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Talking Oru Thai Maganin Kama Porattum (Different Version)


Walter White, you did an amazing job but seems like you decided on the story ending and screwed it up or you were aiming to write a soft porn. Anyways this is not to offend you just giving it a try.

Part 0: You can stop reading anywhere in the 3/4 of the "Oru Thai Maganin Paasa Porattum" and continue to this story.

Part 1:
Oru naal shooting mudinju Bhuvana, kumar veetil vittuvittu Hemavum kannanum veeturku vandhu kondu irundhaargal, angae unni wait panni kondu irundhaan kannanai kooti sella. Aanaal kannanukku poga manamae illai, ennada kaikku ettiyadhu vaai ettavillaiyae endru.
Kannan Hemakku bye solli vittu Unniyum kannanum veeturkku kelambinaar. Kanna pogum vali ellam edho yosainaiyil irundhaan. Veetukku sendravudan rendu perum sarakku mattrum side dish edutthu vaitthukkondu velaiyai arambithanar.

Eni Kannanin Attam arambhum......

Kannan: Unni sir Indha padathukku Hema amma oru periya impact aa kondu vara mataranga.
Unni: Dai Kanna edhu "Oru Thai Maganin Paasa Porattum" dhanae edhu podhum daa endran.
Kannan: Sir naan solluvadhai kaetta endha padatha vera levelku kondu poidalam.
Unni: Ennada sollara puriyalae endran
Kannann: Naan oru arumaiyana plan vechurukane sir, adha neenga kaetta namma onna execute panna endha padathoda titlea "Oru Thai Maganin Kama Porattum" nae pera maatidalam.
Unni: Ennada sollara ?
Kannan: Sir enimae naan sollaradha appudiyae Hema amma kitta sollunga and avangala ennoda serndhu full involvement oda nadikka sollunga, appadi panna, namma Bhuvana Kumara directaae panna venam avangalae ultimate perform panniduvaanga.
Eppadiyae oru 2 hrs pesi kondu sarakkai aditthu kondu uranga sendranar.
Maru naal kaalai Unni Hemakku call panni Kannan Planai appdiyae thannudaiya plan maari sonnan, adharkku Hemavum oru chinna adhirchi matrum hesitation udan othu kondaal. Maelum Unni indru shooting illai endrum adhai Bhuvana edam Hemavai solli vida sonnan. Kannan angu 10 manikku vandhu viduvaan endrum kurinaan

Kannan nandraga kulitthu vittu Hema veettukku porapattan. Angu Hema avanukkuaga kaathu kondu irundhaal. Avan vandhavudan avanidam, Unni sir edhavadhu sonnara unnidam nu kaettal, Kannano illaiayae, avar ennai unga veetukku poga sonnar avaludhan endran.
Hema: Namma ippa ennaku dress edukka konjam velila poganum
Kannan: OK amma pogalam endran.
Hema kulittu ready aagi vandhaal. Oru alagana melliya saree eduppuku keela thoppul theriyum padi katti irundhaal. Kannanukku edhai kandadhum thann uruppu elundhu nikka thodangiyadhu, avan in panni irundha sattaiyai veliyae edutthu vittu poolai maraithaan.
Hemavum Kannanum sila kadaigal eari irangi sila dress kalai vaangi kondanar.
Kannan: Amma yarukkuma endha dresslam endra kaettan
Hema: Dai edhula ennaku konjam dress meedhi ellam Bhuvana auntyku daa endral.
Shopping mudinju veedu vandhu saera 4 hrs aagi vida vandha vudan Hema Bhuvanaku call poattu indru shooting illayam nee eanne engae vara koodadhu endraal.
Bhuvanum: OK dee kandippa varane endru avalum Kumar um Hema veetukku kelambi sendranar.

