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Old 8th March 2018
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Dear,writer...
Sub: Update dene ke liyeRequest...
Namaskar writer sir .
hamne aap ki story ko pada .
Aap story ko acha likhte ho par kya he na kiaap jo update ek do months/weeks/days pardete ho ya yu kahoki story start to kar dete ho or aada adhura rakhte ho usme maza nahi aata....
Kya he na kihar readers yahi soch ta haiki story ko pura pada jai taki usme hame jyada ham luft utha sake....
Story aap start to karte ho orfir bag jate ho to hamara dil tut jata hai...
Har readers puri story padna chahta hai.
Hame pata hai aap kibi ek alag life hai. Har wakt aap story hinahi likhte honge. Par aap ne start kiya to khatam bi aap hi karo ge na .
Aadi story koi dusra thodi na aayega likhne ke liye..
Aap khudke liyelikhte ho ya dusro ko manoranjan deneke liye .
Ham bass itna kahenge kibhai ho sake to hamare liye bi time nikalo . Agar story likhne ka mud hi nahi ya koi idea nahi mil raha to start hi kyo kiya....
Bhai mere hamarabi ek dil he jab aadaadhura story padte hai to dil dukhta hai....
Aagar healthproblems hai...to ham sabi readers duwa karege ki aap jald se jald thik ho jav....or firse story start kro.....
Bhai bura lage to SORRY.......
Par aagar jan buj kar agar band kiya hai to ye bahut hiburi bat hai....
Aap dil se likho ham dil se padenge parye aake gayab hone mekya rakha hai....
XOSSIP pe ahuri story s kikami nahi hai..... usme ek or samil samaj lenge.... hahahahaha......
Koi bi writers agar likh ta haito vo khud ke liye nahi balki aapni khubi writing skillsko readers ke liye likh ta haitaki koi uski story ko sarahe uski tarif kare protsahit kare....
Bhai mere agar aapne ye mera messages pada ho tokoi bi positive ya negative replay jarur dena taki hame pata chale kiwriter hamare bareme kya soch ta hai oraap ki rai bi jansake....
Ha mante haiki ham aap logo ko negative ya positive dono tarah ke reviews dete hai....
Par bhai mere har writer chahta hai kikoi uski story ko pade or apni rai masavara kare taki vo bi utsah se or naye tarike se story likh sake....
Had hoti haiyar jab koi kai dino tak na dikhai de...
Aap hi sochiye jab koi aap ko jisse chahat ho or kai din mahino tak aap se bat na kare na mile to aap ko kaisa lagega.....
Bhai mere readers ki sulganese acha hai... usko story start karke thanda kro.....
Bura laga ho to SORRY........
Or ek bat Kabi kabi readers ye tak bul jata haiki story me kahatak pohche ....
Story me chalkya raha hai.....
Consa character kiskesath tha ya yu kahoki story ke character ko hi bull jata hai..ki story me kon kon hai.....
Yar meto story bi bull jata hu ki story start kahase huithi.....
Kabi kabar update dekhke lagta haiyar yaha ho kya raha hai..... aap log story ko hi puri ki puri suspension me rakh dete ho......
aap ka ek chahne vala.....
BHAI YE KAUN MAHAN INSAN HAI JO ACCHI BHALI CHALTI STORY PE GANDH MARANE AA GAYA

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