or unke marzi ke khilaf mai tumhare sath nahi ayungi.. .
Main.. I love you too aaj mujhe ahsas hua hai pyar kya hota hai kab hota or iska dard kya hai ….
Agar jindagi ne kabhi mera sath diya to mai jarur appko apnayunga ye mera wada hai or ho sake to kud ko majboot karo...
Ham pehle jaise hi rahenge lekin pyar hamesha rahega….
Agar mai iss layak bana ke kabhi apko apna saku to mai jarur ayunga warna kismat samajh ke vul jaiyega ….
Priya di .. Thik hai pintu mai intezar karungi..
Main.. I love you priya.
Priya .. I love you pintu..
Chalo app jao nahi to logo ne dekh liye to bate karenge or mai ye seh nahi payunga koi apke bare me galat kahe meri wajah se ...
Priya chali gayi ..
Main bhi chal pada jungle ke taraf wha ek chattan pe baith gaya or sochne laga kya se kya ho gaya..
Kal tak jisko sirf janta tha aaj jaan se badhkar ban gaya ...
Aisehi sochte sochte sham ho gayi or sabhi chalne ki taiyari karne kage ...
Rohan bhai ne mujhko dekha or mujhko bapas le chale ….
Ham bas me baith gaye priya di bhi apni jagah pe baithi thi main bhi unke sath baith gaya…
sabhi apni apni jagah pe baith gaye or bas suru ho gayi ...
Sabhi thak chuke the to bus pe rest karne lage ...
Tabhi priya di ne mare hath pe hath rakha main ne priya di ko dekha unke ankhome besumar pyar tha…
mai bhi unki ankhome kho gaya mera hath priya di ke hatho me tha pure raste ham dono ke lab khamosh rahe lekin ankhe bate karte rahe ...
Rat ke 8 baje bus mohalle me enter hui ...
Jab bas ruka to main ne juldi se priya di ko bahut dhime kaha i love u
Unhone bhi i love you kaha dhime se fir sabhi bus se uter gaye…
main ne pure raste priya di ke piche chalta raha jab wo ghar ke gate pe pahuchi ...
Ek bar mud ke mujh ko dekha main ne bhi muskura kar bye kaha wo bhi. . muskura kar ander chali gayi ….
Mai bhi ghar lout aya jab mai ghar pahucha to meri sans hi ruk gayi ….
Meri ankhone barashna suru kar diya mai ghutne ke bal baith roye ja raha tha samne meri ma ki lash padi hui thi …
Meri rone ke awaj se ass pass ke ghar wale agaye jab unhone dekha to sab ne mujhe samhalne ki puri kosis ki lekin mera rona band nahi ho raha tha ...
Ye bat pure mohalle me fail gayi mere dost bhi agaye sabne milke mujhko samhala
Body ko posmortem ke liye le gaye meri halat nahi thi mai ye sab kar saku..
sab mere doato ne kiya rohan bhai ne sab kiya doctor ne bataya heart attak ke karan mout ho gayi ...
Meri to duniya hi lut gayi mei khamosh sa ho gaya ...
Rohan bhai ne mere bhai ko khabar kar diya wo agaye lekin bhabi nahi ayi wo pregnant thi ...
Unhone antim sanskar ka pura inrezam kiya mai ne to bas ankhri bar ma ko dekha or unko agni ke hawale kar diya . .
Ghar ate ate shubah ho gayi thi bhaiya bhi chale gaye unko jaise koi fark nahi pada ma ki mout ka ...
Main bilkul tut gaya tha ghar me agaya ghar bilkul khali khali lag raha tha..
Bed pe baithke ma ko yaad karne laga meri ankhe firse barashe lage mai wohi bed ke niche baith gaya or rone laga...
Pura din nikal gaya na main ne kuch khaya na na kisine pucha or puchta bhi kom ghar me mere alawa tha hi kon ….
Sham ke wakt koi ghar me aya mai besudh ankh band kiye huye pada tha…
Usne mujhko jagaya jab maine usko dekha to usse lipat ke rone laga wo koi or nahi priya di thi...
Priya di.. Samhalo pintu apne apko make janeka dukh hamesha rahega..
lekin tum aise kamjor pad jaoge to kaise chalega bhulo mat koi hai jo tumhara intezar kar raha hai ...
Main ne priya di ke ankho me dekha wo bhi ro rahi thi mai ne khud ko samhala or unse alag hua..
Main.. Priya app yaha apko yaha nahi ana chahiye tha abhi ...