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Part 2:
Hema veetil, Hema marubadiyum kulikka sendral, Kannan hallil wait panni kondu irundhaan. oru 30 mins mael aagiyum Hema vara villai, evanukku bore adika thodangiyadhu, Kannan Unni sir namma sonnan plan aa correct aa sonnara illa mappula ellathuyum marandhutaara nu yosithu kondu irundhaan. appo Hema amma kulitthu mudithu vittu velilyae alaga light make up lam poattu kondu vandhaal.
Kannan: Amma ennama alaga make up pottunu adhuvum skirt pottunu vandhurukeenganu kaettan.
Hema: Amada Kanna rombha vaegudhu adhan konjam free ya irukalam nu skirt potundane. Skirt ok vaa irukka ?
Kannan: Amma unga size ku rombha sooper college ponnu maariyae irukeenganu sonnan, aana konjam kuttiyae irukae nu sonnan.
Hema: Amada edhan erundhadhu kadaiyula ! Mutty varaikkum dhan kaettane aana avankitta irundhadhu konjam thodai varai dhan varudhu endraal.
Kannan: Amma edhuvum nalla alaga dhan maa irukku, unga valai thandu kaala kaatudhu nu sonnan
Hemavum avanai paarthu punnagaithaal.
Veliyil car varum satham kaettadhu, Kannan poi paarthaan, angae Bhuvanavum Kumarum vandhurundargal. Avargalai ullae kooti kondu vandhaan.
Kannanum Kumarum video games vilayada room kulla sendru vittanar.
Bhuvana: Ullae vandhavudan, Hemavai paarthu adhirndhaal, avalidam ennadi skirt poturukka, adhuvum evaluvu kuttiya ?
Hema: Ennadi sollara edhu enna kutty nalla dhanae irukku endral?
Bhuvana: Illadi vayasu paiyan veetula vechundu eppadi kuttiya poturukkayae adhan kaettane.
Hema: Ennadi sollara unnaku theriyadha Kannanum naanum evaluvu anniyonyam nu. Edhellam avan kandukka kooda maatan dee.
Bhuvana: Ennamo podi Kumar lam naan eppadi dress panradha paartha enna pannuvan theriyala ?!
Hema: Dinner samaithhu kondu irundhaal, Bhuvanavum avalukku help seidhu kondu irundhaal.
Hema ingu angu nadandhu kondu irukkayil, kuninju paathram edukkum podhellam Bhuvanavin kannil aval ulladai aniyadhadhu kannil pattadhu. Hemavin alagaga shave panna pundaiyum kannil pattadhu.
Ippadiyae pesi kondu irukaiyil, Kannan velilaye vandhu Hemavidum, Amma pasikudhumaa paal kudumaa endru kulandhai pole kenjinaan.
Hema: Bhuvana aunty lam vandhurukaanga eppalam paal thara mudiyadhu, adhu mattum illama naan night sapadu samachunu irukane, ippa time illanu.
Bhuvana: Ennadi oru tumbler paal kudukaa eppadi thitara nee endru Bhuvanavae fridge kitta poi paal sombai edukka ponaal.
Hema: Bhuvana avan kaetkara paal adhu illa, avanukku enn kitta kudikanum endru casualaga sonnal.
Bhuvana: Adhirndhu thirumbi paarthu enna solvadhu endru theriyamal thiru thiru endru mulithaal. Bhuvanavin manam alaipaya aval pundaiyum koosiyadhu.
Bhuvana: Naan samayal parthukarane dee ellam kodhikudhu perusa onnum illa nee poittu vaa nu sonnal.
Hema: Vaada saniyanae endru roomukul kooti sendral.
Edhae kanda Bhuvanavukku idhayam nejukku vandhu sendradhu
Avargal ullae poi sila nimidangalil, melliya munagum satham varuvadhu Bhuvanavin kaadhil etta, avalin aarvam thoonda. Maedhuvaga kadhavin arugil sendru parthal.
Kadhavu muludhaga mooda padamal irukka ulla etti paarthaal. Aval kanda kaatchiyaal aval idayam vaai valiyaga veliyae vandhu vilindhidum poal irundhadhu. Bhuvana than kaali randaiyum erukki kondaal. Appadi ennathan nadakudhu ulla ???
Hema ninnu kondu avalin edathu kaalai kattilin mael vaithu kondu irukka, Kannan aval keel amarndhu aval pundaiyai chappi chappi paal kuditthu kondu irundhaan. Hema mei marandhirundhal, vaalkaiyul mudhal murai oruvan than penmaiyil vaai vaitthu sappuduvadhu edhuvae mudhal murai. Hema kannai moodi kondu aval kaiyal Kannan thalai mudiyai koadhi vittu kondu irundhaal. Kannan aval pundaiyin ull than naakai vittu vittu uduthan.
Bhuvana edhellam thannai ariyamal meimarandhu paarthu kondu irukaiyil sadaraendru Hema kannai thorakka Bhuvanavum Hemavin parvaiyum modhi kondadhu. Hema avalin oru kaiyai neeti Bhuvanavai ullae alaithal. Naai biscuitai vaitthu koopitaal eppadi poghumo adhu pola avalagavae nadandhu ullae ponaal. Hemavidam sendru nindral, Hema avalai arugil iluthu aval kaiyai Kannan thalai meedhu vaiythu mudiyai koadhi vidum padi sonnal. Bhuvanavum Kannan thalai meedhu kaiyai vaittu avan thalaiya koadhi vittu kondu adhae neram avan thalaikku alutham kudutthu Hema vim penmaiyai nadra aluthi sappum padi seidhaal. Bhuvanavum Hemavin paarvaiyum orutharai oruthar paarthu kondu irukka, avar mugangal arukil vandhu udhadugal ondrai ondru muthamittu thudithadhu. Iranduperum edhalgalai suvaikka thodanginaargal. Bhuvanin oru kai Kannan thalai koadhi vittu kondu irukka, Hemavum bhuvanavum aaldha mutham parimari kondu irundhargal.
Hema Bhuvanavin idhalai viduvitthadhum Kannanai noattum vittal, avan kandru kutti pasuvin madiyai mutti mutti paal kudipadhu poal Hemavi pundaiyai aval mutti mutti penmaiyai urinji kuditthu kondu irundhaan. Hemavin pundai idhalai pirithu eduthu sappi kondu irundhaan. Hemavin pundai alakaga shave seiya pattirundhadhu. Andha katchiyai paarkavae migavum punidhamaga irundhadhu, Thayin penmaiyai magan sappi kondu irupadhu oru vidhamana "than magan thannakku mattumdhan" endra unarchiyai urvakiyadhu. Tidhirendru pakathu roomil Kumar erukiraan, edhai paarthaal sangadamaga aagividum endru roomai vittu sadar endru veliyae sendral, kadhavai saarthi kondu.
Pakathu roomil avan innum vilyadi kondu irukka, eval Kumar veetukku pogalam vaa endral, evan irumaa Kannan varatum ennum rendu games vilayadittu varane maa endran. Evalukku rombha dharma sangadamaga poi kondu irukka, Hema aval roomai vittu veliyae vandhaal.
Hema: Ennadi adhu kulla kelambanum nu tudikara, nee irundhu dinner sapittu podi adhukku dhana naan avasara avasarama panninu irukkane.
Bhuvana: Illadi nee ..... appadinu mennu mulinginaal....
Hema: irudi unnaku oru dress vangi irukane adha katarane nu ullae sendral. Hema Ullae poi aval vangi vandha dressil siladhai pirithu edutthu vaitthu ondrai veliyil kondu vandhaal.
Bhuvana: Adhai piritthu paarka, Aacharyathudan, ennadi skirt vaangi irukka ? Naan skirt lam poda maatane dee !
Hema: Loosu edhu veetula potukka dhaan dee velila illa.
Bhuvanum arai manadhudan vaangi kondaal. Piragu avargal nadandha matterai pattri pesavae illai, aanal Bhuvanuvukku ippadi avargal seidhu kondu irukkum podhu ullae sendru vittomae endrum avargalin punidhamana uravil namma kalangathai kondu vandhu vittomae endru migavum varundhinaal.
Night dinnerai mudithu kondu Kumarum Bhuvanum kelambi veedu vandu serndhanar. Aval kattilil utkarndhu yosithu kondu irundhaal cha namma poludhu eppadi aagi vitadhae indru. Kumar Hallil TV parthu kondu irundhaan.
Avallukku appodhu Hemavidam erundhu phone vandhadhu....
Bhuvana: Hello Solludi
Hema: Ennadi veedu poi serndhutaya ?
Bhuvana: Vandhutane dee, Kumar TV parkaraan naan bed room utkarndhu irukane dee.
Hema: Bedroomla utkarndhu enna panninu irukka ?
Bhuvana: Onnum illadi......... endru eluthaal
Hema: Ennadi elukkara ? solludi enna panranu
Bhuvana: Illadi inniku nadandha visayatha nenaichu.......
Hema: Eadhu, namma kiss panna matteraa ?
Bhuvana: hhmm, edhukku munnadi oru ponna kooda kiss pannadhae illa adhuvum ennoru aambalayoda irukkum podhu, nenaichalae romba asingama irukku di