Priya .. Mujhko kuch nahi pata tum jab tak khud ko samhal nahi lete mai nahi jayungi ...
Fir priya ne ak tifin khola usme khana tha priya ne mujhe ek niwala diya ...
Main .. Priya tum jao yaha se log dekhenge to bate banayenge...
Priya .. Thik hai mai chali jayungi par tum ko khana khana padega please...
Main ne priya ke ankhome dekha uske ankhome mere liye fikar saf dikh rahi thi…
mera man to nahi tha khane ka par priya ke liye main ne kuch niwala kha liya..
Main .. Priya please aab app jao agar kisine app pe kichad uchala to main bardast nahi kar sakta please app jayiye ...
Priya .. Thik hai main jati hu lekin main tumhara intezar kar rahi hu kab mera sajan ayega mujhko dulhan banake le jayega ...
Main.. Thik hai main apna pura kosis karunga i love you priya.
Priya.. I love you too pintu please mai tumhara intezar kar rahi hu ...
Fir priya chali gayi priya se bate karke mujhe ek nayi urja mili mai bahut samhal gaya ...
Karne ko kuch tha nahi rat ho gayi thi to so gaya..
Subah utha nahaya kapde pehne tabhi rohan bhai agaye ...
Rohan bhai .. Kaisa hai pintu ..
Main .. Bas thik hu ma to chali gayi khana banana ata nahi abb wohi kosis karne ja raha hu..
Rohan bhai.. Chal mai bhi teri help karta hu ...
Main.. Nahi app baitho mai bana lunga ..
Rohan bhai kuch or nahi bolta or wohi baithe rahte hai
Main bhi lag gaya khana banane badi mehnat ke bad kaise bhi karke jale huye rotiya bana liya sabji banani ati nahi thi to
samne achhar ka dibba tha usmese acchar nikal ke jab pehla niwala khaya to firse mere ankhose ashun ane lage..
Rohan bhai.. Kya hua..
Main.. Ma ki yad agayi unke hatho ka khana yad agaya ye achhar bhi ma ne mere kehne pe banaya tha..
Ab dekho ye mere sahare ban rahe hai...
Rohan bhai.. Bhai majboot bano aab tumhari ma bhi chali gayi tum ko duniya me akele hi ladna hai.
Main .. Sahi keh rahe ho
Rohan bhai.. Chalo tum kya ghar me bhi baithe rahoge...
Main .. To abhi kaha chalu...
Rohan bhai.. Yar abb ghar me tujhko akela choda to tu firse agar apni ma ko yaad karke rone laga to ..
Chal mere sath chal bahar sabke sath tera man laga rahega ...
Main ne kuch nahi kaha or chal pada bahar ...
Pura din dosto ke sath time bitaya or sham ko ghar ate wakt priya ke gharke samne kuch der khada raha magar priya nahi dikhi ..
Main man marke ghar lout aya ...
Exams the to uski taiyari bhi karni thi abb ma thi nahi to khud hi jo bana paya banaya or kha ke padhne baith gaya ...
Aisehi din bitne lage is bich meri mulakat priya se nahi hui lekin akho hi ankhome bate hui..
Ham apna relation abhi duniya ke samne nahi la sakte the..
Wo ek achhi khasi amir ghar ki ladki thi or mai filhal kuch bhi nahi tha...
Aisehi exam ho gaya ab result ka wait karne laga ..
Shubha mai utha taiyar hoke khana banaya or khake nikal ne wala tha ke ek wakil agaye ..
Wakil.. Kya app hi pintu karmakar hai..
Main.. Ji mai hi hu kahiye ..
Wakil.. Ye hai cort ke pepars apke bhai ne apne pita ki jaidad me hissa manga hai..
Ye bat sunte hi mere ankhome ashun agaye mera bhai kitna swarthi hai ye mai aaj jan paya tha...
Main.. Wskil sahab iske liye cort me jane ki kya jarurat thi pitaji ka jo bhi hai ham dono bhaio ka hai ...
App amar bhai se keh dijiye ga ke wo jab chahe apna hissa le sakte hai..
Wakil .. Thik hai to fir ya to app ye ghar apne bhai ko bech de ya kharid le kiu ke wo apke sath nahi rahenge ...
Main.. Muskurate huye mai kya kharidunga unko jo bhi karna hai kare jab mujhko kahenge mai ghar khali kar dunga ….
Hamara ghar 3 room wala tha ek kichen or ek bathroom ke sath...
Bhai ne mujhe 1 lakh rupiye diye jo market prize se adha tha ..
Maine bhi bina koi bat badhaye wo paise account me rakh liye ..
Kuch hi dino me mujhko ghar khali karne ko kaha ...
Mere pass koi dushra thikana bhi nahi tha na hi itne psise kt naya ghar kharid sako ...
Kal mujhko ghar chodna tha mujhe malum nahi tha mai kya karu kaha jayu…
fir maina faisla kiya ab bahut ho gayi padhai koi kam karna hi padega main ne dilli jane ke faisla…
kiya usee pehle mai ekbar priya se mil lena chahta tha….
Luckily sham ko hi usse mulakat ho gayi mai usko leke apnr mohalle ke bahar chala gaya jaha hame koi pahchanta nahi tha .. .
Main.. Priya mai delhi ja raha hu ...
Priya… kya tum mujhe chod ke ja rahe ho uski ankhe nam ho gayi ...
Main.. Main tumhe chodke kahi nahi ja raha bas kuch banne ja raha hu take tumhara hath mang saku….
Priya.. Kya tum yahi kuch nahi kar sakte...
Main… kuch nahi hai karne layak bada banna hai to bada sochna padega kya tum mera intezar karogi..
Priya.. Marte damtak bas usse pehle ajana agar mera pariwar kisi or se meri sadi karne ki kosis karegi to main tumhara intezar mandap pe jane tak karungi agar tum nahi aye to mai wohi meri jaan chali jayegi ...
Main.. Mai aisa nahi hone dunga mai jarur ayunga i love you priya ….
Priya.. I love you too ..
Fir mai usse kuch our bate kar usko mohalle me bapas chod mai chala gaya. .

ghar me apne kapde or saman ma papa ki tasbir or unke kuch yade le ke chal pada ...


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Station me pahuch jo first delhi ka train tha usme baith gaya ..
Jaise jaise train age badh rahi thi mere ankhome ashun ki dhar behne lagi main ne khud ko samhala or train pe apni seat pe baith gaya or apni ankhe band kar liya or sochne laga kya karunga delhi me...
Mujge kuch samajh me nahi araha tha kya se kya ho gaya kuch mahine tak mai ek sadharan sa ladka tha jiska sirf ek lakhs tha padhai karna writer banna…
or abb wo ladka kaha gayab ho gaya or ek anath bachha chal pada apna jivan banane or kisiko pane ke sapne ko liye ..
Sochte sochte kab rat ho gayi pata hi nahi chala jab mera dhyan tuta to mere baju me ek ladki baithi hui thi dekhne ma achhi khasi thi ...
Bhara pura badan tha gora rang yellow dress me kamal lag rahi thi uske sath me uski ma lag rahi thi ...
Maine ek bar dono ko dekha fir apni ankhe band karli sayad ankh lag gayi hogi...
Kuch shor se meri nind tuti to dekha do ladke ladki ko ched rahe the us ladki ki ma unko dhamka rahi thi

magar wo chichore ladke the ki manne ko taiyar nahi the . .
L ma .. Tum log jate ho ya mai police bulayu ..
Ladka .. Hay hay anji ky mast mal paida ki hai aaj ke rat ke liye man jao maza ajayega ...
L ma .. Apni ma se puch lena kutto jao yaha se nahi to...
Ladka .. Oye madam kya chij hai tu teri ma bhi bahut garam hai ..
Aab mujhse raha nahi gaya ..
Main khada ho gaya fir bola ..
Main.. Agar tum log aab nahi gaye to tumko train se bahar fek dunga..
Ladka .. Oye hero baith ja tu bhi maza karlio...
Maine ek mukka usko mara uske face pe wo wohi baith gaya jabda pakad ke ..
Main...Dusre se tumko bhi chahiye kya ya ja rahe ho yahase ..
Dono chale gaye sayad mera gussa dekh unki fat gayi thi unhone socha nahi hoga koi aise react karega ….
Ab tak ladki sehmi hui baithi thi uske ankhome ashun the ...
L ma .. Thank you beta help ke liye aaj kal ye sab bahut badh gaya hai.
Main.. Ab app shanti se baith jaye wo bapas nahi ane wale ..
L mom .. Thanks beta tum kaha tak ja rahe ho .
Main.. Pata nahi train delhi ja rahi hai...
Meri bat sunke dono ma beti mujhko dekhne lagi..
Ladki .. Sukriya app ne bahut help ki...