Hema: Eaaiiiii, adhu onnum ennoruthan illa, enn magan ! Enn maganukku naan paal kuduthunu irundhane nee ulla vandhuttaa avaladhan.
Bhuvana: Ennadi evaluvu easyaa sollara ?
Hema: Eaai loosu , kannan 10 vayasula irundhu paal kudikaran dee, edhu enna periya matter maari sollara ?
Bhuvana: Maarbula kudikiradhu vera dee, aana unn magan unnoda pennuruppai nakki, chappi, mutti mutti kudichinu irundhaanae dee.
Hema: Amadee nee mutti mutti nu sollum podhu ennaku mudhal mudhal nadandha sambavam niyabagam varudhu. Oru 10 vayasu varaikkum Marbula dhan dee kudipaan, aana adhu konja naalula ninnu pochu.
Bhuvana: Appurum eppadi avan........... arambhichaan ?
Hema: Avan school leave podhu naanga rendu perum enga gramathukku poi irundhome, anga naanga Thopula nadadhunu irukkum podhu oru kannu kitti odi vandu pasu maadu kitta paal kudichadhu, Kannan ennama pannudhu kaettan, naan paal kudukidhu daanu sonnane. oh apadiyae solli vittutan.
Night eppavum pola paal kaettan appaellam ennaku onnum perusa varadha kaalam aana summa mulaiya sappinu irupaan. Annikum adhu pola sappinu irundhaan. onnum varamal irukka ala thodanginan, ennada edhukku alara nu avana samadhana panna try pannane aana aludhunae irundhaan. Appurum avanae amma andha kannu kutti pasu maadu kitta kudikudhae adhu maari kudikarane maa sonnan. Dai adhana daa panninu irukka, ammavoda marpula dhana kudikara nu sonnane. Avan adhu illama maadukku pinnang kaal naduvuladhan kannu kutti mutti mutti kudichadhunu solli naanum angadhan kudipane nu adam pidichaan. Correct aa appa bedroomla irundha TVla Senbagamae Senbagamae paatu odinu irundhadhu adhulayum adhu maari scene vera.
Hema: Eru da konjam nu naan poi dress kelatittu vandhane, avan ennai maadu maari nikka solli, chinna pilaiya irukardhunala avanal irandu pinn kaalukkum naduvula poga mudindhadhu. Avanum kannu kutti maari ninnunu enn pundaiyai sappa thodanginaan, nadu naduvil enn pundaiyai mutti mutti pundai paruppai sappinaan, konja nerathul nalla unarchi vandhu naan leak pannane ellathuyum appadiyae full nakki nakki oru thuli vidama kudichutaan. Ennaku sorgathula paraka maari erundhadhu, enn magan ennidam vagi (vagina) paal kudipathu oru vidha enam puriyadha nerukkathai oru vaakiyadhu, adhai anubavichadhan theriyum sonna puriyadhu.
Andru mudhal kitta thatta ella naalum avan enn vagiyai sappamal irundhadhu illai.

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superb bro..just like u, everyone thought the story's ending was disappointing. u r doing a great job now. pls continue

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I don't think I screwed it up. Actually it was a preplanned one. If it ended with a hackneyed mother son copulation(despite all incest stories ends like this), then tell me, what fucking difference does my story make?

actually it ain't an incest story, I actually wanted to wrote it like an auteur who made his' arthouse flick. Since both are unaware of their sexual innuendos, Innocence plays the major part. I made the two main characters doing their doodlebees in the act of innocence. until the adultered cine producer tried to fuck their minds.

what happens in the end? Love wins over lust. If you guys expected a regular incest story(loads and loads of writers are here), then it's not for you. I'm happy you're trying to make a difference here!!!??(don't fuck it up ). let's see, how it is gonna end.

one more suggestion, try to write in tamil font. Otherwise it will go unnoticed(already it is ) Good Luck!!!
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