L ma.. Mai kuch samjhi nahi tum kaha ja rahe ho
Main.. Mujhe pata hai train delhi ja rahi hai lekin mai nahi janta mai kaha jayunga delhi me...
Mai delhi me kam dhundne ja raha hu pata nahi kaha mile mile bhi ke nahi..
L ma .. To tum rahoge kaha ...
Main.. Pata nahi sayad platform me jabtak job nahi milta fir agar kam mil gaya do koi room rent pe le lunga ...
Ladki .. Kya app platform pe rahenge ...
Main.. Ha sayad pata nahi..
L ma .. Agar bura na mano to kya hamare ghar chalna chahoge ...
Main.. Nahi app logo ko taklif hogi app tension na le jo bhi hoga dekha jayega ...
L mom .. Please beta chalo hamare sath hamare gharme sirf ham ma beti hi rahte hai koi or nahi koi problem nahi hogi ...
Main.. Log bate banane lagenge mai aisehi thik hu mai kisipe bojh nahi banna chahta ...
L mom .. Beta bojh kaisa tumko jab job mil jaye hame khane rehne ka de dena ...
Aab mai kya kehta offer achha tha socha khone ko to kuch hai nahi to bas abb pana hai suru to kahi se karna hi hai yahi se sahi..
L mom .. Beta jada socho mat ha keh do ...
Main.. Thik hai anty mai chalunga ...
L mom.. Beta tumhara nam kya hai ...
Main.. Mera nam pintu karmakar hai ...
L mom.. Mera nam somlata hai ye meri beri sona ..
Tumne kuch khaya kab se train me baithe ho sona beta tifin kholo khana kha lete hai rat kafi ho gayi hai ...
Sona ne bag se tifin nikala fir usko tin pepper me nikala or ek mujhko diya

main bhi bhukha tha to mana nahi kiya or khane laga...
Puri sabji thi khana achha tha khate khate mujhe ma ki yaad ek bar firse agayi mere anshu nikal aye jo sona ne dekh liya ..
Sona .. App ro kiu rahe hai khana achha nahi hai kya ya mirchi jada jai ..
Main.. Nahi aisi koi bat nahi ma ki yad agayi ..
Jab tak jinda thi bahut achha roj mere liyr khana banati thi aab to bas main hu jo bhi kachha pakka ban jata tha kha leta tha...
Meri bat sun ke sona ke bhi ashun agaye ye dekh mai bola...
Main.. Ohh sorry mai bhi kya bate leke baith gaya fir khane laga ..
Rat kafi ho gayi thi train shubha 10 baje hi pahuchne wali thi...
Main.. App dono uper so jayiye mai niche hu agar koi problem hui to mujhe utha dijiye ga ...
Somlata.. Beta mai bhi niche so jati hu sona uper so jayegi ...
Main.. Agar use akele dar laga to isiliye kah raha tha ...
Meri bat sun dono uper ke births pe chadh gayi or so gayi mai bhi niche so gaya ...
Rat ke kuch 2:30 ho rahe the ke koi mujhe utha ne laga
main ne dekha to wo sona thi ...
Main.. Kya hua tumhe nind nahi aa rahi ...
Sona .. Woo mujhe wo mujhe . .
Main samajh gaya sona toilet jana chahti thi mai uth ke baith gaya fir khada hoke kaha ...
Main.. Chalo .. Wobhi bina bole mere sath chal padi uska chehra saram se sujh gaya tha ...
Usko toilet ke pass pahucha kar mai bahar hi khada raha ...
Mujhko ander se seee ki siti ki awaj ane lagi ye mere liye pehla experience tha..
kisi ladki ko toilet ki awaj sunne ka mujhe jiggaaa hui ki wi citi kiu baja rahi hai..
Kuch hi der me jab wo bahar ayi to uski najar mujhse takrai usne sarma kar najre niche jhuka li..
Main apni jiggasa ko rok nahi paya or puch liya ..
Main.. Tum jab tailet me thi to citi kiu baja rahi thi ...
Mere is sawal se uska chehra saram se lal tamarar ho gaye usne mujhko koi jawab nahi diya or jane lagi to main ne fir pucha
Main.. Batao na sona ye tum toilet me citi kiu baja rahi thi
Ab uska hal bura ho gaya tha firbhi usne bade saram se kaha...
Sona.. Wo mai city nahi baja rahi thi woo tooo woo to jab ladki woo karti hai to wo wo hota hai..
Mai uski bat samajh gaya ab mujhe apni bebukufi pe saram arahi thi ...
Main.. Sorry sona mujhe pata nahi thi utsukta me puch baitha...
Sona sarma kar bhag gayi abb mai bhi use is bare me kuch mahi puch na chahta tha to mai apni barth le ake let gaya ...
Sona uper se bar bar mujhko hi dekh rahi thi uske ankhome ajeeb si bat thi jo mai samajh nahi pa raha tha ...
Kuch hi der meujhe nind agayi ...

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Subha 6 baje aunty ne mujhe uthaya main ne sekha dono hi uth chuki thi fresh bhi ho gayi thi..
Mai utha or toilet se fresh ho ke aya dono baithe bahar ko dekh rahi thi ...
Train station pe ruki hui thi ..
Main.. Aunty kuch cahiye kya boliye mai le ata hu ..
Slata.. Nahi beta bas chai dekh rahi thi lo agai ohh bhaiya ohhh bhaiya 3 chai dena ...
Fir unhone 3 chai li hamne chai piya to meri najar sona pe gayi jo bar bar mujhko dekh rahi thi..
Rat wali batse to abb mai bhi sarmindagi mahsus karne laga ...
Time beet ta gaya or ham delhi pahuch gaye ham utar gaye tab aunty ne kaha ...
Slata..Chalo beta hame bus pakadni hai ham station se bahar agaye main aunty ko follow kar raha tha sona piche reh ja rahi thi to mai ne uska hath pakad liya usko apne sath le jane laga ...
Kuch hi der me hame bus mil gayi lekin bus khacha khach ful thi jaise taise ham chadh gaye ...
Sona bahut uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi ...
Main.. Sona thik to ho na koi problem ho rahi hai kya ...
Sona .. Nahi bas bhid jada hai ..
Mai uske age agaya veed ke karan wo mujhse sine se chipak gayi hamare bich hawake gujarne ka bhi jagah nahi tha...
Uske kamsin chatiya mere sine me gad rahi thi jaise jaise bus chal rahi thi ham dono hil rahe the...
Mujhe mehsus ho raha tha uske nippals hard ho gaye hai ab wo time hi aisa tha ke mai kuch kar nahi pa raha tha ...
Uski chatiya mere sine ae ragad kha rahi thi main ne dekha uski ankhone lal dore tairne lage
uske is tarah mere karib hone se mera pappu bhi garam hone laga or khada hoke uski chut ke thik uper dhakka dene laga ...
Uski sansen tezz hone lagi usne ankhe band kar liya or kuch panch minat asehi rehne ke bad wo halke halke kapne lagi ..
Aab mujhe samajh nahi araha tha ke usko kya hua to main ne pucha . .
Main.. Sona kya hua kaap kiu rahi ho .. Sona kuch na boli or ankhe band kiye huye hi tez shashen lene lagi….
Maine fir pucha .. Sona kya hua ...
Sona ne badi muskil se mujhko dekha fir sarmakar apni ankhe niche kar li or kaha...
Sona.. Kuch nahi ...
Tabhi aunty ne hame pukara wo gate ke taraf badh rahi thi ...
Ham dono bhi gate ke raraf badhne lage badi muskil se ham gate ke pass pahuche jab bus ruki aunty uter gayi ham bhi unke piche uter gaye...
Ham chalne lage lekin sona ko chalne me problen ho rahi thi ...
Main.. Kya hya sona aise kiu chal rahi ho jaldi chal dekho tumhari ma age nikal rahi hai ...
Sona .. Problem hai plese kya ham riksha karle ...
Uski bat sunke maine bhi ek riksha ko pukar ke bula liya or aunty ko bhi pukar ke bula liya….
Tino riksha me baith gaye unka ghar jada dur nahi thi bas tin gali chod ke hi tha ham 2 minut me unke ghar ke age ruke ...
Aunty or sona ander chali gayi or mai ne riksha ka bhada diya or chal pada ander ...
Ghar chota tha magar mere ghar se behter tha 4 room the ek kichen bathtoom sab tha mai wohi baranda me ek kurshi pe baith gaya ...
Slata.. Bete tum is kamre me apna saman rakhlo aaj se ye tumhara kamra hai iske sath wala sona ka fir mera hai wo storeroom hai.. .
Mai bhi chal pada kamre me room bahut hi achha tha bed do logo ke liye kafi tha room me kuch kas nahi tha bas rk choti si almari thi or bed tha ...
Main ne saman almari me rakha or kapde badal ke room me bed pe let gaya...
Sona room me ake pehle apne kapde badle panty puri gili thi bas me wo buri tarah jhad chuki thi...
Sona .. Budhu kahika kal se leke 3 bar gili kar diya ek bhar to jhad bhi gayi firvi puchta hai koi problrm to nahi or uska pappu kitna bada tha haye...
Sona yehi sab sochte sochte bed pe let gayi or firse ek bar gili ho gayi..
Edhar slata bhi pintu ke bare me soch rahi thi...



S lata.. Kya ladka hai jawa mard hai isko patana padega bahut din ho gaye lund nahi liya koi agar isko pata liya to parmanent lund mil jayega...
Kiu na sona ko age kardu wo bhi jawan hai kisi se na kisise chudwaye gi isise suruwat kiu na kare
or waise bhi sona jaisi ladki ko konsa ladka nahi chodna chahega...
S lata uth ke sona ke room me chali gayi ...
S lata.. Beti sona ek bat karni thi tujhse ...
Sona.. Ha ma bolo ..
S lata.. Beta tu bhi jawan ho gayi thi koi ladka dekha hai ya nahi..
Sona.. Kya ma ap bhi mai kaha ladka dhundne jayungi ...
S lata.. Beta ye pintu kaisa laga tujhko ...
Sona.. Ma achha hai lekin thoda budhu hai ...
S lata.. Budhu hai tabhi to keh rahi hu tu abhi kuwari hai kabhi na kabhi kisi na kisise chudwaye gi kiu na issi se suru karle...
Ladka vola hai ham dono moj karenge ...
Sona .. Ma mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi aaj uske karan mai bus me jhad gayi hu iska lund bhi kafi bada hai ….
S Lata.. Tune kab dekha
Sona .. Dekha nahi mehsus kiya bas me iska pappu khada ho gaya tha or mere chut ke uper dhakke mar raha tha ..m
S lata.. Beti kuch bhi kar iska lund mujhe chahiye ...
Sona .. App chinta mat karo ma mai isko PAta ke hi rahungi ...
Kuch der me sona mere kamre me ayi ….
Sona .. Pintu kya ham bat kar sakte hai ...
Main .. Ha kiu nahi . ..
Sona .. Apne aaj kya kiya mallum hai na...
Main.. Main ne kya kiya ...
Sona.. Bus me aapke karan mai pehli bar jhad gayi wo bhi public place ne ...
Main.. Ye sab tum kya keh rahi ho ….
Sona.. Mai sahi keh rahi hu app pure bas ke safar me apne pappu se meri chut pe dhakke marte rahe...
Meri to hosh hi ud gaye jo ladki kal itna sarma rahi tji aaj lund chut ki bat etni asani se keh rahi hai ...
Sona .. Aapne meri chut me agg laga di hai or usse bujhao ge bhi aap...
Aaj ratko mai apka intezar karungi mere room me agar aap nahi aye to mai ajayungi ..
Main.. Ye sab kya keh rahi ho mai tumhare sath ye sab kaise kar sakta hu ...
Sona.. Kiu nahi kar sakte kya me jawan nahi khubsurat nahi bas ab aur bahana nahi rat ko ajana...
Aab to mai jaise kuch bolne layak nahi raha mai ye sab nahi karna chahta tha mere dil me sirf priya hi basi hui thi ..
Duniya ko pyar nahi dikhta bas hawas hi dikhta hai yahi sab sochte huye maine faisla kiya

mai sona ko mana kar dunga agar nahi mani to mai ghar chod dunga fir meri kismat jaha le jaye lekin mai priya ko dhoka nahi dunga
Kuch hi der me lunch lag gaya main ne khamosi se lunch kiya sona bar bar mujhe dekh rahi thi

sayad mujhko rijha rahi thi apni adao se lekin main ne koi dhayan nahi diya
Jaise taise din beet gaya rat ho gai main ne jaan bujhke rat ke khane ke bad jaldi apne kamre me jake gate lock kar sone laga ...
Firvi nind mujhe nahi arahi thi mai bas yahi soch raha tha itni sundar ladki jo train me itna sharma rahi thi achhanak aise kaise ban gayi ...
Rat ke koi 12 baj rahe the ki mere room pe dastak hui mai jaga hi tha firvi mai ne room nahi khola ...
Fir mujhko sona ki awaj ayi ...
Sona.. Pintu ji darwaja kholiye please .
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hello dosto ab se story ko main is thread pe continue karunga jaise us thread pe apsab ka support mila asha karta hu yaha bhi milega
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